Hey guys, I'm back with another FF called A Bounded Relation. I hope you all enjoy it as much as you've enjoyed my other FFs. The beginning part may be a little boring, but I promise you it will get better. Just bear with me please.
Anways, well A Bounded Relation is pretty much exactly KS's storyline when it first started out. Pia and Jai are to get married except Pia runs away to elope with Pushkar leaving Bani to marry Jai Walia.... This FF will have some similar scenes in KS, but it will also be different and go accordingly to how I want the storyline to go.... Hopefully you will all like it.
Here is the Character Sketch to the story....
Character Sketch:
Jai Walia: Nearing age 36, is a ruthless, arrogant, yet intelligent business man who runs a company worth billions. He's impatient, posses a nasty temper, strict and straight to the point. He wastes no time because his is precious. Along with these qualities, he is an amazingly attractive gentleman who catches every woman's eye. Short jet black hair….thick eyebrows…. overlapping intense dark gray looking eyes….a chiseled like nose….strong jaw structure….rugged features….and a unique style in him, which makes him who he is--- Jai Walia. (trans: As you can tell I am a big JW fan.😳😆)
Jigyasa Walia: Age 34, a cunning snobby woman who cares only for status, riches, and her children, who she loves with all her heart. A divorcee, she and her kids live with her older brother, Jai Walia, in their ancestral mansion.
Aditya Bali: Age 35, a jocular fellow who always makes everyone around him laugh and smile, with the exception of his ex-wife, Jigyasa Walia. He doesn't regret anything about the divorce and in fact is rather happy to be away from his ex, whom he made a mistake of marrying when he was only the age of 19 and she 18. They thought it was love, but were terribly mistaken. Things broke off with them on a not so happy note. He lives on his own while his ex and children live at his ex-brother-in-law's house, his best friend since they were kids, and whom he is business partners with. The split between him and Jigyasa did nothing that changed his deep friendship with Jai Walia.
Anu & Saahil Walia: Children of Aditya and Jigyasa. Fraternity twins, ages eighteen.
Bani Dixit: Age 24, a confident, kind and beautiful young woman-- inside and out--- all at the same time. She holds a lot of responsibility with taking care of her two younger siblings, who were more like her own two children, and working for the famous business tycoon, Jai Walia, who she currently resides with in his mansion. She is a well cultured and simple girl who is trustworthy and honest. Her main goal is to build a peaceful life for her and her sisters, by starting over in Mumbai, a city which they recently have moved to and are trying to adjust in.
Pia Dixit: Age 21, middle child of the Dixits. She is a dazzling attractive young adult who is mostly known for her good looks. Rather wild and out of control, Pia is a tough one to handle. She fantasizes of her future which holds riches, jewels, fancy clothing, and high position. Despite all this, Pia loves both her sisters, her only dear ones left, and is willing to go to do anything for them.
Rano Dixit: Age 18, the youngest out of the Dixit sisters. Sensible, obedient yet mischievous at times, Rano dreams big for her and her sisters. She wishes to be a business tycoon like Jai Walia himself, whom she secretly adores as a role model. She studies hard and does well in her university. She idolizes her elder sister, Bani, who always sacrifices her own happiness for her and Pia, and always protects them from harm. Knowing very well the stress her Bani Di is going through, Rano always prays and hopes for Bani to finally find her own happiness which she deserves a lot.
Pushkar Shukla: Age 26, a wild, looking-for-fun type of guy who also happens to be an extreme flirt. He wins women by his cute boyish charms which always seems to work. An orphan at the age of 16, he lived on the streets, until one day he coincidentally met Jai Walia, who he left an impression on and a place for himself in his heart. As soon as he knew it, he was brought with him to his home and family, who some accepted him and some didn't. From that day on, Jai Walia had accepted him apart of his family--- like a younger brother and in some way a son also. He also happens to be Bani's best friend whom he adores.
More characters will be introduced later on…..
He stood before the large bay window in his room, the breeze softly hitting against his handsome rugged face, the white curtains moving wildly around him, and the room dimly lit. His hand is dug deep into his pant pocket and he holds a glass of whiskey clutched tight in his other. The sounds of music, laughter, and partying are all just a faint echo to his ears.... He had come up here to his room, wished to be left alone and not wanting anything to do with the happy occasion downstairs when inside he felt bitter and full of rage.
Taking a sip from the strong acid like drink in his hands, he takes his hand out from his pocket and rests it against the window pane. Looking out at the gloomy dark sea with his harsh storm like eyes, Jai runs his fingers through his thick black hair, ruffling it up, yet making him look even more irresistibly attractive. Resting his forehead against his raised arm, he drifts into a trance of lost thinking.....
"Where is she?!", he demands through clenched teeth, a burning rage building inside of him.
She stands in front of him, shaking from her weeping, her chest raising up and down as she takes uneven breaths, her red lips quivering, and her mascara running.....
"I asked you a damn question!!!", he bellows at her, only frightening her even more and causing her to let out a sob, which she tries her best to smother with her hand. He strides over to her, grabs her arm into a tight grasp, and shakes her, making her gasp.
"Where is she!!!!", he demands again.
"She will not speak, Jai Bhaiya! All she does is weep and weep.... she acts as if she has no clue! But I know these three scheming sisters.... know them too well", his younger sister, Jigyasa, speaks with her determined voice.
Jai spins his head at Jigyasa's direction. He drops the scared girl's hand in a haste and shouts, "Do not open that damn mouth of yours if you cannot help, Jigyasa!".
"Bhaiya, it is these three girls who have deceived you and you are shouting at me?!", she yells back.
Jai looks back over at the quivering girl and stares at her with his fierce eyes. He becomes increasingly frustrated and annoyed with her sniffling and cries. There was no need to act innocent before him when he new the truth of her and his sister....
"That backstabbing sister of yours will have to pay for the humiliation she has put on me! I will murder her with my two bare hands!", he roars at her.
"Please, Mr. Walia!", she finally squeaks, "Aap aise maat kariye ji...". (trans: Please don't do this...)
"Then what else do you expect my Bhaiya to do, Bani! Forgive that wretched Pia for humiliating him so severely! For ditching him- Jai Walia- on his wedding day?!", Jigyasa screams. .
Jai shut his eyes and flinches.
"Nahi....mai-main maanti hoon ki jo Pia neh kiya--- woh-woh baut galat thi. Baut baut galat....paar please--- Mr. Walia--- aph to samajh sakte ke usne kyon kiya aisa...", Bani pleads. (trans: I agree that whatever Pia did wasn't right---it was very wrong...very wrong...but please- Mr. Walia-- you can understand why she has done this...)
He opens his eyes in a flash and peers down at Bani, making her feel even smaller than before.
"Mr. Walia, please...I beg of you.... I apologize for Pia's actions---".
"Do you think that only an apology is enough for the hurt she has inflicted on me!", Jai questions her, his voice still loud and deep. "Only a simple damn apology?!".
Bani holds down a sob and looks down, dejectedly. "Nahi...", she whispers. For a long moment no one speaks.
"....Jigyasa-- khedo sabh ko ke koi shaadi nahi honewala...tell them that they may all leave...". (trans: Jigaysa- tell everyone that there will be no wedding)
Stunned, Jigyasa blurts out, "Bhaiya, we will be disgraced! You will be humiliated! You cannot call off the wedding!".
"How the bloody hell can the wedding go on when my damn bride has run off?!".
After a long silent moment Jigyasa speaks again. "....She hasn't run off, Bhaiya....she is right here." Jai throws Jigyasa a startled look. "Yeh hai aapke Dulhaan...aapke saamneh...yeh Bani." (trans: Here is your bride...right in front of you...this Bani)
Jigyasa stares in Bani's direction. All of the color from Bani's face vanishes and she freezes in her spot, paralyzed. Jai looks at his sister with disbelief..........and slowly his eyes linger on Bani's trembling form.
Due to Jigyasa's persistence and reminding him over and over of the humiliation that he will have to suffer, Jai Walia unwillingly and bitterly wedded Bani Dixi, vowing to himself that he will cause her to suffer. He would seek his revenge for her lovely sister, Pia, through her.......and here he stands, two days later, suffering from pain and agony while everyone downstairs celebrate for his recent marriage.........
"She has run away with that lover boy of hers, Pushkar!"-----"She has left you behind and made you suffer the humiliation!"----"You have been disgraced, The Jai Walia has been disgraced!"---"She made a fool out of you and played with your emotions!"----
His sister's haunting words spin in Jai's head, arousing a terrible migraine and attacks his ego all over again....hurting his pride....A rapid rush of anger seethes inside of him, boiling in his blood, taking over his self control, and he feels his hold on his glass grow tighter until it shatters into glass pieces. His eyes switch over to the large bouquet resting on the glass table beside him. Tarun Sablok, his best friend, had given Bani and him those flowers, congratulating them on their marriage.
"What kind of flowers do you like, Pia"......"Mr. Walia, I love roses.....", she had said with a smile. "Especially red. I find them beautiful and really romantic....".
Her enchanting voice echoes throughout his ears.....To his great displeasure and hate, the flowers were roses, painted blood red....and there were a lot of them...lots and lots of them.....
"Mr. Walia, I love roses.....". Her beautiful face appears into his mind....Her eyes sparkling with excitement....her gorgeous brown wavy hair, resting neatly on her shoulders.....her wonderful pink looking lips....which forms into a bright smile, showing her dazzling white teeth..... What a fool he had been. A blind fool not to see her cunning personality....her true form.
In a blink of an eye, Jai immediately begins to attack the bouquet, tearing the wrapping apart, pulling on the flowers....stomping on them.....crumbling them....Heaving and breathless, Jai looks over at the scattered petals and stems on the marble floor around him.....that didn't satisfy him at all....didn't help at all to reduce his anger....he needed to break something, anything!
His flaming eyes rest on the clear glass table where the bouquet had rested upon seconds earlier.....Without hesitating for another millisecond, Jai attacks it and knocks it over, sending a loud crash and thousands of shattered glass to hit against the floor.....Jai's breathing grows rapid and his hands form into fists.....Due to the loud blaring music, no one would had heard a thing coming from his room....Better....better than before....but he wasn't quite satisfied yet either....
Overcome by insanity, Jai thunders around his room, throwing and breaking every little thing in his way....suddenly realizing something, he dashes over to his wardrobe, rummages through his things and withdraws out a picture album. The picture album containing all the photos and clicks from the engagement and mehendi rasam. He flips it open in a hurry and takes out the pictures, tearing them into small pieces and throws them in the trash bin. Giving up after ripping about a few pictures, he throws the whole album away and reaches into his pant pocket and takes out a matchbox. (Never know when you need a matchbox!😉 hahaha) In a rush, he opens the little packet and picks out a match and strikes it against the box. Burning orange fire erupts and he stares at it with a burning in his own eyes. He drops it in a swift movement and the objects in the trash bin catch in flames.....Jai feels the warm heat rise up against his face....
Just then he hears the turn of a knob move and stares away from the burning trash bin and up at his bedroom door, which flies open in a rush......His wife, dressed elegantly in a stunning black designer sari, her hair done in curls, vermilion filled in her parting, and the sacred thread of a married woman hanging lose around her neck, stands rooted in her tracks momentarily, stunned with what she sees.
Bani's eyes are instantly captured by the wild fire burning in the trash bin...."Mr. Walia", she stammers in fear....She switches her gaze over to her enraged husband, looking back at her with hate in his eyes.....Panic erupts inside of her as she sees blood dripping down from his right hand and staining the carpet underneath him. In a heartbeat she stands by his side and takes his hand into hers.
Bani: Mr. Walia! Yeh aaph ka haath ko kya hua?! (panicking) Itana sara koon! (trans: What has happened to your hands? There is so much blood!)
Grabbing onto her sari's pallu, Bani makes a movement to wipe away his oozing blood, but is prevented by Jai, who takes his hand back from her in a force and pushes her aside roughly. Bani runs into the dresser and holds in a yell of pain as her knee bangs hard against the drawer. She turns around and looks at him with tears brimming in her eyes.....She watches in a silent manner as he points at her, as if accusing her for a punishable crime....
Jai: Tum kyon cheenta khar rahi ho?! (trans: Why are you worrying?) Why should you worry over me?! - Save your pretense for someone else, Bani! It will not work on me! Saach to yeh hai ke tum baut khush ho mujhe aise dhekte! (trans: The truth is that you are very happy by seeing me like this!)
Bani: (whispers, pleading) Nahi....
Jai:--- You like to see me in pain, don't you Bani?! You and your damn sisters want that, right?!
Bani: (crying) Please...aise nahi hai--- (trans: It's not like that...)
Jai: ---(going on) Well you have got what you wished, Bani Dixit, I am in pain! Are you finally at peace now! You and your sister have ruined me!
Bani: Mr. Walia, please!
Jai: Go on and run to your sister! Celebrate together over the fact how you've successfully ruined Jai Walia!--And leave me the hell alone!!!!
Bani walks over to him and looks at him with her tearing eyes.
Bani: Please, meri baut to sunno, Mr. Walia! (trans: Please, listen to me, Mr. Walia!)
Jai: (snaps) Mujhe tumhari koi baut nahi sunnah chati ho! Just get out! (trans: I don't want to hear anything that you have to say.)
Bani: (in between tears, begs, desperate) Mr. Walia....
Jai stares into her eyes directly, silencing her with his cold gaze. Next thing she knows, she feels Jai's hand wrap around her wrist, hurting her, and him drag her along side with him, open the door, and shove her out of the room after saying, "Get out". He slams the door on her desperate pleading face. Bani feels her throat become sore trying to keep in her upcoming tears. Before she even has a chance to continue crying, she hears a gentle voice from behind.
"Arre, Bani Puttar, Jai kahan hai? I had sent you to look for him, didn't I?". Turning around after brushing off her remaining tears, Bani smiles faintly at the elderly woman.
Bani: Dadi woh apne kamreh mein hai--- Unki tabiyaat kuch teek nahi hai--- khaar rahi the ke woh aaram kaarneh chaate hai.... (trans: Dadi, he is in his room....his doesn't feel very well...he was saying that he wishes to rest.)
Dadi: Accha...phir teek hai. (smiles) Usko aaram karnleh do. Tum aao nah neeche. Saabh tumhari liye intezaar khar rahi hai. Tumhe milne chaati hai... (trans: Oh...alright then... Let him rest. You come on downstairs. Everyone is waiting to meet you...they want to see you.)
Bani: (bows her head) Ji....
Bani follows after Dadi back down into the enormous crowd and is swarmed by tons of guests greeting her and wishing her a happy marriage. She puts on a small polite smile throughout her chats and only after a few minutes, excuses herself of wanting to check up on her husband who isn't feeling well. They all believe her and tell her that it was lovely to meet her. She leaves to the guest room in a haste, closes the door shut behind her, throws herself upon her bed, and smothers her face into the pillows...in a matter of seconds she bursts out into tears which quickly turn into sobs....
After a few minutes by herself, Bani hears the bedroom door open and close softly. In a matter of seconds, someone beside her sits down, causing the mattress to sink on one side. Her body tenses, frightened and curious to know who this person is.
"Didi"...came a soft kind voice. Bani's heart lurches and she immediately gets up in a haste and stares into her sweet sister's face. She explodes into another fit of sobs as she sees tears in her sister's eyes.
Bani: Rano....
Bani flies into her sister's arms and feels safe with her Rano holding her tight. Together the sisters cry....for Pia.....for Jai.....for themselves....and for the unexpected......
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so.....what do you think?😕 should I continue?
~ Ch. 2 on PG 5
~ Ch. 3 on PG 9
~ Ch. 4 on PG 12
~ Ch. 5 on PG 15
~ Ch. 6 on PG 19
~ Ch. 7 on PG 23
~ Ch. 8 on PG 27
~ Ch. 9 on PG 31
~ Ch. 10 on PG 35
~ Ch. 11 A on PG 41
~ Ch. 11 B on PG 45
~ Ch. 12 on PG 49
~ Ch. 13 A on PG 53
~ Ch. 13 B on PG 56
~ Ch. 14 on PG 62
~ Ch. 15 on PG 69
~ Ch. 16/17 on PG 76
~ Ch. 18 on PG 85
~ Ch. 19 on PG 89
~ Picture of Bani's saree on PG 94
~ Ch. 20 on PG 96
~ Ch. 21 on PG 100
~ Ch. 22 A on PG 105
~ Ch. 22 B on PG 111
~ Ch. 23 on PG 118
~ Ch. 24 on PG 122
~ Ch. 25 on PG 126
~ Ch. 26 on PG 132
~ Ch. 27 A on PG 138
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