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Posted: 17 years ago
Just read the last two chapters.great parts.Daksh 😡cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

hey Tam😳,

😳hailaaaaaaaa😳😳wat was Jai doin to Bani

humm so sounds like first nite comin soon😳😳😳

oh god Daksh gonna make his entry soon i think in the party😡

poor Bani must be feelin horrible 😭

plzzzzzzzzz update soon

bye n tc

Ejzoo (Nikita)

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey tam.................

lovely part..............

jai and bani are in gud behaviour toward each other but what will happen when daksh cums to know abt the marriage..............

update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awwwwww,

Tam is it too late to declare my undying and heartfelt love for your Jai?
He is such a cutie!!!
And bani is sooooooo sweet.

Loved the updates Tam👏

sorry could not comment before

bye
ranjana
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: davia389

dhailaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa😳

bani si gogin to emet daksh ab kay hgoa jai bodya gaurd banakar saat lejana.😉 ...Thanks for the advice….😆

jai really naughty itni saare bacche kahin tuej meri lvoe abby ff ki ayad to anhi yaad agayi😆 ……in ur ff they had 17 kids… But am not planning for that much…there is something called family planning…😆😆😆

hum do hamre 2 waahahahahahha….better idea than having 20 kids😆😆😆 and sweet too….😳

naughty naughty.. jai all anughty..

ab party?😆

so daksh wil be shcoked to elarn as abi is now jai's wife..a dn will try to take revenge form abni..

psl contineu sooooooooooooooooooooooooooon

will do…Thanks for the lovely comments…😃....

davia




Originally posted by: ofcourse


Hey Tam, sorry for my late comments…. No problemo... feel free to comment whenever u have spare time sweetie😃….Just read the last 3 parts..Its really great.. …Thanks…😃

bani is really in a very difficult situation now..It will be good if she talks to Daksh soon n makes him understand.He really has to go away from her life soon so that there is not any problem with her married life. …don't worry he will after all the drama…😆

Its good to see that Bani is getting quite comfortable around Jai now..I am sure her friendship(from her angle) will soon turn into a beautiful relationship with Jai's love n care. Jai truly is a darling. …yeap … Jai is too cute 😳so she can't avoid him for much longer…😆😆😆

Pushkar is really a gem…….I love Pushkar… he is too good… He truly cares for her and I am sure he will be one person who will support her at the time of her crisis, if any, due to Daksh.

So a party is on the way..I have a feeling that somehow Daksh might turn up there..Hope its not true as I dont want any confusion in front to Jai as he is still recovering…. I won't let anything happen to our hero…😆
Great parts Tam... Thanks Rama for all ur lovely comments….😃

Rama



Originally posted by: simui



nice update 👏 👏 ....thanks Simui …glad u liked it…



Originally posted by: momtajbegum1


lovely part Thanks
the little argument they had was cute 😆 ……glad u liked it…
and Pushkar is sooo sweet and caring 😳 I know he is such a sweetheart…

plz cont soon ........will try… Thanks for the comments

Taj



Originally posted by: niruba


the last part was 😳 😳......but don't know why I feel bad for Jai 😭 ......I want him to know the truth more than Daksh, wonder how he'll react to that 😕 …I'm wondering the same thing…🤔....
please continue tam.....you are doing awesome job by updating regularly 👏
👏 👏 Thank u so much for all ur lovely comments…


Originally posted by: sonamKhan


haila so sweet update tam 😊 Thanks Sonam
jb are too much 20 kids 😆 ….Jai control…😆😆😆

pushy is such a darling brother 😃 he is a sweetheart…

plz cont........ will try…Thanks for the lovely comments…

sonam



Originally posted by: moonlight


Hi Tropa...😃

8-10, 10-15, 15-20??!!!!!!!!!! 😆…….I was thinking of adding more but don't want to give u guys heart attack…20 is more than enough…😆😆😆

loooooooooovely part.………Thankssssss

haila....JB-D meeting??!!!!!

u better update soon…. haila Dhamki😲… Just kidding 😆…will do…Thanks for the lovely comments…..😃




Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Nimmie1'2

B's in a difficult situation... I hope her meeting D will not cause no problems in her relationship with J.

Thanks Nimmie for ur lovely comments😃…rest assure Daksh will not cause major problem...😆


Originally posted by: nir_jaanu

aww poor bani. …Yeah she is in a very bad situation…😕
jai is getting naughty n naughty hehe. 😆😆😆
20 kids.. r u kidding.. ……If u want more kids I can add to the list…😆😆😆

continue soon tam …Thanks for the lovely comments Nir…Will do…😃

Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Indian_Goddess


Hey hun, Hi...just read all the FFs. I couldn't stop until I finished them all. This FF is superb!!...Thanks I'm absolutely loving it! I'm glad u liked it...😃It's become one of my favorites now!...that so sweet of u... 😃 JB are so cute! 😳 😳 😳 I especially love Jai!...we all love him..😳 How he teases Bani is sweet. 😳 I'm very eager to read more. 😳 Please update very soon! 😃 Thank you so much for all your lovely comments...loved reading them...will try to post the next part soon...Thank you...😃



Originally posted by: Hritzfan


Just read the last two chapters.great parts.Daksh 😡cont soon Thanks for all your lovely comments...will try to post the next part tomorrow... Thank you...😃


Originally posted by: jeenal20

PLZ CONT SOON Thanks Jeenal for the comments and will post the next part soon...😃


Originally posted by: ejazanita

hey Tam😳,...hi Nikita...😃

😳hailaaaaaaaa😳😳wat was Jai doin to Bani ...u tell me 😆😆😆...poor Bani 20 kids...😆😆😆

humm so sounds like first nite comin soon😳😳😳 ...u think 🤔...well it may take some time but it will surely come...😆

oh god Daksh gonna make his entry soon i think in the party😡 ...well u will find about that very soon😉... thw part is just around the corner😆😆😆

poor Bani must be feelin horrible 😭 ...don't cry yaar😭...I will do something to improve her situation very soon...😆

plzzzzzzzzz update soon ...will do...Thanks Nik for all ur lovely comments...😃

bye n tc ...you too...😃

Ejzoo (Nikita)



Originally posted by: culgal86

hey tam................. Hi😳

lovely part.............. Thanks😃

jai and bani are in gud behaviour toward each other but what will happen when daksh cums to know abt the marriage.............. u will find that out as the story progresses further... 😉

update soon will do Thanks for all ur lovely comments...😳


Originally posted by: RANJANA_RRJ

Awwwwww,

Tam is it too late to declare my undying and heartfelt love for your Jai?
...it's never too late to declare ur love😉… so u can do that…no problem😃… and I have conveyed ur love to my Jai 😆and he said he loves you too….😳😳😳 ... actually he loves every single one of us...But Bani doesn't know about that... so let's just keep it as a secret...😆😆😆
He is such a cutie!!!?....I've told him that too😆...

And bani is sooooooo sweet. Bani says u are sweet too...😳😳😳

Loved the updates Tam👏

sorry could not comment before...no problemo... feel free to comment whenever u have time to... Don't feel upset about my stupid joke...I was just kidding...😃...Thanks Ran for all ur lovely comments... enjoyed reading it...

bye
ranjana




A big Thank to phool as well...Thanks for ur lovely comments and PM phool and study hard sweetie...😃

Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Thank you guys🤗 so much for all your lovely comments... loved reading them...🤗🤗🤗...hope u will like this part...I tried but do let me know how it was...I hope it's not disappointing......Do enjoy reading it...😃...Do comment either good or bad or both 😆


Chapter 26:

Following morning everyone was getting busy decorating the house for their small party and Jai was not allowed to do anything… especially Bani gave him strict instruction not to move a muscle otherwise he will have to deal with her… and Jai didn't have the guts to argue with Bani so he just obeyed her order…

In the afternoon everyone was getting ready for the party… Bani wore a white colored sleeveless churidar and a beautiful diamond set … after all she's Mrs. Walia so she had to look beautiful… Jai was also looking handsome wearing a nice black colored suite … after getting ready both Jai and Bani went downstairs to welcome their guests..........

Masi: Aare wah mere bahu tu kitni pyari lag rein hai… Kisi ki nazar Na lag jayen… and she kissed Bani's forehead………

Jai: aakhir biwi kiski hai… after all she's my wife …isi liey tu itni khoobsurat hai… said Jai putting his arm around Bani……… saying all proudly…

Just then one of Jai's best friends Tarun walked in around the main hall towards the whole group where everyone was standing circling Jai and Bani.

Tarun: hello everybody …namaste Masi kaisie hain aap…..saying he took Masi's blessing…

Masi: God bless you my child… kitni dino baad aayen ho tum… ab jake Masi ki yaad aai haan………

Tarun: sorry Masi par aap jante tu hain na yeh business ki wajai se time hi nahi milti…

Jai: hi Tarun and both hugged each other…

Tarun: Aare yaar apni dulhan se tu milao … kahan hai meri bhabi……

Jai: (Indicating to Bani) yeh hai Mrs. Bani Walia … my dulhan and your bhabi… and Bani this is Tarun my best friend……

Bani: Namaste Tarunji…

Tarun: plz Bani Bahabi call me Tarun… just then Masi cut in saying aare Jai beta tum aur Tarun batein karo… and I'll take Bani with me as I want her to meet some of our relatives… saying so Masi took Bani with her…… leaving Tarun and Jai alone…

Tarun: yaar Jai Bhabi is really beautiful … you are a very lucky guy…

Jai: Tarun I know u r a really big flirt but don't even try flirting with my dulhan… Jai added with a small smile…

Tarun: aare yaar mein to mazak kar raha tha… oh haan I want you to meet one of my friend he's from London well by profession he's a doctor… and he came to India for a small visit… and I brought him to this party… I hope that's fine with you Jai… you know this is a family party so…

Jai: aare yaar tu bhi kamal karta hai… why did you kept him standing outside go and get him… you are so stupid yaar…

So Tarun went outside and brought in Dr. Khanna…

Tarun: Jai… this is Dr. Khanna …he is a neurosurgeon… a brilliant doctor… you know when I had encountered with a terrible accident in London he is the one who did my treatment and from there we have known each other…

Jai: It's nice to meet you Dr. Khanna… I'm Tarun's best friend Jai Walia…

Dr. Khanna: It's nice to meet you too Mr. Walia… in fact I have heard your name somewhere but can't remember exactly where…

Tarun: Dr. Khanna its nothing new… he is a very well known business tycoon so you bound to know about him… The famous business tycoon Jai Walia… and all three laughed together…

Dr. Khanna: oh by the way Mr. Walia congratulations and wish you a very happy married life full of lots of happiness…

Jai: Thank you and I'll just call my wife you should also meet her… saying so he called Anu to bring Bani to him…

Just then Pushkar came in and joined the gang and all four were chatting way while drinking… Bani saw him drinking and came to them and asked Jai to stop drinking…

Dr. Khanna's back was faced toward Bani so Bani never saw his face… and she started speaking to Jai…

Bani: Jai… didn't I tell you not to drink and you are not listening to me…

Jai: Sweetheart please just one drink… oh by the way I wanted to introduce you to someone… saying so he proceeded towards Bani and put his arm around her … just at that time Dr. Khanna turned around and his smile vanished from his face as he saw Jai Walia's wife…

Jai: Bani this is Dr. Khanna and Dr. Khanna this is my wife Mrs. Bani Walia…

Bani looked at Dr. Khanna with a horrified face and said…

Bani: Daksh! Daksh Khanna!!! (Muttered Bani slowly…)

Jai: Bani what did you say? Do you know him? He added smilingly……

Bani: she stammered as how to answer Jai's question that instant Pushkar cut in as from Bani's facial expression he could make out this Dr. Khanna and Bani's Daksh are same person as he heard Bani taking Daksh's name……

Pushkar: aare yaar what are you guys doing… this introduction can happen later on…… now come on………its your wedding party and now we want our newly wedded couple to dance ……… saying so he pushed Bani and Jai on the dance floor………… (Bani was thinking the truth about her identity will come out today but thanks to Pushkar she was saved … but for how long … she has to face Daksh sooner or later and Jai will ultimately will come to know the truth as truth prevails no matter how hard you try to cover it……)

Jai held out his hand towards Bani … Bani gave a side glance towards Daksh and held Jai's hand and walked toward the dance floor as the song being played at the background…

Dil koo tumse pyar hua … pehli baar huaa… tumse pyar hua… mein bhi aashiq yaar huaa… tumse pyar hua… chyeinn hain betabi… kaho mein kya karoonn … kya karoonn…. Dil ko tumse pyar hua pehli baar hua… tumse pyar hua… aashiq mein bhi yaar hua …tumse pyar hua…

Meanwhile as Jai and Bani started dancing Daksh kept looking at them from distance he's yet to digest the fact that Bani is no longer Bani Dixit but Mrs. Bani Walia …… Daksh thinking this must be some sort of horrible dream or has the fate has played a cruel joke with his life… his Bani is in someone else's arm dancing away and someone's hand is securely held around her waist… there is so much close proximity between his Bani and this stranger who he just met couple of minutes ago whereas he knew Bani for more than years…… how can he believe that all this is true…… it can't be true…… Bani cannot and will not never ever deceive him… but she has betrayed him said Daksh to himself… but he was finding it difficult to swallow this cruel truth… his thought vanished as he saw Jai going more closer to Bani and hugging her even tightly then before while dancing… Daksh couldn't take the sight he was seeing in front of his eyes so he closed his eyes as tears were rolling down his cheek in disgust…betrayal… and most of all in the sorrow of losing someone who was very dear to his life… heart and soul… his eyes were tightly closed but tears were flowing from his eyes… as a different song was being played in the background……………

Tadap tadap ke is dil se ahh nikal thi rahi mujhko saja di pyar ki aisa kya gunah kiya jo loot gaye… haan loot gayen… tu loot gayen hum teri mohabbat mein……………. Sisak sisak ke iss dil se ahh nikal thi rahi jo loot gayen haan loot gayen jo loot gayen hum teri mohabbat mein………………….

Sorry about the song selection... Hope it makes sense...😆...Thank you...

Preview for next part:

Bani meets Daksh at the hotel... will Jai find out???😲 ...u cub find out about that in next part...😆...



Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Me first??

Haila, Daksh ka dil toot gaya. I'm sorry but I don't feel bad for him. Is that normal??? I am just happy JB danced.
I hope Daksh won't do anything stupid. Maar khaayega humse!!!😡

Beautiful update Tam, and loved the songs!!

Bye,
Ranjana

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Posted: 17 years ago

hmmmm jb dance ye tarun.. mujse aach nahi laga .

iu knew that.. daksh party emin aya.. aur aab kay hotel mein nooo acchi jagah nahi hai....

bani wil go jai will follow and the truth out.. form bani's mouth am i right/.?

psl cotnienus oon

davia

Edited by davia389 - 17 years ago

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