FF- Tere Naam Last Part pg. 15

Tere Naam

This ff is like Kasam Se minus the bullshit. I'm starting it off from the mandir episode where Bani finds out that Meera is Jai's second wife. I'm going to change things after that. After writing the first part I realized how hard it really is to write a FF. You people are very inspiring. By the way, this is my first FF so if it sucks please tell me. I don't want to bore u people. Also, pardon my Hindi. I'm Punjabi so I might speak a mix of both languages.Please post your replies, criticism, and feedback.

PART 1-

Bani: "Yeh to Jai hai!. Matlab Meera, Jai ki doosri patni hai. Lekin yeh kaisa ho sakta?"
Meera: "JAI! JAI! Dekho tumse kon milna aya hai!"
Bani quicky runs behind the pillar in order not to be seen. Meanwhile, Jai turns around to see Meera waving frantically at him.
Jai: "Kya hai Meera? Itna kyo chilati hu? Meraa tho kaan bhi dukhan lapge. Aab bas bhi karungi?!"
Meera gets nervous and quiets down.
Jai: "Ab yaha kari rahoongi, yah kuch bolongi bhi?!"
Meera: "Woh.. Woh.. Ganga ke maa apko milne chaathi thi"
Jai: "Tho kya hai woh?
Meera looks around to find that no one is around.
Meera: "Yahi tho thi woh. Tho kya chalegi?"
Jai rolls his eyes and gives a evil glare.
Jai: "Mai ab jou? Apparently woh yaha nahi hai"
Meera: "Ji, Ji aap jaye"
Ganga: "RUKHO! Meri maa waha hai"
Ganga quickly points behind the pillar where Bani's dupatta was sticking out.
Bani: "Yeh kya hogaya. Ganga ne tho mujhe dekhlaya. Ab main kya karoon?"
Ganga: "MAA! Ab aao bhi. Aap yaha kari kari kya dekhdi hai?"
Bani slowly starts to get out of her hiding place.

Part 1- pg. 1
2- pg. 2
3- pg. 3
4- pg. 4
5- pg. 5
6- pg. 6
7- pg. 8
8- pg. 9
9- pg. 10
10- pg. 11
11- pg. 12
12- pg. 14
13- pg. 15

What a place to stop! I really liked it. Please continue. 😃

nice intro..
continue soon.. waitting for the next update

hey.. great start.. cant wait for the next update.. awwnnn bani dont hide.. show ur self and tell JW that just how hes living with out u.. ur living w/o him as well..

nice start!!!! can't wait for more!!!! i would love to see ks w/o any BS too!!!! can't wait to read more!!!! pls continue sooon

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p.s. i am punjabi tooo.....if u need any help turning punjabi in hindi........i am only a pm away!!!! don't let tht hindeer you!!!!

Hey nice start

please continue soon

Taj

Hey wonderful start!!!
Cont. soon!!
Dont delay!!!!!

gr8 beginning... do kick Meera out of the pic as soon as possible...

do cont soon...

thanx a lot for all ur support. im going to try to post two updates today. once again thanx!