FF: A Bounded Relation...IMP Note on 149 - Page 75

Originally posted by: snsali_pooja

Hey Meri Jaan 😃 I am so happy that you updated today 😃 I will update tom just for you 😉 and you did!😃 thank u ji!😉

Yaar I already sang to oyu for the last update 😡 but I am going to sing for you willingly this time cause your update was just...

MIND-BLOWING! FANTASTIC! OUT OF THIS WORLD! 👏

hehehehehhe! maybe i should write more updates like that.😳😉

The peanut butter and jelly was just too funny 🤣 i know.😆😆😆

The problem is that i don't like peanut butter and jelly 😡 I only like peanut butter 😃 not jelly 🤢 now you are making me hungry 😆 hahaha! kya yaar, PBJ is awesome!👍🏼

Since when does Jigs have a lover 😆 Good for Adi, got rid of her 🤣 Jigs is a loner!😆

JB were very cute 😳 of course!😳😳😳

Adi just had to cut in the middle of such a romantic scene 😡 bechara Adi, getting so many dead threats becuz of his unintentional interruption!😆😆😆

You have to hook Adi up with someone or even send him back to Jigs so he isn't interupting JB and the wrong time 😡😡 will hook him up with someone else.😉 i'm not too cruel that i will send him back to jigs!😆😆😆

For that I am taking marks off and...oh yeah, I am grading you on each part from now on and for this you will get 80/100 for Adi's interuption 😆😆😆 kya??? 20 points?! yaar, not fair! u should atleast had taken off 2 the most!

Just kidding it was a very good update 👏👏 but still 😆 thank u ji!😃😆

The Song Dedicated To You for the FAB update

Welcome Everyday Come Welcome
Welcome To Day Party Welcome
Has Another Gal For Everyone
Welcome Welcome Welcome

Ishq Da Yeh Nasha
Chakh Le Zara Zara
Kal Ka Kisi Pata

Aaaja Mere Sang Nachle Tu Nachle
Zara Zara
Dil Ka Karun Mein Kya
Tujhpe Yeh Mar Mita
Mujhko Na Abb Sata
Aaaja Mere Sang Nachle Tu Nachle
Zara Zara

Masti Ka Mauqa Hai
Khud Ko Kyun Tu Roka Hai
Dont U Really Wana Cum

Welcome
Welcome
Welcome

Welcome Everybody Come Welcome
Welcome To Day Party Welcome
Has Another Gal For Everyone

Welcome Welcome Welcome

Hey Hi Ho Say Hello
Welcome To The Party
Yo My Love
Dont U Wana Know
Whts Goin On Da Party

Welcome
Welcome
Welcome

Soche Woh Mujhe To
Muskurao Mein
O O O
Dekhe Woh Mujhe To Sharamu Mein
Tere Bin Dil Mera Mera Mera Nahi Lagta
O O O
Tujh Bin Kahin Na Mar Jau Mein
Kuch To Zara Socho
Kuch To Zara Samjho

Masti Ka Mauqa Hai
Khud Ko Kyun Tu Roka Hai
Dont U Really Wana Cum

Welcome
Welcome
Welcome

Welcome Everybody Come Welcome
Welcome To Day Party Come Welcome
Has Another Gal For Everyone

Welcome Welcome Welcome

Ishq Da Yeh Nasha
Chakh Le Zara Zara
Kal Ka Kisi Pata

Aaaja Mere Sang Nachle Tu Nachle
Zara Zara
Dil Ka Karun Mein Kya
Tujhpe Yeh Mar Mita
Mujhko Na Abb Sata
Aaaja Mere Sang Nachle Tu Nachle
Zara Zara

Masti Ka Mauqa Hai
Khud Ko Kyun Tu Roka Hai
Dont U Really Wana Cum

Welcome
Welcome
Welcome

Welcome Everybody Come Welcome
Welcome To Day Party Welcome

Has Another Gal For Everyone
Welcome Welcome Welcome

woot!!! u sang the whole song!😳😃😉 unlike me who only gives u parts!😆😆😆

From you not so masoom big sis 😉😆 loh, at least one of us is honest!😆 thanks shireen, love u loads!🤗

Shireen 😳

Originally posted by: khushboo2006

Dil wonderful part...thanks hun!😃..loved the whole game segment 😆 ....so hilarious 🤣 .......Anu is such a cutie 🤗 ....JW is slowly slowly getting latto over his wifey 😳 ....yes he is.😳..can't wait for the next part to see more sparks between them 😳 😛 ...neither can i 😆😳...please do continue 👏 👏 👏 will try to 😉

Originally posted by: tam2

wow wonderful update.... 👏 👏 👏 thanks jaani!😳


loved their water fight.... 😳 😳 😳 me too!😳

Aditya ne wrong time par entry kyun mari... 😡 ... couldn't he come a little later... 😆 ... blame him, not me.😆

chinese whisper was awesome...peanut butter sandwich... 😆 ... wow bless JB.. love their jodi... glad to see them getting more closer day by day.... 😳 .... mujhe bhi!😉


Do cont soon... 👏 👏 👏 will try, but there's no guarantee in that.😆

Originally posted by: moonlitnight

awesome
chinese whisper, hosepipe and at the end 'almost kiss'
loooooooooooovely update 👏 thanks hun.😳
plz cont soon

Originally posted by: siumi

That was a worth waiting update, youre really something huh?! 😉 😆 😆 yes i am.😆 I loved the whole thing of the games, I was hoping Bani to see dancing infront of Jai 😉 , but the suprise was shocking and it turned out to be quite good 😳 glad it did.😳 , in drenching drenching each other they got really close ❤️ 😍 😳 yes they did.😳 but Im scared bcz of what Jai thinks about Bani and her crush"love" with Pushkar, what will happen, I cant even think of their future, will Jai forget this matter accepte this marriage or will talk to Bani about d ??? i have no clue hun, even i'm scared about wats going to happen.😆 hahaha, ur too cute! can't even spell out d******.😆😆😆 that all won't come until much later jaani, so u relax and enjoy the scenes i give u for now.😉😆

Hey Dil I really enjoyed this part as all others, youre really a fab writer, keep it up!! 😃 😉 thanks a lot!😳

Continue soon, take care u too.😃

PS.thoda lamba hogaya, sorry 😛 😆 it's alright, ramble on. makes me feel good about myself.😆

Originally posted by: chickster

Haaaaiiiiii 😳

It was a fantastic part 😳 thanks hun! glad u enjoyed it.😳

That update was super fast hint 😉 hint 😉 u sure do know how to hint something.😆😆😆

Originally posted by: nadia.s

That was really an awesome update.. thanks hun!😃
JB 😳 😳 is cute..and they almost kissed.. yes, they almost did.😳
jigyasa was funny 😆
but the peanut butter and jelly had laughing like crazy 😆 😆 haha, i'm glad it did.
continue soon'


nadia 😛

Originally posted by: davia389

that was damm funny.. phele jai sayign a sandwitch name....😆 then the water.. oen was really funny ... jb fallign over each toher😳 hmm is taraf donon pyaar mein padjya.. shruwaat hochukii hai.. i tihnk roshni ki zarrorat hai donon koo milenekeliye i mena bani's jealously .. june 19th...😳 davia.😆😆😆 don't worry jaani, that will be coming.😉 glad u liked the update!😃

wowo muej nahi apta tum itni jaldi udpate karogii waht about next udpate? aaj hii? that was just sheer luck.😆 not sure when u will be getting the next one.😕😆

pslssssss

have to say u r wonderful writer...thanks so much.😳

pls continue soon

👏

davia

Originally posted by: hipreet

amazing part thanks hun!😃
plzzzzzz cont soon

Originally posted by: bdev

Excellent part, loved the jb interaction. Please continue soon.
thanks a lot! glad u enjoyed it.😃
BD

Originally posted by: ejazanita

hey, wow!!!!!!!!! mindblowin...............thanks nikita.😳

loved the update!!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏 was laughin like crazy.........haha, glad u u found it amusing.😆

Jai was afraid frm Bani just to say " I Love You"😳 yes he was.😆😳

humm wow!!!! endin scene was almost like😳

so they almost goin to KISS each other...............very close.😳

i hope somethin wud happened in the room..........n Jai takes over the charge of it.....................😉😉😉 hahahaha!😳😳😳 not now hun, have some patience. that day will also come soon.😉😆😳

plzzzzzzzzzzz update soon

bye n tc

Ejzoo (Nikita)😳

Originally posted by: salmansgirl

Haila, two updates within two days? yes, lucky ducks aren't you all.😆 Yeh kaise ho gaya? mujhe bhi nahi maloom.😕😆 Not that I'm complaining lol! of course u wouldn't, no one is.😆 I was about to come and comment on Chapter 20 when I saw you'd posted Chapter 21 as well! THANK YOU!!!! 🤗 no problem jaani.😉

Loved both updates!glad that u did.😳😃 I really loved the whole dinner. It was so well planned and so beautifully written and potrayed! Loved how Bani questioned him about it and making sure it wasn't some kind of a sick joke he was pulling on her! I always knew Bani would forgive him but LOVED the way you wrote Jai's apology. The fact that he's realized how mistaken he was about Bani and realizes she's gone through the same pain of her sisters betrayal was awesome! thanks so much anam!😳

I'm loving Rano and Jai's relationship too. I always imagined them having a close jiju/sali relationship and I think with your ff, it's finally going to come true! i was a little worried that i rushed their relationship, but glad to know that you all think its fine.😃 It was really cute how Rano was trying to defend herself as to why she stayed up late! And Jai taking her into a hug, was so cute! lol, it was.

Anu is another character you always potray so beautifully! There's something about her character and the way her relationship with Jai is potrayed that I love! thanks. i guess i just got too attached with her in my last FF since she was a main character.😆 Love how she's hell bent on making Rano her babhi! It's so funny! Good job on writing that part! haha, thank u!😳

OMG I LOVED the game! I can't believe Jai came up with 'I love peanut butter and jelly sandwiches', no wonder Mausi and others were trying to figure out what was so amusing about that when Bani couldn't help but laugh! So cute. 😆

Haila, Bani spraying water on Jai was soooooooooo good! Loved how Jai didn't want an apology but revenge instead! Loved JB fighting over the hose and of course falling on top of each other and sharing the "moment"!

Goddess, absolutely LOVED both chapters! I can hardly wait to read the next chapter. I hope you will update soon as you'd done this week with these two updates. will try, but u never know with me.😕😆

Thank you again for the PM and keep sending those PMs with awesome updates! will do. thank you so much Anam, i'm really flattered! 😳🤗

Anam

Originally posted by: Nimmie1'2

Hi, I just read both parts and enjoyed them.. ha ha, me too loved the "the peanut butter & jelly sandwich" line... Hmm... seems like J is runout of lines to say! thanks hun! glad u enjoyed it!😃

Thanks and hv a wonderful Sunday!

Originally posted by: jani4eva

loved it loved it lovedddddddddddddddddd it..especially the lawn scene 😳 😳more such scenes please 😳 😉 heheh, thank u jaani!😳 glad u liked it! and i think everyone loved that scene!😆😆😆 will try to write more JB scenes like that.😉
cant wait for the next part 😃

Originally posted by: jeenal20

gr88 part
plz cont soon
loved it thanks hun!

Originally posted by: culgal86

hey ...............

awesome part................

bani opening up infront of jai..................

good progress................ thanks hun!😃

update soon

Originally posted by: janu_2006

hey
gr8 part thanks hun!
cont.sooon

Originally posted by: abhilashasharma

at last i read ur whole ff... took me a long time to read... beautiful words... liked the progression u showed in their relation...

beautiful work 👏 👏 👏 thank u so much hun!😳 hope i wont disappoint you in the near future.😃

Originally posted by: amiee

wonderful parts loved it pls update soon.........cant wait to read more thanks hun!

Originally posted by: Miss_Diey

So Jai like the peanut 😆 yes he does, very much.😉😆
This scene was so funny.
It's good that Bani is more confident with Jai around. 😊 yes, she's slowly coming around.😉
Seriously i can't wait to see them share more things like their childhood, their dreams.....
I don't know why but it seems the farmhouse holiday will help them to talk more often with each other. 😉 or closer with one another, which ever.😉😆
Great part 👏 👏 👏 thanks diey!😳
Take care
i'm already waiting your next part 😃 u always are.😆

Originally posted by: niruba

wow.............amazing update.....I have tonnes of work to complete but I can't stop myself from reading your update....do continue please....😆thank u so much hun! glad u enjoyed it!😃.

Originally posted by: coolgurl_2005

Hey Baby,Jaan I am finally here.Yes thoda sa late, but please maaf kardo. 😛 Mausi!!! Finally, have been waiting for ur comment!🤗 no pardon need, i have already forgiven u!😉

read both the updates,simply mindblowing.Dil you are truly an amazing writer thank u ji.😳 ,loved Jai and Rano interaction to how both Jai and Bani are getting used to this relationship and the feelings that they are both going through.loved how you penned down the convo in the car, very sweet.how an hesitant bani opens up to him and shares her dreams and wishes to him remember there time in goa. 😉 😉 😉 Anu is truly an cupid here,loved her innocent and yet very fun games which helped our jodi come closer and my jiya go dhadak 😳 😳 😳 slowly but surely they both are making an way in each others hearts and soul.really enjoyin how the story is goin forward so far,will be eagerly waitin for the next part. 👏

hehee, glad u liked it mausi! wouldn't have been possible if it weren't for u!😃

preet 😳

Originally posted by: sangitadas

What an update Dil!!! Too good. 😃 Dil khush ho gaya ekdum 😛 thanks sangita di!😳 glad u liked it!😃

Jai is so cute - peanut butter and jelly sandwich 😆 😆 😆 bechara said the only thing that came to mind.😆 and surprisingly it was PBJ sandwhich.😕😆

And then Bani's act was too good, I am sure JW must have been shocked inititally and then he got in the playful mood too. he sure was.😆

And then haila, what a cute part 😳 😳 😳 i know.😉😳

Please update soon dear. Waiting. will try to.😃

Originally posted by: Janoo

😆 😆 😆 God jai is so funny!!!!!!!! hahah, he sure is.
Man y did adi have to come at that moment! blame him, not me. 😆Very cute update! thanks hun! Plz continue soon...

Originally posted by: swati_bhatia

read ur ff aftr a long tym..n its rocking..plz cont soon thanks hun! will try.

Originally posted by: the_rain

😆😆 First Tazoo's Gol Matol Baby now the jelly sandwitch.....I can imagine JW the gol matol baby eating jelly sandwitch with a solemn face 🤣🤣 LMAO! 🤣 oh that just had me cracking out loud! even i can see it!😆😆😆



Aww.....the JB scene was out of the world....so Cute 😳 thanks jaani! glad u liked that part.😃



Loving the updates more and more each time 😉 thanks!😳


Update soon 😃!

Originally posted by: cheeze

Phew!!! Finally I am here..................all caught up! 😃

Loved it all way through...................Jai's cruelty towards Bani, Bani's endurance, Rano's support, Mausi and Dadi and Aditya are all so wonderfully expressed in words 👏

And then Jai realising that Bani was as innocent as he is and repenting......................seeking assistance from Rano was so cute 😳

And then the dinner and his apology................awwww...........was really really cute!!!

Phir farmhouse ka trip 😳 😳 😳................. chinese whispers and spin the bottle!!! 😆 😳

Bani's act was the bestest................and the way it ended 😳 Aditya ko bhi ussi waqt aana ttha!!!! 😳

Loved it dear, please continue soon, I am hooked to this now 😉 😳 thank u so much hun!😳😳😳 so glad u're liking the FF so far. your comments have made me feel pretty good about myself now.😆😆

Originally posted by: jani4eva

UPDATEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

i am still in the process of writing though.😆

Oh dear Lord, so many comments. But finally got around to commenting! 😆 😆 😆 Guys, i know you all are waiting for the next update, really trying hard here to write it. please wait for a little more time, and i will hopefully have it up soon. 😆 😃

Waiting Jani... 😆....

...love this word of urs... 😳...I think there is this old actor who uses this word very often...but can't remember his name...Is it Rajkumar... 🤔...or something...

oh anyways...😆 ... do update soon... 😃

come on jaani

how soon u talkin??? 😭 😭

Originally posted by: tam2

Waiting Jani... 😆....

...love this word of urs... 😳...I think there is this old actor who uses this word very often...but can't remember his name...Is it Rajkumar... 🤔...or something...

oh anyways...😆 ... do update soon... 😃

😆 i like the word too, it's cute. i have no idea where i got it from thou.😕 it just kind of stuck thou.😆 u will be happy to know however that i am working on the update now.😉 don't know when i will post thou.😕

Originally posted by: *Guli*

come on jaani

how soon u talkin??? 😭 😭

Guli 😆😆😆 u put a smile on my face. hahaha. i have no idea jaan, probably soon around the time when u update PKM and Sauten again.😉

update kab milega? besabri se intezaar ho raha hai!