FF - At 17, update Pt 27/pg 60 Nov 8 End - Page 12

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Divan,

that was just amazing,loved how you got the whole family involoved in the story.Jai is just so cute,loving it.looking forward to the next part. 👏



preet 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hi divan…took a while getting to ur update sorry! 😔 Anyways yeh kya hogaya!!! 😲 😲 Ranveer got Raashi pregnant…the other day he he was with me!! Jai ki ghodewali!!! 😳 Haila…he said "my Ghodiwali" 😳 😳 😍…boy I bet that made Bani jealous. 😉 😆

Ranveer kitna bada flirt nikla!!! 😡 Two timing nahin…three timing little dimwit!!! 😡 😆 Remember those ek dozen nariyals divan…well seen as though he has agreed to marry raashi…ab shaadi hogi ghodewali ki doobara zaroorat hogi…saath mein woh ek dozen nariyals bhi leke aaungi…uss Ranveer ke chikne sar pe phorne ke liye!!😡 Tazoo ke saath gadaari…bahut mehngi paregi!!! 🤣

Cracking update 👏 👏 😆 …more fun on its way it seems with the wedding and all. Bechara Jai feeling a little neglected with all the wedding preps going on. 😕
Do cont soon

Tazoo 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
Tazoo ke saath gadaari…bahut mehngi paregi!!! He's a chicken, he'll run a mile away from you now. Bechara takla toh hai, woh dozen nariyals toh uska sir phod dega.......... 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: divan

Tazoo ke saath gadaari…bahut mehngi paregi!!! He's a chicken, he'll run a mile away from you now. Bechara takla toh hai, woh dozen nariyals toh uska sir phod dega.......... 😆



😆😆Thats the idea sweety!!! Ranveer messed with me!!! 😡Kaho toh nariyals ke saath chaabuk bhi le aaoon?😆 When will u updating btw?
janu_2006 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey divan
gr8 part 👏
cont. soon
sangitadas thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hi Divan

Just read the last 3 parts at one go and must say - you write beautifully. 👏 👏 👏

Poor JB. Being thrust into this cacophony after a day of their marriage and of course Ranveer doing the lambada well in advance. SO this means Rano and ghodowali out of the pic 😉 😆 😆

Loved reading it, please update soon. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hiya,

awesome part.....Ranveer is such a badmash.

I love the way Jai tries to get Bani alone.

Please continue soon.

Nikita
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Posted: 17 years ago
Ok Taz I hope you are happy with your dozen nariyal and chabook….

This part is for all of your readers who took time to post comments, let me know what you think. Any major mistakes let me know.

AT Seventeen PT 7

aarzoo hai pyaar ki dil ki hai intezaa
hai khwaaishe dhadkan ki yeh na rahe abb dooriyan

baahon mein baahein ho raat din, pyaar ho darmiyaan
tune dil ko chhuaa hai o jaane jaan
yeh mujhe kya hua hai o jaane jaan (kaisay khaeen)


Once again Walia mansion got adorned for Ranveer and Raashi's wedding. It was as lavish as Jai's and once againt the dhaamal and masti filled days leading to the wedding.
At the sangeet the JB Gurls got to do the honors again and danced to the song "Didi tera dewar diwana…" dragging Bani into the dance. But the fun did not end with there, a little birdie told Tazo about Ranveer's extracurricular activities and so the sexy ghodiwali came dressed in black, carrying puja ki thali with dozen nariyals and her kali chabook. Poor Ranveer took one look and went and hid behind his Jai mamaji, but mamaji was too awed by Tazo's Maa Kali roop to come between her and her prey.
And so the guests got spectacular entertainment…Tazo and Ranveer…Tazo's sansanaat chabook and Ranveer reeling from the nariyal puja. Eventually Jai took pity on Ranveer and somehow manofied/pataowedTazo telling her he will personally set up date with his protg, Moksh…(Taz just imagine Moksh in that sherwani, I couldn't find a good pic of him)


Taz's Sari………




On the wedding day everyone had their eyes on Jai and Bani, both of dressed elegantly in designer attire. Even though they had both gone for simplicity, they still managed to cause stir.
Once the wedding was over, the bride and groom and were sent off on honeymoon by Jai, he had booked a package to make sure that masi did not have any excuse to keep all of them tied to the house. Bani had no clue Jai too had planned to fly them on their honeymoon. And so when she saw two packed suitcases in their room, she looked at Jai and asked, "Are you going somewhere and forgot to tell me?"
Jai had asked Anu secretly to pack clothes for Bani and him for their trip. Looking at her innocently Jai said, "Not me, we both are going on our honeymoon? Everything is arranged, we just have to show up at the airport."
Feeling piqued at being left out of the plan, she puckered her lips and said in honeyed voice, "It's so nice of you to ask me if I wanted to go on honeymoon or not Mr Walia."
Jai had figured out whenever Bani called him Mr Walia that she was annoyed and but he wasn't going to worry about it. If she couldn't find half an hour during the day to spend with him then she can just go along with his plan.
In the car Bani sat as far away from him as possible, she was going to let him know that she was upset. Jai just ignored her and pretended he was looking outside. At the airport he got everything sorted out, the luggage and the checking in. Bani still hadn't asked him where they were going, but just watched as he did things in his usual efficient manner.
The flight wasn't long and Bani had managed to doze off and only woke up when the plane landed. She looked a little disoriented and Jai took pity on her and told her they had just arrived in Jaipur and would be driving off to Mt Abu where they will be staying in a his cottage. Bani just followed him silently as they collected their luggage and went outside to the SUV waiting to drive them off.
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Ranveer lay sprawled on the bed staring up at the ceiling. He could hear Raashi retching inside the bathroom He scrunched his eyes and thought, what a honeymoon. All Raashi had done was moan, run to the bathroom and throw up, then come back to bed, lie down and just curl up and sleep. Mamaji must have been out of his mind when he gifted them a week in Paris. His mamaji was right, he should have been thinking with his head not his pe**s, even better he should have taken celibacy vows and become a sanyasi…those ancient men knew what they were doing…women were trouble with a big T. Thank God it was only a week, otherwise he would have run off with the first pretty blonde that flirted with him. And so it was Ranveer went sightseeing by himself after Raashi forced him, saying he didn't have to babysit her and since his mamaji had been kind enough to give him holiday he might as well try and at least some of the attractions. Raashi had been getting irritated with Ranveer moping around, she was feeling miserable as it was and she didn't need to hear his sigh and groans whenever she ran to the bathroom.
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It was dark when the SUV stopped in front of the cottage, which was more like a haveli. Jai arounsed Bani and helped her inside. The caretaker had come and spruced the place up and was waiting for their arrival. Greeting them, he took their luggage to the room and after asking Jai if he needed anything further. Jai dismissed him and showed Bani to their room. Bani was too tired to do look around and just removed her sari, put on her first she pulled out the suitcase, a t-shirt and crawled into bed. By the time Jai came back she was fast asleep.
It was still dark outside, Jai woke up and listened to the faint sounds coming from somewhere in the house. He turned to wake Bani up, but she wasn't there. He got up wondering where did she go to, it was only 4 in the morning. Walking towards the light source, Jai found himself near the kitchen. He stood and watched, as Bani clad in one of his t-shirt that came up to her hips and so her shapely legs were in display. As she opened a cupboard and stretched up, the t-shirt rode up, revealing her lacy underwear. A quiet explicative escaped her mouth as she stared at the open cupboard. Jai stealthily crept behind her and wrapped his arms around her, "what are you looking for Bani? All this gussa and its not even morning."
Bani turned around in his arms and pecking him on lips, "Sorry, maine aapko jaaga diya lekin, I am feeling hungry and wanted to make something to eat."
Jai pulling her closer to him, "my fault, last minute idea and I forgot to tell Harikaka to stock up the kitchen. Come back to bed and when its light we can go out and look."
"But I don't want to go back to bed, I am not sleepy."
"Well since I am wide awake too, I can think up something to do to keep us occupied." He eyes glinted mischievously at her as he tugged at her t-shirt, "You know you are looking very sexy in my t-shirt…you should wear it every night so I can take it back…"
Jai stopped and his eyes grew big as Bani lifted the corners of his t-shirt and pulled it up, threw the t-shirt at him and sauntered past him giving him a wink. Gulping for air he just followed her back to the bedroom.
Bani forgot her hunger pangs as she and Jai made love.
Much later, a knock on the bedroom door woke Jai up, putting on his clothes he opened the door to find Harikaka with a tea tray.
"Namaste kaka," Jai greeted Harikaka, who had looked after this place since he was ten years old.
"Namaste beta, naasta taiyaar hai, chahiye toh mei…"
"Nahi kaka, isski jaroorat nahi hai. Hum thodi dere mei aate hai."
Jai showered and got ready before waking Bani up, telling her to freshen up as breakfast was waiting for her.
Both of them went to the dining table to find the dishes set out. Jai introduced Bani to Harikaka. They helped themselves to tea and hot parathas and dahi, and selection of fresh fruits sliced up. It was a first time in many days where they could sit and eat at leisure without being bothered by anyone.
After breakfast Jai showed her around the cottage, which really was an old haveli in need of sprucing up. The rooms filled with antique furniture and paintings needed some attention. The garden outside was neatly maintained with beautiful flowers blooming all around the house. Jai told her he had brought the haveli several years back on a spur of the moment as he had fell in love with the place.


Next update may be delayed, had to take a day off today and boss said tomorrow got to get going with the next project.

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Posted: 17 years ago
second.
that was awesome.
loved it..
hehe..
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
Great part Divan. It seemed JB are enjoying their honemoon while Ran was cursing his mamaji 😆 😆 . Great going so far. Please continue soon.
👏 👏 👏

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