FF: A Bounded Relation...IMP Note on 149 - Page 73

Haaaaiiiiii 😳

It was a fantastic part 😳

That update was super fast hint 😉 hint 😉

That was really an awesome update..
JB 😳 😳 is cute..and they almost kissed..
jigyasa was funny 😆
but the peanut butter and jelly had laughing like crazy 😆 😆
continue soon'


nadia 😛

that was damm funny.. phele jai sayign a sandwitch name....😆 then the water.. oen was really funny ... jb fallign over each toher😳 hmm is taraf donon pyaar mein padjya.. shruwaat hochukii hai.. i tihnk roshni ki zarrorat hai donon koo milenekeliye i mena bani's jealously .. june 19th...😳

wowo muej nahi apta tum itni jaldi udpate karogii waht about next udpate? aaj hii?

pslssssss

have to say u r wonderful writer...

pls continue soon

👏

davia

Excellent part, loved the jb interaction. Please continue soon.

BD

hey, wow!!!!!!!!! mindblowin...............

loved the update!!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏 was laughin like crazy.........

Jai was afraid frm Bani just to say " I Love You"😳

humm wow!!!! endin scene was almost like😳

so they almost goin to KISS each other...............

i hope somethin wud happened in the room..........n Jai takes over the charge of it.....................😉😉😉

plzzzzzzzzzzz update soon

bye n tc

Ejzoo (Nikita)😳

Haila, two updates within two days? Yeh kaise ho gaya? Not that I'm complaining lol! I was about to come and comment on Chapter 20 when I saw you'd posted Chapter 21 as well! THANK YOU!!!! 🤗

Loved both updates! I really loved the whole dinner. It was so well planned and so beautifully written and potrayed! Loved how Bani questioned him about it and making sure it wasn't some kind of a sick joke he was pulling on her! I always knew Bani would forgive him but LOVED the way you wrote Jai's apology. The fact that he's realized how mistaken he was about Bani and realizes she's gone through the same pain of her sisters betrayal was awesome!

I'm loving Rano and Jai's relationship too. I always imagined them having a close jiju/sali relationship and I think with your ff, it's finally going to come true! It was really cute how Rano was trying to defend herself as to why she stayed up late! And Jai taking her into a hug, was so cute!

Anu is another character you always potray so beautifully! There's something about her character and the way her relationship with Jai is potrayed that I love! Love how she's hell bent on making Rano her babhi! It's so funny! Good job on writing that part!

OMG I LOVED the game! I can't believe Jai came up with 'I love peanut butter and jelly sandwiches', no wonder Mausi and others were trying to figure out what was so amusing about that when Bani couldn't help but laugh! So cute.

Haila, Bani spraying water on Jai was soooooooooo good! Loved how Jai didn't want an apology but revenge instead! Loved JB fighting over the hose and of course falling on top of each other and sharing the "moment"!

Goddess, absolutely LOVED both chapters! I can hardly wait to read the next chapter. I hope you will update soon as you'd done this week with these two updates.

Thank you again for the PM and keep sending those PMs with awesome updates!

Anam

Hi, I just read both parts and enjoyed them.. ha ha, me too loved the "the peanut butter & jelly sandwich" line... Hmm... seems like J is runout of lines to say!

Thanks and hv a wonderful Sunday!

loved it loved it lovedddddddddddddddddd it..especially the lawn scene 😳 😳more such scenes please 😳 😉
cant wait for the next part 😃

gr88 part
plz cont soon
loved it

hey ...............

awesome part................

bani opening up infront of jai..................

good progress................

update soon