SS One Shot: A World in Private - Page 3

Raisa..


Thank you dear...and I agree with you..short is sweet, 😊


Don't mention thanks Hun, the pleasure was all mine


Taj


awww...thanks....😊....that's some compliment...😳...glad that you liked it...😊


Sadaf


Thanks yaar...😊


Hmm, I tried to write something on everyday couple.....to show that even an ordinary couple's story can be sweet...😳..hope you all have liked the theme...😆

Waoh.. that was a cute little romantic story….Rain and JB romance – deadly combination…. The song selection was also apt for the story…

hey bristy
a very romantic part 👏
cont.sooon

Bristy,

It was so lovely, JB 😳 😳 😳 I liked it very much, beautiful selection of songs, their description, the way you've portrait JB, lovely 👏
Well done.
Thanks.

Love,
Sukh 😊

Fantastically written... a very refreshing and romantic story... well done 👏

Pooja

Brishti,

That was beautifully written👏👏👏

As Poo correctly words it, very refreshing storyline....

And the romance was 😳😳😳

There are a lot of different kind of stories which evoke different emotions in you...but the one which can make you smile is perhaps one which remains the closest to your heart! And your story did make me smile a lot!😃

Lovely girl! Please do write more like these!

Btw, is today the return of the prodigals on the IF forum? First Cordelia...then Armana....and now Poo....😃

Undoubtedly, its great to see friends back🤗

Cheers,

MT

Awww, chooooooooooo chweeeeeeeeeeeeet!!

Lovely romance! I wish they did something like this in KS...

Bristu....

I didn't know whether to be interested or not...but I had nothing to do so i clicked here and read it..hahaha just joking! 😆 whatever you'll write you'll always find me reading given that I get to know about it or have access to it!

Btw Pujo + Romantic story!!! you made the season more festive. In addition to that my latest addiction is "Tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon" and you made JB dance on it....yahoo...I mean they have shown it in the show too...but BDs spoilt the magic, at least we got to imagine JB here in their original self.

Coming to technical points...

Again you did fabulous job. The reality merged with writing was great to read. Thanks for making me go 😳 😃 😳

Nandita


Thank you...😳....yep, you put Rain in anything and it have to be great...sorry but me is a lot biased when Rain is cocerned...😛



Janu


Thanks Jaan, but it was an one part story, so no cont soons...😃


Minu


Thanks Hun....😳

Aww.....thanks, it is sweet.....me is happy now...😉




Shiya


Really Hun? I'm glad it did....😊

Aw, so sweet, you read it again...😛



Thanks Jaan.....for making me write it and then reading it...😆



Pooja


Refreshing? Now that's something new...😆😆


Thank you hunn, for such an unique compliment of my story...😊



MT


Aww....thanks.....😳


Again refreshing? Dear Pooja, you gave me centre fresh title? 😆😆



Actually yes, what can be better than a pure smile after a hard day? Well, sad stories also touch the heart but it makes us hate the author......😃😃...am glad that it made you smile (I hope it's the goofy type grin thinking, "Duffers, they never learn" instead of smiling at me, "what this stupid has written"..😉)



I'll try to.....but I'm very unefficient in writing romantic stuffs, takes me long......😛..thanks for the compliment on me 😉



Shoba Di



😆😆....it's the influence of our Y generaton genes dear...😉


Nah, cause when JW comes back home in KS, Bani is busy figuring out Raaz & their outcomes....😉



Thanks.....😃