SS One Shot: A World in Private - Page 4

That was soo romantic and beautiful.

Lovely, Brishty!!! Very sweet..
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Veryyyyyy romantic ff. 😳
Beautifully written 👏 👏 ...simple miya-biwi relationship...captured perfectly 😆 😳 Naraaz biwi ko manao after coming late😆 ..awwww...was really cute.

Lovely. Really enjoyed reading this. 👏 👏 😊

Taz 😊

Beautiful ff Brishty...very romantic
beautiful husband-wife relationship 😳 😳 😳....thoda sa khatta, thoda mettha aur thoda chatpatta 😳

Aww... soo cute BriTree! 😳 👏 👏

Loved it 👏 👏 hope you write more... would love to read them! 😃

haila brishty...eh ki...atho choto...uff...i was really into it...and the...hotath...sesh...uff...but it was good...loved it...nicely written...jai getting the slient treatment...and then teh balcony scene..awww...too cute...
JAZ

Hiya,

Beautiful short story.

Just like a movie.....dreamy.

Nikita

Loved it, love it and will love to read more in future.

Yes..it's really refreshing as Pooja and Rekha mentioned earlier 😃 .

Soooooo chooooooooweettttttt and lovey-dovey story as well 😳 😳 . Thanks dear 🤗 🤗 🤗

Originally posted by: ree_views

Bristu....

I didn't know whether to be interested or not...but I had nothing to do so i clicked here and read it..hahaha just joking! whatever you'll write you'll always find me reading given that I get to know about it or have access to it! Hun…do whatever joke you want to do, but I know that my dear ree_views will deffo come to put her reviews on my FFs…😉

Btw Pujo + Romantic story!!! you made the season more festive. In addition to that my latest addiction is "Tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon" and you made JB dance on it....yahoo...I mean they have shown it in the show too...but BDs spoilt the magic, at least we got to imagine JB here in their original self. …Hai hai…..me is the reason for festivity? ….ooh…that song is too good, I can't help humming it all the time…😆

Coming to technical points... so what was those above 😉

Again you did fabulous job. The reality merged with writing was great to read. Thanks for making me go 😳 😃 😳


Thank you sweetheart….have a happy pujo….😃

scifchick


Thank you very much for reading and commenting.

Bina


Aww….thank u hunny…😉

Taz


Thank you dear…😊


Yep, just like an everyday story of an ordinary couple, but I guess it's the magic of our JB that makes the most ordinary think look great…😛


I'm glad you enjoyed it…😛
Ridhi

Exactly hun, thoda khatta, thoda meetha, thoda chatpata….😳😳….thanks for the lovely comment hunn


Ickly Pickly

Who is cute Tanu? Me, right? 😃😃

And I thought you were not interested? 😉


Jaz

Ki dosto, choto i to bhalo….short and sweet…😳…….ahare….ami jokhon likhchilam tokhon to mone holo onek boro….😃……….Thank you jaan…😳