FF - At 17, update Pt 27/pg 60 Nov 8 End - Page 10

Hey Sweety,

I am traveling, I have to catch up on all the parts but I will - on the 19th...take care and keep writing....

Great part Divan. Wow!!! Taz and all JB girls got a gift from Jai Walia. Hope Taz is going to follow Jai's advise 😉 😃 . Wondering where Jai has taken to Bani for a night. Please continue sooner 😃
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Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

Hey Sweety,

I am traveling, I have to catch up on all the parts but I will - on the 19th...take care and keep writing....

I hope you are traveling for pleasure and not business.

Awesome part.
loved it.
JB are married couple now...god bless them
Taz and bunter 😆 😆 😆 😆.....she is Ranveer's lastest gal...oye Taz be careful yaar 😉
awww...beautiful presents Jai gave to JB girls and Taz the ghodiwali 😆
plz cont. soon

Hi Divan….wowzer...two updates...had a bit to catch up...but boy were they fantastic updates!!! 👏 👏 👏 Majaa aa gaye ff ka…as basanti would say it. 😆 Loved it for start to finish!😃

Part 4

Jai looked hot in his sherwani 😍…yaar when doesn't this guy look hot. Bani also looking beautiful as always. Loved that flirting scene …😳 U captured the whole mehndi and sangeet function so well👏…was like I was there attending the functions itself. Too good Divan! 👍🏼 👏

JB girls performance was great 👏…didn't they look hot in pink 👍🏼…Jigna drooling over Jai …bit gutted to find him being spoken for. Ranveer, saahil and pushkar joining in the dances…superb. 👏 Bani doing that old number...one of my fave songs. Jai getting over-excited like Jeetu!!! 😆 😆 Tell me did he have white shoes? 🤔 😆

As for my entry…haiiiiiiiiiiii 😲…bada kamaal ka tha😳…wow… 👏 😆

Adi called Ranveer over and asked to go and bring the ghodi up to the front of the house. Oh righty…here I come! Ranveer went outside to look for the ghodi and boy was he in for a surprise. Hai ram kudiyon ka hai zamana!!! 😉 😆 He saw a pure white Lipizzaner Stallion, decorated in red and gold waiting patiently, but what made his heart jump was the beautiful woman standing next to the horse holding the reins.Haila…he's staring!!!! 😲 Taz the owner of the horse was dressed in a dark red outfit that showed off her curves off provocatively. The choli revealed her creamy bare midriff Steady dear…zyaada detail mat likhna 😳 and her long hair in a braid with the golden tassles at the end hung over her shoulders. (What Taz is wearing)Haiii…love the outfit! Ek phataka lag rahi hoon!!! 😉 😆 😳 Ranveer toh clean bowled ho gaya hai! 😳

As Ranveer approached look dashing in a gold sherwani, Taz batted her eyelids at him.Bilkul aise na…😍 😆 She whispered quietly, "Prabhu , sansaar mai aisi koi baat to hai nahi jo tumse chhoopi ho. tum to sab jaante ho. Dekho mai ye nahi kahati ke tumhe yaad nahi hoga , lekin phir bhi apni taraf se kah denaa achchaa hotaa hai. Aaj ktna subh din hai. bas ek chhotisi binati hai prabhu. Dekho .. jaraa Dekho ye ghodi ki lagaam khinchate khinchate haath aise ho gaye. hai jaise ghodi ke khoor. Arre tumhare liye kya mushkeel hai? bas who rajkumaar aatia hari usse baat lagaao prabhu ke Taz raani ban ke raaj karay , yu ke majaa aa jaae jindagi kaa. aage jaisi tumhari marzi." Arre…yu ke kamaal ka dialogue hai Divan👏..Basanti in the mandir wala scene yaad aygaay!!
Ranveer could smell the scent of jasmine coming from the gajra worn by Taz.Woh bhi balon mein lagaya hai😳…wow…achhi mehek aa rahi hai I see 😉 He should in front of her and stuttered, "mei…aapko…bulane…aya…meri saath chalogi…" Aye hai…mein marjawan!😳
Taz swayed her hip slightly and stared in his eyes and husked, "any where with you handsome."Haila…me swaying my hips…I can so imagine that 🤣 She linked her arm through Ranveer and planted a kiss on her ghodi, Dhano, "Yaar, you are still my best friend." Meri pyaari dhano ko kaise bhool sakti hoon 🤗

Btw I checked my Chinese horoscope and guess what…I am Earth Horse!!!! 🤣 So apt na!!!!! 🤣

Part 5

Oh Mannnnnn…I was in stitches reading this one😆😆😆….blushing…😳😳 fainting….haila!!!! 😲 Ranveer telling Aditya that ke found his dil ki rani…haila!!! 😳 😆…Me swooning....praying to god promising ek dozen nariyals!!!! 🤣 🤣 Liked how I was talking to my ghoda….mithai dena ka vada kiya! 😉

Then Jai came…HAILAAAAAAA…he called me sexy!!!!! 😳 😍❤️…La la land paunchane ka poora intezaam kiya hai aaj 😍😳😳

JB girls…looking fab 👍🏼....showering Jai with rose petals…haiiii👏…Dulhe raja jo aa raha hai! 😳 Liked how they walked with Bani too with lighted diyas 😃 😃

Then me again…holding onto Ranveer tightly!!!! 🤣 Jai coming forward and kissed my hand…he'd never seen a haseen ghodewali like me….ok I am dead!!!! 😳 😳 😳 Giving me advice on how to handle ranveer and bought me gift too….chooooo chweeeeettt!!!! 🤗 White gold cartier watch hey…I love 😃😳

Jai has a helicopter arranged to whisk them away for their wedding night….aye haiiii…soo romantic na!!!😳 Too good! 👏

Fantastic update👏…really enjoyed myself reading both of them…I didn't mind one bit that u included me in ur ff 😊…dear pata nahin…a lot ff writers are adding me into their ff's lately…been a interior designer…receptionist…Doctor…Principal…aur pata nahin kya kya….aaj ghode wali ban gayi…love it!!! 👍🏼 😆 Was really nice to see other If members in this ff too. Doing a great job with this ff... Keep it coming! 🤗

Cont soon sweety.
Tazooo!!! 🤗

Pt 1

Pt 2

Pt 3

Pt 4


Pt 5


(here I tepid offering of the suhaag nite, if you really want to read a great suhaag nite, go and read Sheena or Sabjs or MT's ff. They are the masters of writing really intense, romantic scenes.)


At Seventeen – Pt 6

Tere Mere Milan Ki Ye Raina
Naya Koi Gul Khilayegi
Tabhi To Chanchal Hain Tere Naina
Dekho Na
Dekho Na, Tere Mere Milan Ki Ye Raina

Nanha Sa Gul Khilega Angna
Sooni Bainyaan Sajegi Sajna
Jaise Khele Chanda Baadal Mein
Khelega Vo Tere Aanchal Mein
Chandaniya Gungunayegi
Tabhi To Chanchal Hain Tere Naina, Dekho Naa...

Tujhe Thaame Kai Haathon Se
Miloonga Madbhari Raaton Mein
Jagake Ansuni Si Dhadkan
Balamvaa Bhar Doongi Tera Man
Nayi Ada Se Satayegi
Tabhi To Chanchal Hain Tere Naina, Dekho Naa...(Abhimaan)

Bani gasped as Jai pointed out the Taj Palace hotel in the middle of Lake Pichola. The marble architecture glistened in the moonlight, the Aravalli Mountains making a perfect backdrop. As they alighted the manager and a team of staff rushed forward to welcome them and get their luggage.
Jai had reserved the Mayur Mahal or Peacock Palace suite for them. The suite was inspired by the resplendent beauty of the iridescent blue, green and bronze hues of the peacock. The peacock has traditionally been regarded as a symbol of royalty, love, fertility and the rains. Artistically crafted with glass mosaic peacock motifs embellishing the walls of this exquisite suite and its rich interiors create a regal ambience. The coloured glass window panels change the mood in the room with the shifting sunlight.

The room offered luxurious comfort and designed befitting royalty. The guest amenities include clawfoot bathtubs with gold fixtures, marble tiles, orante mirrors and spacious lounge areas. The mahagony bed and furniture covered in opulent silks patterned in peacock colours. The staff had decorated the suite by placing discreet groups of candles which threw dim light around the room. The bowls filled with jasmine and roses scented the air and the cool breeze from the lake made the whispy silks covering the window flutter gently.
Left alone at last, Jai watched as Bani walked and stared wide eyed around the room. Finally stopping in front of the coloured glass window, she gently pushed the silks back and threw open the window to gaze at the dark moonlit waters. The looming mountains stood regally in the dark velvety night. Turning around she looked at Jai with glowing eyes and said, "It's beautiful..."
Jai walked slowly towards her taking in her pale silhouette in the pink sari, mehndi covered hands still full of chudas and bangles and just her manglesutra, small diamond studs and bindi. He stood in front of her and looking outside once, he looked intensely at her and whispered, "I agree, extremely beautiful…" Bani blushed as she realized the words were meant for her. She looked down at hands clasped in front of her.
Jai lifted her hands and turned them around and looked at her menhdi covered hands. He traced the pattern with his fingers. Bani whispered, "Your name's written in the design."
He did not say anything but raised the hands up and stared until he found the name and pointed at it and looked up and with a smile on his face said, "What is my reward for finding your name?"
She looked innocently at him and whispered, "I don't have any gift for you."
Jai pressed a kiss on her forehand and whispered, "You have the most precious gift in the world to give…your love…"
(June 19th here we go…)
Jai lifted his slightly and watched her closed eyes and quivering lips. He kissed each of the eyes and felt her warm breath on his face as a soft sigh escaped her lips. Bani felt his heart beating rapidly in rhythm with hers as he wrapped his arms and hugged her. Jai carefully pushed the pallu off her shoulders and caressed the exposed skin. Bani moaned in pleasure as Jai trailed kisses up her throat until his lips rested on hers. Kissing her tenderly he played with her lips until she parted them under gentle pressure of his tongue. As he deepened the kiss, Bani wrapped her arms around his neck and kissed him with a passionate abandon that left the both of them breathless. He returned her kiss with equal passion and he lifted her up and walked over to the bed. He laid her gently on the bed without letting go of her and they kissed each other again, losing themselves in each other. As the passion mounted his fingers moved towards her blouse and started undoing the hooks and then slipping the blouse down her arms he trailed kisses down her exposed skin that made her cry out his name, overwhelmed by the sensations of what he was doing to her. Slowly the pile of clothes at side of the bed grew as her sari and his sherwani came off. Under the soft glow of the candles and moonlight Jai made love to Bani…made love to the woman who had walked into his life on her seventeenth birthday.
They laid in the bed holding each other afterwards, not wanting to let the other go, until they finally drifted off to sleep.

Bani stirred as the light streamed through the coloured glass window casting patterns on the silk covers and the walls. She stared mesmerized at the play of colours until she felt Jai move next to her. Turning her head she encountered his eyes looking at her mischievously. Pulling her towards him, his voice husky from emotions, "did you sleep well?" Her cheeks flaming red Bani nodded her head and buried her face in his chest. She felt his throaty laughter as he held her tight against him.

This is just the right spot to stop. I hope all of you who were looking forward to this are happy. Let me know the good, the bad and the ugly.

If I carry on the ff than Roshni will be coming back.

Halia 😃 😃 😃 !!That was beautiful, and just as good as Sabs or Sheena (guys don't kill me you know I love you 😆 😆 ). Aww what a wonderful suprise.

wonderful part pls cont soon.......

Awwww, what a beautiful setting for a honeymoon - everything is just right except for the forecast - containing the R word 😡
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Fantastic part......wonderful setting for a suhaag raat.....everything beautifully penned.....but yeh Roshni the cobra 😡 😡 ....ufff....thanks to you 😆 😆 . Please continue soon.
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