FF: A Bounded Relation...IMP Note on 149 - Page 74

at last i read ur whole ff... took me a long time to read... beautiful words... liked the progression u showed in their relation...

beautiful work 👏 👏 👏

wonderful parts loved it pls update soon.........cant wait to read more

So Jai like the peanut 😆
This scene was so funny.
It's good that Bani is more confident with Jai around. 😊
Seriously i can't wait to see them share more things like their childhood, their dreams.....
I don't know why but it seems the farmhouse holiday will help them to talk more often with each other. 😉
Great part 👏 👏 👏
Take care
i'm already waiting your next part 😃

wow.............amazing update.....I have tonnes of work to complete but I can't stop myself from reading your update....do continue please.....

Hey Baby,Jaan I am finally here.Yes thoda sa late, but please maaf kardo. 😛

read both the updates,simply mindblowing.Dil you are truly an amazing writer,loved Jai and Rano interaction to how both Jai and Bani are getting used to this relationship and the feelings that they are both going through.loved how you penned down the convo in the car, very sweet.how an hesitant bani opens up to him and shares her dreams and wishes to him remember there time in goa. 😉 😉 😉 Anu is truly an cupid here,loved her innocent and yet very fun games which helped our jodi come closer and my jiya go dhadak 😳 😳 😳 slowly but surely they both are making an way in each others hearts and soul.really enjoyin how the story is goin forward so far,will be eagerly waitin for the next part. 👏


preet 😳

What an update Dil!!! Too good. 😃 Dil khush ho gaya ekdum 😛

Jai is so cute - peanut butter and jelly sandwich 😆 😆 😆

And then Bani's act was too good, I am sure JW must have been shocked inititally and then he got in the playful mood too.

And then haila, what a cute part 😳 😳 😳

Please update soon dear. Waiting.

😆 😆 😆 God jai is so funny!!!!!!!!
Man y did adi have to come at that moment!Very cute update! Plz continue soon...

read ur ff aftr a long tym..n its rocking..plz cont soon

😆😆 First Tazoo's Gol Matol Baby now the jelly sandwitch.....I can imagine JW the gol matol baby eating jelly sandwitch with a solemn face 🤣🤣



Aww.....the JB scene was out of the world....so Cute 😳



Loving the updates more and more each time 😉


Update soon 😃!

Phew!!! Finally I am here..................all caught up! 😃

Loved it all way through...................Jai's cruelty towards Bani, Bani's endurance, Rano's support, Mausi and Dadi and Aditya are all so wonderfully expressed in words 👏

And then Jai realising that Bani was as innocent as he is and repenting......................seeking assistance from Rano was so cute 😳

And then the dinner and his apology................awwww...........was really really cute!!!

Phir farmhouse ka trip 😳 😳 😳................. chinese whispers and spin the bottle!!! 😆 😳

Bani's act was the bestest................and the way it ended 😳 Aditya ko bhi ussi waqt aana ttha!!!! 😳

Loved it dear, please continue soon, I am hooked to this now 😉 😳