FF- Tere Naam Last Part pg. 15 - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks a lot for the comments ppl. i really appreciate it. keep the replies coming 😆 😆

PART 3-

Precap- Bani meets Jai at the mandir where Jai finds out that Ganga is Bani's daughter.

Ganga and Bani were at home getting ready to go to sleep.
Ganga: "Mama, Khadoos Uncle aapko jaante hai? Unko aapka naam kaise patha? Aur D Uncle ka naam kaisa patha?"
Bani: "Beta, main unkai office mein kaam karti hoon. Aur tumara Khadoos Uncle tumara D Uncle se milae thae. Shaad unko laga ki Daksh merae pati hai."
Ganga: "Oh… tekh hai. Mama mein kal ko Vidya ke saath play date banai hai. Kya mein jaa sakti hu?"
Bani: "Zaroor beta."
Ganga; "YAY! MAMA YOU'RE THE BEST!"
Bani laughs.
Ganga: "Kya aap mujhe chor bhi sakti hu Vidya ke ghar?"
The smile on Bani's face goes away. She doesn't want another encounter with Jai.
Bani: "Nahi beta."
Ganga: "Please, mama. Mein waha jaongi kaisa. Kal ko tho aapko chuti bhi hai kaam se. Please, please, please."
Bani: "Teek hai beta. Main tumhe chor aoungi. What time do you want to go?"
Ganga: "10 o'clock."
Bani: "Teek hai."
Ganga: "Thank you mama!"
Ganga gives Bani a quick peck on the cheek and scurries away leaving Bani in her thoughts.

(i noe thers not a lot of action in this part but i promise there will be action in the next couple of parts.)
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Posted: 17 years ago
#22
heyyyy thats short
plz cont soon
waiting for JB encounter
Niroo thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
that is not.. cooll
i want another..
update.
likle.. today.
itself.
nir crying 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
#24
great part... o man.. cant wait for the next part... wonder wat jai is gonna say to bani now...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#25
hey,

just read all the 3 parts. too good. ganga is so cute.

pls continue soon.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#26
haila

this isnt cool

that was short

u have to cont soon!

guli has a best friend

its called mr. danda!!

do u wanna meet em? 😆 😆 j/k

dont run away!!!! 😆


plz cont soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wah meri jaan!! i loved it..its awesome ...i am tellin u i wish KS would be more like ur ff less rona dona n more action n so ur ff is definlty not boring but one thing i must say u writing such awesome ff n u make it only a paragraph long?? wats wrong with u? u need to make it longer like maybe a page long lolz..but ya i loved it keep up the gud work am so proud of u n this doesnt seem like ur first ff at all. n i want an update ASAP

cheers

isha
Edited by lil_isha15 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#28
Hey wonderful part

cant wait for j&b to meet again 😆

plz update soon

Taj
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanx for ur comments. the support of u ppl is what keeps me going on. otherwise i would have given up on kasam se a longgggg time ago. i h8 this blood cancer twist. sux like crap. lol
btw im sry yesterday's post was so short. ill try to post two updates today. heres the first one.

PART 4-

Precap- Ganga makes Bani agree to taking her on a play date with Vidya.

Ganga: "Mama, jaldi karo. Mein late hojoungi aur Vidya mujhse naaraaz hojaygi."
Ganga was frantically trying to get Bani to hurry up so that they could go to Walia Mansion.
Bani: "Tekh hai tekh hai baba. Mein aathi hoo."
Bani glances at Masi.
Bani: "Masi, mein chalti hoon."
Masi: Aapna kyal rakhna beti."
Bani: "Ji masi."
Ganga practically drags Bani out of their house and they get into the nearest taxi. As soon as they're in the taxi, Ganga starts talking about all the things that she's going to do at Vidya's house. Bani is meanwhile worried that she might meet Jai. She was hoping that he would have left for office by then.
Taxi driver: "Madam ji, hum ponch gai."
Bani pays the taxi driver and ushers Ganga out.
Ganga: "Chale mama?"
Bani: "Haa."
Ganga and Bani slowly walk up the paved driveway and stop to ring the door. Tony answers the door.
Tony: "Bani madam aap?"
Bani: "Ji"
Ganga notices that Tony knew her mother and called her by the different name. She decided to ask her mother about it after her play date.
Tony: "Aye aye. Andhar aye."
Bani and Ganga slowly walk in. Ganga sees Vidya running down the stairs and quickly is by her side.
Bani: "Ganga, mein abh chalti hu. Meera auntie ko taang maat karna."
Just then Meera appears.
Meera: "Arre Maithali Ji. Aise kaise aap jaa sakti hu. Abhi abhi tho aap ayi hai. Aapko thora dher ki liye rukhna hoga."
Bani: "Paar.."
Meera: "Paar vaar kuch ni. Aapko rukhna hoga and that's final."
Bani: "Tekh hai. Thora dher ki liye rukh jati hu."
Meera leads Bani to the sitting area and orders Tony to bring them some tea and snacks. Meanwhile, Jai is getting ready upstairs. He can't find his tie and calls Meera in anger.
Jai: "Meera! Kaha margayi hu tum? Jaldi aao. Mujhe meri tie nahi mildi."
Meera rushes upstairs and tells Bani that she'll make Bani meet Rano while she's attending to her husband.
CRASH!
Meera and Bani turn around to see Vidya on the floor with the pieces of a broken vase around her. She has a cut on her leg.
Meera: "Vidya! Tum teekh toh ho?"
Bani: "Ganga kahan hai?"
Ganga appears and stops in her tracks when she sees Vidya hurt.
Ganga: "Vidya?"
Vidya: "Hum hide-and-seek play kardhae thae aur mein ghirgee."
Jai: "MEERA!!"
Meera: "Maithali, aap zaro unko kehdungi ki Vidya ko choht ayi hai."
Bani: "Par…"
Meera: "Please Maithali Ji. Mujhe Vidya ki dekhbaal karna hai."
Bani: "…Ji…"
Meera walks away carrying Vidya. Ganga follows her. Bani, meanwhile, goes to Jai's room, a room she knew too well.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg omg.. plzz tell me nothing is going on between JM.. 🤢 .. plzzz.. i will be sooo 🤢 🤢 ... anywayz great part.. continue son yaar..

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