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jigna_07

@jigna_07

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#51

hey kanta!
oh wow so jai told her his feelings
i wish she would feel worthy enough for him and his love
it truly sickens me to know that kiran is so cruel....
chi beti ko bech diya
🤢 😡
well i hope jai can get her happiness and bani agrees
continue soon 😃

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khushboo2006

@khushboo2006

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#52

Kanta a wonderful story. Loved it.

Kiran and Mohan...word fails to describe their inhumane dealing.

So finally Jai did let Bani know about his feelings for her. Hope Kiran is not going to play a dirty game again with her.

Poem was awesome.

Please do continue.

👏

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suwas

@suwas

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#53

Jai is deeply in love with Bani & confessed it to her 👏

This story is coming out really well. The topic tself is great. The portraying of different relations, chatacters & their emotions is mindbloing. Iam amazed at your writing skill.

Can't wait to see how Jai manages to overcome the obstacles. PIa & mainly Kiran.

Nishikant even though wanting to marry bani off to wonderful caring person like Jai won't have any say. Just like Rano I don't kno why can't he stand up against his wife.

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Harpreet

@hipreet

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#54

Wonderful part............poor bani had to stand a lot in a young age.............hope she will agree 4 the marriage and jai will talk to nishikant soon..........continue soon

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amisha

@amiee

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#55

wonderful part pls cont soon.........

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watsonmamu

@watsonmamu

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#56

Wow! What a nice concept for a FF! Well penned 👏 👏 👏. Read both parts at once and it was amazing!!! Loved the fact that Jai was open about his feelings to Bani.

Eagerly awaiting the next part!!

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Rachna

@-Rachu-

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#57

wow that was an awesome part both are together but yet so apart 👏
pliz cont soon
luv
Rachna
xoxox

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preet

@preet_2010

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#58

Di,

that was just amazing,the story of past and Jai revalation of his love Bani penned so beautifully.truly fabalous.I really felt Bani's pain,for the time in her life someone has loved her,but she cant even accept it. too good,looking forward to the next part. 😊

preet 😳

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btkr

@btkr

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#59

Very nice part, Kantaben. You fingers are going mile a minute on that keyboard. Very impressive 👏 The bangles poem is really touching. Does that author write other good stuff? Very symbolic of what a husband represents, esp in India.. The widow story, in this ff obviously, is going well, but thinking of the norm in India is so painful...Things are much better from the "Water" movie days, but it is amazing how the value of a woman drops when she becomes a widow. If she has a son, and lots of money, and strong maternal support, she can survive, but otherwise pain all the way, na...
Can't wait for more..
👏 👏 👏

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daviashree

@davia389

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#60

haila jai kissed and proposed bani.. jai is fast in action.. pls continue soon now cnt wait.. will jb get run away and married?

pls cotninue soon

davia

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