FF:Identical Sweetheart last part pg120 note 122

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi guys'.. How r u all lovely people? This is a new ff and I am a new writer '. This is my first ff '. And its' called 'Identical Sweetheart' ' I hope u guys will like it if not love it'..I will try my best to make it as sweet, nice and passionate as possible'' it will probably take couple of chapters for the story to develop '. So guys please bear with me'' your support will mean a lot to me '.. Would like to thank all the ff writers of KS ff'.I got inspiration to write from u guys '. And u all are wonderful writers'..so plz guys do give ur comments either good or bad'all are welcome '. Would really appreciate it'..it will motivate me to keep on writing '.. Thanks a lot in advance '' so ...here it goes'''''..

Characters:

Walia Khandan:

Jai Walia: a successful businessman (Just like KS) very fun loving, attractive young man aged 34'''

Masi: very sweet lady loves her Munna a lot more than anything else'.

Jigs: Jai Walia's sis married to Aditya has a daughter called Anu'..

Anu: a very sweet girl full of mischief and goes to college '.. She is in Rano's class...'

Aditya: he is Jig's husband and a very good friend of Jai Walia''.

Tony: he is the butler

Dixit Khandan:

Nishikant and Kiran Dixit: both are husband and wife and proud parents of their three daughters''they also

Anamika Dixit & Bani Dixit: both are identical twins and their age 23 is in uni'very beautiful girls with good manners and cultures.

Rano Dixit: is the youngest daughter of ND and KD'.very spoilt'as both her sisters loves her alot'.yet very sweet and fun loving''she's 19

Chapter 1:

The Dixit resident is decorated as a bride with lots of bright lights and lots of lovely flowers '. Both the families are really happy as they are celebrating the engagement ceremony of Jai Walia with one of the daughter of Nishikant Dixit & Kiran Dixit '.

At Dixit Resident '. All the guests including the Dixit family are eagerly waiting for the lucky girl of ND & KD to come down to start the engagement ceremony ' Jai's eye is fixed at the staircase to see the glimpse of his to be fianc'e ' seeing whom at once he fell madly in love with her ' her beautiful eye' lovely lips ' perfect figure ' long black hair ' and most importantly her heart which was full of love and care and'..Jai's thought was broken as Aditya tapped on his shoulder '. Saying have patience my friend ' ur girl will be coming down very soon '. Both smiled at each other as Aditya left making a sad face as Jigs called him ' Jai tried to hide his eagerness to see HER by his cute smile '

'.Jai thinking to himself 'when I get u alone sweetheart all to myself'. I will settle all the account of making wait for so long'. (Giving out a evil smile)
'. He was also waiting for his surprise as his sweetheart promised him that she'll give him a big surprise or rather he will very shocked '.(Jai was wondering what is this surprise? But was really excited about it 'he was thinking she might kiss him as they have not yet shared their first kiss'stop it Jai 'don't think so much ' otherwise you'll crazy') 'at the very moment Masi came and was looking at him very confused '. She looked at him again from top to bottom '. And then again to see if she's missing something'. Then she looks around and saw everyone having fun chatting away 'enjoying the party '.

After looking around Masi got even more confused'then after a lot of thinking she figured out her Munna was daydreaming so she thought she'll have some fun with her Munna '. Then she touched Jai's shoulder'.saying 'Munna what's wrong beta?' 'why are u smiling to urself r u ok? (her voice is all full of concern)' then Jigs, KD & ND, Aditya came along to hearing masi's concern voice'everyone started to ask jai question if he's ok'.Jai thinking oh brother can't I even think of my sweetheart if not see her'.why is everyone giving me such a hard time '. He made a very sad face '..and everyone burst out laughing seeing his condition waiting'.

Anu: mamaji have patience na mami will be coming down very soon as we girls take a bit of time to get ourself ready you see

Jai: yeah sure ' I'm not complaining am I? s waiting is very fun ' and I am enjoying it'..

Aditya: someone is getting annoyed ' Anu do u know who that is?

Anu: no papa ' ur not and I'm not annoyed as I just met mami 5 mins ago and I must say she was looking like an angle and so beautiful'.saying while suppressing her smile'

Jai: chup ho jao tum dono baap beti (Trans: be quiet u two)'.waise hi mein kitana pereshan hoon who abhi tak neeche nahin aaie (Trans: as it is I'm so worried ' she hasn't come down yet) and u r making fun of me? Aditya I tell you'..

Jai couldn't' finish his sentence as his eyes went to the stair case and saw Kiran bringing her daughters with her down the staircase '..



If guys want me to continue then do let me know... plz do comment......


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davia389 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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pls continue soon.. so one will run away with daksh another will get amrried to jai and some problem with bani haina?
pls cotninue soon
davia
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: davia389

pls continue soon.. so one will run away with daksh another will get amrried to jai and some problem with bani haina?
pls cotninue soon
davia



somehow I had a feeling you will be the first one to comment ... well Thank you so much for your encouragement ... and I will try and post the next part tonight...

and have patience ... the story will unfold very soon...😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great start 👏

love the title...hmm something gonna happen between the twins and jai 😆

lovely character sketch

do cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey plz post the next part soon!!! Its very interesting n it has a good character sketch. Luvly job so far. Luv ya. Bye!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys thanks so much for your comments... i'm very happy with the response so I'm posting the second part...Especially for Davia, hipreet, Chevi, sadsunzarsum...if you guys have any suggestion do let me know Thank you.... 🤗 🤗 🤗


Jai couldn't' finish his sentence as his eyes went to the stair case and saw Kiran bringing her daughters with her down the staircase …..

Chapter 2:

By looking at the staircase he got even more frustrated ….

Jai: What the hell is going on?

Anu: mamaji what happened? Mami came down and ur still angry?

Jai: why is her face covered with that damn dupatta? I was waiting for so long? Who placed that veil on her head aahhh……? Wait Anu u don't have to tell me…its Masi right?

Anu: yeap u guessed it right….

Jai: looking at Masi while his sweetheart keeps on touching feet of relatives with her veil on ….my poor baby she must be feeling so awkward touching feet of all those people….aahhh Masi and her tradition….by the time I get to see her the party will probably end …..(feeling very low)

Anu: mamaji stop complaining you have been waiting 4 only 10 min….get a grip on urself …

She couldn't finish her sentence when Masi called out Anu…..

Anu: yes Masi….

Masi: Anu plz get ur mamaji over here….we must start the engagement ceremony now …..

Jai: finally ………. All smiling ………… (All my readers are smiling too)……..

Jai started to walk towards Masi and stand next to his to be Fiance…..Masi told Jai to unveil her … and very happily Jai lifted HER veil with a lot of care so that he doesn't cause her any distress….and finally he got to see her face…her eyes are shut and lips are trembling … as Jai whispered just beautiful SHE opened her eyes and looked into his eyes … which were full of love and passion …Jai couldn't control himself anymore so … he kissed her forehead very passionately and looked at HER again… their eye locking couldn't even start as one of his Sali cleared her throat saying ahem Jiju … u can stare at her afterwards … shall we start the engagement … and everyone burst out laughing …while SHE felt so embarrassed and nervous because of Jai's roaming eyes on HER…..

Kiran Dixit: Rano beta idhar aao (Trans: Rano dear plz come here)…very happily Rano came and stand next to her mother….Jai beta u also come and stand there so you both can exchange the rings ….

Jai came and stand next opposite of Anamika and looked at her lovingly…..Rano gave the ring to Anamika's hand…..and Anamika slipped the ring on Jai's finger….Jai did the same … after putting the finger on her finger he kissed her hands … and everyone clapped enjoying the moment …. Rano came forward and hugged both Jai and Anamika and congratulated them….afterwards everyone including the newly engaged couple were summoned for the dance……

A lovely song was playing at the background …………………………………………………………

Jai and Anamika started dancing … (while dancing … Jai thinking to himself how only 2 weeks ago he saw Anamika in the college and came to know that She is Anu's Friend Rano's elder sister…at seeing her first he liked her a lot and send Masi to their home to ask for Anamika's hand and now after 2 week or so they are getting engaged today … how this life has changed in these 2 weeks…so Anamika and him don't know each other very well as they've known each other for about 2 weeks and weeding is kind of arranged for Anamika and for Jai he knew he loved her… coz after his first meeting with her he wasn't able to concentrate on his work and she was haunting him day and night… it took him nearly 2 years to find about her whereabouts……he still remembers that rainy day when…………)

… Jai came out of his thought as he remembered something … and whispered to Anamika…where's my gift sweetheart or should I say my surprise?

Anamika: you know something Jai you have so many bad qualities and ….

She couldn't finish her sentence when Jai cut in saying…………………

Jai: and…and what sweetheart ….. (acting all angry)…. I thought I will get to hear something nice out of ur mouth but u seems to be in a very bad mood …. Is there something wrong (getting all concerned)…Anamika r u happy with this engagement? …. Are u hiding something 4rm me?....

Anamika: …see this is exactly what I was talking about …. And let me finish my sentence plz….as I was saying u have many bad qualities and one of them are…well actually some of them are u jump to conclusion very quickly …
And u are very impatient … so be patient and u will definitely get ur surprise very soon….and I do mean very soon…..

Jai: really? ….

At the very moment Kiran called out for Anamika…...

do comment ... I'll post the next part tomorrow... 😊

Guys plz let me know how to change the title... So I could update the title...and let you know that chaps are updated... so do let me know ... Thanks ...


Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
BeingChevi thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice part. Oooh bad habits or qualities rather. Hmm interesting! Cont. soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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anamika 😕 .....no way.....where is bani

i'm sure he fell in love with bani not anamika

plzzzz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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pls contineu soon soo kab begegi anamika due to her qualities...

😆
psl continue soon

davia
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: hipreet

anamika 😕 .....no way.....where is bani Glad to see u r annoyed ... just kidding 😆 ... give it some time and everything will be cleared very soon....

i'm sure he fell in love with bani not anamika ... you got that right ...

plzzzz cont soon I need some time ...so next Part tomorrow for sure...Thanks for the comments ...



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