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Posted: 18 years ago
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divan my small, little tazo billi(my darling tazo) as basanti of sholay will be really great 😆 and JW sitting on dhanno 😆, bechare ghoda- daab ke gadha na ban jaye 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: swatinarang

divan my small, little tazo billi(my darling tazo) as basanti of sholay will be really great 😆 and JW sitting on dhanno 😆, bechare ghoda- daab ke gadha na ban jaye 😉

swati



She'll make sure its a famous Austrian Lipizzaner stallion, with ancestery going as far back as 1700, a pure thorough bred (gotta have the best for munna)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: divan



She'll make sure its a famous Austrian Lipizzaner stallion, with ancestery going as far back as 1700, a pure thorough bred (gotta have the best for munna)



Haila! 😲 Yeh kya baatein ho rahi hai meri!!! My sherni has a problem with my role as a ghode wali? 😆
JW will not flatten the horse sweety achha intezaam kiya hai😉...Divan has given all the details!!! Munna has to have the best after all!!! 😳
Divan u update when u can...take ur time.😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PT 1 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=726714
PT2 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=726714&T PN=4
PT3 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=726714&T PN=8


At Seventeen – Pt 4
Koi haseena jab rooth jaati hai to
Aur bhi haseen ho jaati hai
Tesan se gaadi jab chhoot jaati hai to
Ek do tin ho jaati hai
Haathon mein chaabukh, honthon pe gaaliyaan
Badi nakhre waaliyaan hoti hai taange waaliyaan
Koi taange waali jab rooth jaati hai to, hai to, hai to
Aur namkeen ho jaati hai
Koi haseena jab rooth jaati hai to
Aur bhi haseen ho jaati hai
Zulfon mein chaiyya, mukhde pe dhoop hai
Hey, zulfon mein chaiyya, mukhde pe dhoop hai
Bada mazadaar goriye yeh tera rang roop hai
Dor se patang jab toot jaati hai to, hai to, hai to
Rukh rangeen ho jaati hai
Koi haseena jab rooth jaati hai to
Aur bhi haseen ho jaati hai
Tesan se gaadi jab chhoot jaati hai to
Ek do tin ho jaati hai (sholay)


Jai mused as he waited for masi and rest of the family to get ready for the sangeet. He had already been put on his clothes…Turquoise colored pure silk kurta pajama with embroidery on the collar and front and asymmetric embroidery on the chest, with plain black pyjama had been chosen by Anu, Bani and masi. The trio had gone shopping for him and had spent whole day going through countless outfits before selecting several suits keeping in mind all the ceremonies. When they arrived home loaded with bags upon bags of clothes, Jai had wondered if they had used up his credit limit.
He took the quiet time to reflect on the past two weeks, where the wedding was almost called off because Bani had cold feet and she had come to her senses when he had threatened to carry her off into his bedroom and show her how much he loved her, saying he didn't need to go through all the rituals etc to make Bani his. Jai told her she was stubborn, passionate and excitable and he would love to see demo of how passionate and excitable she could be. One night whilst surfing the web, Jai decided to check out Chinese horoscope to see if her personality matched one defined for her birth year.
(Bani's Chinese Horoscope
Earth Dragon people are the most eccentric in the Chinese Zodiac. Soaring high into the serene heavens, they can be stubborn, passionate, excitable, honest, and brave, wear purple and walk barefoot in public fountains. They listen to their own drummer, thank you very much, while the rest of the world stands in amazement. People always admire their individuality and feisty personality. Dragons are capable of doing great work for mankind and they inspire trust in almost everyone. The Dragon symbolizes life and growth and is said to bring the five blessings: harmony, virtue, riches, fulfillment and longevity.
Jai's Chinese Horoscope
Wood Tiger people are sympathetic, kind, emotional, and sensitive. At movies, they can cry their eyes out! Despite their kindness, they can be extremely short-tempered. The rage of Tigers is terrible to behold but it also gives them the adrenaline needed for the sublimest of bravery. The Tiger is also a deep thinker and can make the most astonishing intellectual connections, with great mental agility. On the negative side, they tend to be suspicious and a bit self-centered, OK selfish, and indecisive. Above everything, however, the Tiger stands as a supreme emblem of protection over human life, admirable always.
Heres the link for anyone interested in seeing what they are: http://www.tuvy.com/entertainment/chinese_horoscope.htm
)
After one day of trying to plan the wedding with masi and Kiran, Jai had given up and decided to hire a professional wedding consultant and let them deal with Bani, Kiran and masi. The sangeet was to be held in the garden of Walia mansion. A large tent had been set up two days ago and the decorator and spent half day today arranging lights, flowers, candles etc A separate catering tent had been busy creating dishes to please several palates. The smell of the food had wafted into the house making everyone sneak out to the tent and sample the dishes.
Bani arrived with Kiran and went straight to the tent as they expected everyone to be there. Seeing Jai and family had not arrived they just mingled with the few guests already arrived. Few minutes later Anu arrived with a bunch of giggling girls carrying backpacks. They walked up to Bani and Anu introduced them….Jigna, Bunny, Harv, Rivya, Ridhi, Coolgurl, HeartBreaker, the girls called themselves the JB Gurlz (J for Jigna and B for Bunny as they are the main choreographers) and will be performing a dance at party. Bani gave them her sweet smile and hoped the girls would stay around for the rest of the party after the dance. Anu took the girls to the house where they could change into the costume. They spied Jai looking extremely sexy and fell over themselves as Jigna almost stopped to ogle at the man. Once in the room the girls bombarded Anu with questions about the sexy guy downstairs and were disappointed when they found out the guy was her mamaji and he was getting married in two days time. The girls soon perked up when Anu told them there will be other hot guys at the party, including her two brothers, Ranveer and Sahil.
Jai and family made their way to the tent, but not before Jai berated Jigyasa for taking so long to get ready. Bani's eyes lit up as she saw Jai entering the tent, looking so hot in the turquoise kurta. Jai smirked at Bani staring at her and blew her a kiss as he walked up to her. Twirling her around as he admired the dark pink georgette sari with resham and kundan jari embroidery. He whistled at the almost backless blouse making her blush. Adi thumped Jai in the back and said, "That's enough of drooling at your fiance, show some respect and stop embarrassing her in front of elders." Draping his arm over Bani's shoulder, Jai glared at Adi, "Find your own girl to drool at Adi, leave me and Bani alone."
Adi rolled his eyebrows and joked, "Your sister has eyes in the back of head, if I did what you just did with a beautiful woman she would bite my head off." Ranveer and Sahil who were standing behind Adi grabbed his arm and said "Come on dad let's go and find our own girls before mamaji wraps mami up in a burka." The trio went off laughing at Jai glowered at them.
Slowly the guests arrived and soon the tent was buzzing with guests talk and laughter. Avibhaiya of Avi Styling had been hired by Jai to video tape the events and so he came looking hot and sexy in black kurta. He brought along his other two buddies Ravi and Manish to help out…Ravi and Manish were more of a hindrance to Avi than help as they had really came to check out the JB Gurlz. They had heard JB Gurlz were going to dance at the party.(There are so few guys on the KS forum so thought why not include them in the ff.)
Soon it was time for the entertainment to begin and Anu arranged to get Jai and Bani to sit in front of the stage. The lights dimmed and JB Gurlz dressed in pink (Jai's favourite colour), complete with pink and silver jewellery and hands of full of bangles glided on the stage. (saris worn by JB Gurlz)


Music began and the girls launched into a lively cheography to "Mere Haathon Main Nau Nau Chudiyaa Hai". Lot of clapping and whistling accompanied the dancing as the girls twirled and moved to intricate steps. During the last chorus of the song, Jigna went and pulled Jai on the stage and completed the last routine dancing around the dulha to be. When the dance ended the tent erupted with claps and shouts of more. Jai thanked the girls and kissed (only on the cheeks, lips are reserved for Bani) as they left the stage. Bani walked over to the girls where they were standing and thanked them for putting on a wonderful dance. She invited all of them to the mehndi party next day and to the wedding. As Bani walked away a Ranveer, Sahil,and Pushkar came up and asked the girls if they would do join them for a dance since they wanted to dance to "Bole chudiyaan Bole kangna…" Bunny asked them to wait a minute while they talked it over. The girls went away and talked in hushed tones for minute or so and then Bunny walked back and looked at Ranveer, "We'll do it but it'll cost you. You have to take all of us out to dinner at a restaurant of our choice." Ranveer, Sahil and Pushkar all shouted together, "It's a deal. Ok we'll give you few minutes to get ready while we get Anu to organize the music."
Ten minutes later, the lights dimmed again, the guys walked on the stage, including Ravi and Manish…they weren't going to miss a chance of dancing with their favourite girls. The music started and as the girls joined the guys, a loud cheer went up almost drowning out the music.
JB Gurlz had previously done this dance so had all the moves and as they did their moves, the guys struggled to match them with Sahil and Pushkar falling over each other couple of times. Ranveer seemed to be the only one that could match the steps danced by the girls. The end of dance again brought on lots of cheering, clapping and whistling.
Finale of the entertainment ended with surprise for Jai. Anu had blackmailed Bani to do a dance and so as Bani came on the stage, Jai clapped and whistled the loudest in the crowd. Bani turned beetroot red and wanted to walk off the stage. Bani danced to one of her favourite songs "Piyaa tose nainaa laage re, nainaa laage re, jaane kyaa ho ab aage re". Unknown to Jai Kiran had forced Bani to take Bharatnatyam lessons for several years when she was young, and therefore she danced gracefully with emotive facial expressions.
Kiran had tears in her eyes, as it had been a long time since Bani had done any dancing. When the dance ended there was a moment of silence and then everyone started clapping, Jai just jumped on the stage (a la jumping Jeetendra style) and picked up Bani and twirled her around and planted her kiss on her cheek. (Gotta make some JB moments just like the tv) Avi made sure he recorded all of it for Jai.
The party ended quiet late as dinner, dancing and more fun followed. The JB Gurlz were seen off by Jai and Bani with promises of seeing them at the mehndi party next day.
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The mehndi party was held at Bani's house, actually it was held on the roof top balcony of the building that all the tenants shared in the building. It was decorated with pots of jasmine, pink impatients, roses and large bowls with lotus and floating diyas. Colourful Chinese lanterns cast soft light around the balcony. It was going to be small affair with very close friends of Bani and Jai's family.
The JB Gurlz had arrived early and they all were having mehndi done on their hands. Bani already had one hand covered in mehndi design all the way up to her elbow. The girls were having fun feeding each other and dancing to the songs being played on the cd player. Bani was being teased by her friends, especially by the ones that were already married.
Jai sat with the guys in one corner drinking and talking but all the while watching Bani. After some time he walked over towards the girls and was immediately hauled by Anu to sit next to Bani. The girls teased their jiju and tried to get him have a mehndi tattoo done on his arms. Jai good naturedly humoured the girls but refused the tattoo saying he didn't want to outshine Bani by having his tattoo come out more dark red than hers because he loved her so much. The comment of earned him a pout from Bani and a pinch from Anu as Bani's hands were covered with mehndi.
Around midnight the crowd had scattered and only Jai and Bani were left on the balcony. Anu had shooed everyone away as Jai had told her he wanted to be alone with Bani before he went home. Anu brought up a bowl of gajjar ka halwa for them and left. They quietly shared a bowl of gajjar ka halwa which Bani's mum had made as it was favourite of Bani.
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On the day of wedding both houses were a buzz of activity as masi and Kiran tried to accomplish many of the rituals. Jai put on the sherwani, a cream and maroon creation with light gold embroidery. He went downstairs and masi, Jigyasa and Anu tied the traditional headdress and sehra. Masi gave shagun to Jai and blessed him as they got ready to leave for the venue.
Adi called Ranveer over and asked to go and bring the ghodi up to the front of the house. Ranveer went outside to look for the ghodi and boy was he in for a surprise. He saw a pure white Lipizzaner Stallion, decorated in red and gold waiting patiently, but what made his heart jump was the beautiful woman standing next to the horse holding the reins. Taz the owner of the horse was dressed in a dark red outfit that showed off her curves off provocatively. The choli revealed her creamy bare midriff and her long hair in a braid with the golden tassles at the end hung over her shoulders. (What Taz is wearing)

As Ranveer approached look dashing in a gold sherwani, Taz batted her eyelids at him. She whispered quietly, "Prabhu , sansaar mai aisi koi baat to hai nahi jo tumse chhoopi ho. tum to sab jaante ho. Dekho mai ye nahi kahati ke tumhe yaad nahi hoga , lekin phir bhi apni taraf se kah denaa achchaa hotaa hai. Aaj ktna subh din hai. bas ek chhotisi binati hai prabhu. Dekho .. jaraa Dekho ye ghodi ki lagaam khinchate khinchate haath aise ho gaye. hai jaise ghodi ke khoor. Arre tumhare liye kya mushkeel hai? bas who rajkumaar aatia hari usse baat lagaao prabhu ke Taz raani ban ke raaj karay , yu ke majaa aa jaae jindagi kaa. aage jaisi tumhari marzi."
Ranveer could smell the scent of jasmine coming from the gajra worn by Taz. He should in front of her and stuttered, "mei…aapko…bulane…aya…meri saath chalogi…"
Taz swayed her hip slightly and stared in his eyes and husked, "any where with you handsome." She linked her arm through Ranveer and planted a kiss on her ghodi, Dhano, "Yaar, you are still my best friend."

Next wedding and honeymoon. I hope the JB girls and Taz_234 liked taking parts in the update. Avi, Manish and Ravi hope you don't mind taking part in the update. If I have forgotten to mention any names that wanted to be in the dance…sorry.

Ps let me know if I have made any major mistakes as I am not editing the part.


Edited by divan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#85
Great going Divan. Loved all the descriptions including Chinese horoscope. JB girls have done a good job 👏 👏 👍🏼 . Can't wait for the wedding...........etc. Please continue soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#86
Hey Jai is a tiger like me, but I'm not self-centered or selfish, and I know a few IF members will vouch for me, but everything else about a tiger is true. Alas Jai is a wood tiger and I'm a fire tiger, I think the horscope gods got us mixed up cause I seem to be more of a wood tiger and Jai a fire tiger 😆 . By the way I loved the girls performance, and Taz, just cuz you got Ranveer doesn't mena you should forget Dano, yaar when you and Ranveer have a fight you are going to need someone to talk to. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome updates.
loved it.
woww...lovely sangeet and mehndi party. 😳
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#88
Divan,

that was just too good,loved it.so sweet and cute.the wedding atmosphere, so much fun.I got to perform at their wedding,jai was lookin too good.lookin forward to the next part,so excited. 😊


preet 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#89
great part, and loved ur ghodiwali and her outfit a lot 😉

please continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PT1 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/726714/ff-at-17-update-pt-27-pg-60-nov-8-end"


PT2 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=726714&T PN=4

PT3 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=726714&T PN=8

PT4 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/726714/ff-at-17-update-pt-27-pg-60-nov-8-end


At Seventeen – Pt 5

o sanam tere ho gaye ham pyar mein tere kho gaye ham
zindagi ko aye hamdam aa gaya muskuraana
o sanam tere ho gaye ham pyar mein tere kho gaye ham
mil gaya mujhko aye sanam zindagi ka bahaana

do bhatakte raahi aa mile manzil par
do dilon ki kashti aa lagi saahil par
muskuraate jaayen ik sang do muqaddar
o sanam tere ho gaye ...

raat chup sunti hain yeh hansi afsaana
dekhate hain taare bas gaya veeraana
chaand ko sharma de aapka sharmaana
o sanam tere ho gaye ... (aye milan ki bela)

soonepan mein achaanak koi panchhi bola
jaag kar sapne se dil kisi ka dola
raat ki raani ka kisne ghoonghat khola
o sanam tere ho gaye ...
Adi watched as Ranveer strolled towards him, his eyes did a double take at seeing Taz draped on his arms. He shouted, "Oye, tuje ghodi lene ko bheja tha aur tu ladki pakad ke aya…kahan hai mamma ka ghoda."
Ranveer's grin grew even bigger and he just said, "papa stop shouting, the horse is behind us. Aur yeh…giving a sexy grin to Taz…yeh meri dil ki rani hai..."
Taz swooned at being called his dil ke ranni, she prayed silently, "hey bhaggu mei haar shomvaar ko ek dozen nariyaal chadoungi…baas meri bath paki karde iss rajkumar ke saath."
Adi came up to Taz and said, "oye ladki isski jaal mei mat jaana, usski toh aadat hai do do ko peeche chakaar lagane ki"
Taz just gave her most beautiful smile to Adi, "don't worry uncle, mujhe bhi logo ko chaakar khilana aata hai." Taz went up to her ghodi…Dhano and said "now be on your best behaviour, we have our reputation to maintain. Aur sun …itne bade logo ki ghaar aaj shadi hai, aaj tujhe achi achi mithai khane milege.
As Jai came down towards the horse, he lifted his sehra and stared at Taz, he elbowed Adi and whispered, "who's she?" Adi just shrugged his shoulders, "Ranveer ki girlfriend." Jai hissed back, "your son is chupa rushtom…last week it was Rano….the week before Raashi aur aaj yeh…I must say she's very sexy."
Adi gave him a dig, "oye, abhi teri shaadi nahi hui aur tu kisse aur pe doora dal raha hai. Kaan khol ke sune le, if you hurt Bani…mei tujhe zinda nahi choodunga." Jai finally mounted the horse and the barat set off. It was only going around the block and back to the mansion again as the wedding was taking place outside.
The JB Gurlz all dressed in matching red and white silk saris, were lined up on the red carpet leading up to the mandap and they showered Jai with rose petals as he walked up.
Bani looked picture perfect in her traditional red wedding lengha and matching jewellery. She had made everyone cry as they gazed at her glowed with happiness. Anu came to take her to mandap and as they approached Bani gasped as she saw that JB Gurlz waiting for her with lighted diya in their hands. They arranged themselves in pair and walked one on each side of Bani as she walked up to the mandap. Jai looked breathlessly as Bani face covered by gold chunni glided towards him.
The wedding photographer, Hema was having a field day, boy she clicked away like crazy with her camera not wanting to miss a single frame of this wedding of the year. She wanted to capture all the JB moments to create a mega album for the couple.
Everyone sat silently and watched as Jai and Bani exchanged vaarmala, took saat pheras where they almost got drowned with the amount rose petals that got showered on them, mangalsutra and finally sindoor. Taz oohed and aahed each moment as she sat next to Ranveer. Each time her grip on Ranveer got tighter until poor guy had to ask her to relax her hold on him.
Jai and Bani stood at the entrance of Walia house while masi did aarti to welcome her bahu into the house. Bani did all the traditional rituals from kicking a rice matki, marking the floor with her red vemillion steps to playing the game where the couple hunt for ring in a large bowl of milk and water.
Jai had a surprise planned for Bani and while she went to change out of her wedding lengha into a more comfortable sari, he went over and thanked everyone for making his day go smoothly. When he finally came to Taz he took her hand and kissed it saying he had never seen such a beautiful ghodiwali before and told him he had one advice for her if she wanted to keep Ranveer from straying…make sure she tied reins around him and never let it go. He gave Taz and the JB Gurlz gifts for making his wedding a memorable one. Each gift bag contained a white gold and diamond Cartier watch, which Jai had expressed, ordered from the leading jeweler.
The black and silver helicopter emblazoned with Walia Group logo, waited on the grounds of Walia mansion to take the couple away. Bani had changed into pink and white sari with light silver embroidery. Jai wouldn't tell him where they were going, all she knew was they were spending a night away and he was taking her where no one can come barging in his room at all times. He promised masi he would bring her back tomorrow so she could all the other rituals she wanted to do.
Bani said hugged Kiran, masi, Anu and all the girls. Kiran was crying her heart out as it finally sank in Bani would never be coming back to their house again as her daughter. Next time she came it will be as Jai's wife…

Posted a small part for weekend. I hope Taz you like what I did with the ghodiwali. JB Gurlz that's it for you, you are free to go and attend another function. Ranveer is not a bad guy in the ff, I hate what they have done to Ranveer in KS.
Thanks to everyone that has read and posted the comments. Keep them coming good and bad.
Edited by divan - 18 years ago

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