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Posted: 17 years ago
Masi: Aare Bahu… why are you looking at Jai… here take it and manage your home …apna pati aur apna sansar ko sambhal ne ka zimmedari ab teri hai…Bani took Masi's blessing and then Masi left the room…

Jigyasa was listening to everything from outside and was not at all happy about it as Masi took the keys from her and given it to Bani… she just stormed off to her room without saying anything… as this was bound to happen…

Chapter 24:

Jai: Aare Bani… kya hua… why are you looking so tensed…

Bani: Jai… I don't want to keep these keys with me… how can I keep them… these keys always belonged to Jigyasa Di… I can't just take them… what will she think of me…

Jai: smiling…Bani why are you getting tensed over such small issue sweetheart… and he hugged her and tried to calm her down… Bani please sweetheart ab apna mood kharab mat karo… so Bani …weren't we talking about taking rest…

Bani pulled away from Jai and looked at him angrily …

Jai pulled her again into his arm and said… I'm just joking sweetheart and both laughed together…

Bani's laughter came to halt …as she felt Jai's lips on her shoulder… traveling to the side of her neck… and his hands were also busy holding her tight and stroking her back…

Bani just closed her eyes as tears threaten to come out… how was she to stop him now …she's feeling really uncomfortable……… he and his mood swings…… still she tried to move… and Jai made his gripe lighter and asked…

Jai: kya hua Bani? ………

Bani: Jai… its nothing…

Jai: I'm sorry sweetheart …I know you are worried because of what doctor said …aren't you Bani? But what can I do… can't we come a little closer to each other Bani?

Bani was stiff… didn't know what to answer Jai… but now there was no turning back …she belongs to Jai and only to Jai …and it is her duty and his rights to have her all to himself… Bani understood her duty very well… and she will fulfill every promise that she made to him while they were getting married and taking saath pheres……

Bani: Jai this small bit of closeness can cause a lot of damage too… and I do not want to take any sort of risk …Jai I'm yours and only yours… till you are well we will remain as good friends and do not even think about anything further then this she added to lighter their mood from seriousness…

Jai went closer to her and hugged her again saying … as you wish madam …as you wish……Just then Tony knocked on the door and informed them Inspector Pushkar was here to meet them… Jai went downstairs while Bani said she'll come after putting his medicines and everything in place…

After Jai left Bani's mobile rang again and she picked it up and it was Daksh…

Bani: hello…

Daksh: thank God u picked up the phone… I was trying so hard to contact you… I even left so many messages on your phone… so how are you…

Bani swallowed hard and didn't know what to answer… she was stammering

Daksh: Bani… what's wrong are you ok… are everyone fine…

Bani: haan sab kuch thik hai Daksh…

Daksh: ok Bani guess where I am… yeas I'm back Bani …I'm in India …actually I am staying in a hotel…

Bani went deaf… is she hearing correct… Daksh is in Mumbai… what will happen now… oh well sooner or later he was going to come to know of the truth… but this soon…was something unexpected…

Bani: Daksh… I want to talk to you about something important…

Daksh: Bani… aare yaar … we can't talk over phone let's meet… tell me where do you want to meet… oh yes Bani how's Jai…Bani there's a good news all the paper work has been don and we are all set to open our own clinic… I'm so excited Bani and I want you to come with me and our clinic will be open by your hand…

Bani: congratulations Daksh… I'm really very happy for you she said that as tears were in her eyes… she felt horrible for betraying Daksh …but the situation or rather her fate didn't do her much favor… due to which she lost Daksh and gained Jai's love… but will she ever be able to love Jai was the biggest question… but at the moment how will she be able to make Daksh understand …what will he go through when he's going to find out the truth…

Daksh: Bani… kahan kho gayeing… actually Bani I am expecting a call from Dad so I'll talk to you later… I have something important to do… I'll talk to you later bye…

Bani: but Daksh… Daksh… listen to me… the line got disconnected… after putting the phone down and saw Jai standing by the door…

Bani … thinking oh my God …did Jai heard our conversation… Jai came in the room…

Jai: Aare Bani… why are you taking so long …Pushkar is waiting…

Bani: yeah I was just coming… afterwards both Jai and Bani went downstairs to meet Pushkar……

sorry for any mistakes...hope you will like it...Do comment...Thanks 😃

Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

👏thnk for udpating forst of all

btu have to say jaroori ta klabab mein ahddi kya kam thi tune daksh ko la dii

hosake to meri taraf se jai ko 2-3 chata dedena by makign him get beated by some gundas ///... jai si all anguhty..

bani bee have starttec to fall for him... wowo p

psl cotnineu soon

davia

Edited by davia389 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Poor JB. cant get closer.

Poor Bani. i hope she cops up with everything & fall in live with Jai

Daksh ko out karo na plzzzzzzzzzzz........Bani is sooooo tensed for him.

gr8 update 👏👏

plz cont soon

PS-thanx for the PM

Edited by moonlitnight - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
I really want Daksh to know the truth and get lost 😡!!!

Jai heard the conversation 😕? can't wait for the next part....please update soon.....soon please 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
great part
awww jai is so sweet 😳 but did he hear the conversation bani was having with Daksh 😕 i hope not

i want daksh to know the truth and leave bani alone😡


Taj
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Posted: 17 years ago
grate update

yeh Daksh bhoot kahase agya 😡 😡

plz kick him out soon from jb's life 😡

jb are so sweet 😳 😳 😳

plz cont...
sonam
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Posted: 17 years ago
..hey tam..
make.. this daksh.. disappear..
seriously.
continue soon please
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey huin great part.. i just didnt get one thing.. shouldnt jai be calling bani anamika.. instead of calling her bani.. does he noe that its not anamika but its bani.. im a little confused babes.. but great part.. thats right daksh.. only JB are for eachother.. but great part.. do continue soon..
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Posted: 17 years ago
Tropa, Davia, niruba, taj, sonam, nir, phool...thank you guys so much for all your wonderful comments... loved reading them all.... 🤗


will be posting the next part soon....do comment... 😃😃😃

Thank you...😳😳😳
Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: phool527

hey huin great part.. i just didnt get one thing.. shouldnt jai be calling bani anamika.. instead of calling her bani.. does he noe that its not anamika but its bani.. im a little confused babes.. but great part.. thats right daksh.. only JB are for eachother.. but great part.. do continue soon..



most other readers weren't liking the idea of Jai calling Bani Anamika... and I also wanted Jai to call Bani by her name not by Anamika... so in chapter 18 Masi unknowingly blurt out to Jai that she has fixed a wedding date for Jai and Bani...so jai asked who's Bani and Masi had to come up with something so she told him Anamika has another name and at home everyone calls her Bani....Jai also found one of Bani's chain with the initial 'B'... so it made sense to him as well....from then onwards Jai started calling her Bani

I hope that made sense... and answered your question... and thanks for all ur lovely comments .....😃


Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago

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