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jigna_07

@jigna_07

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#71

oh man i am loving the updates
😡 roshni is just 😡 😡 😡
i loved the slap 👏 👏 👏
aww he was just staring at her while they danced
haila i am gonna dance 😲
woo hoo!!!!!!!!!
shaadi and dance!
continue soon 😃

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divan

@divan

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Posted: 18 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: jigna_07
oh man i am loving the updates
😡 roshni is just 😡 😡 😡
i loved the slap 👏 👏 👏
aww he was just staring at her while they danced
haila i am gonna dance 😲
woo hoo!!!!!!!!!
shaadi and dance!
continue soon 😃

you better start choreographing the dance with your girls.
ps no bikinis like Britney Spears allowed.

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divan

@divan

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#73

Thank you guys for posting all the comments. I may not have chance to update for couple of days as I have some work that I need to complete.

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jigna_07

@jigna_07

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: divan

you better start choreographing the dance with your girls.
ps no bikinis like Britney Spears allowed.

😆
yup we will have a meeting and we will practice
ill pass on britney spears🤢🤢🤢
well wear nice indian outfits
your wish😃😃😃

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amisha

@amiee

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#75

wonderful part loved the slap pls cont soon............

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Sheena

@Sheena_Row

Rocker

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Posted: 18 years ago

#76

Hey Divan,

Caught up with the full update of 2nd chapter and the latest chapter.

Awesome, you made this longer and continued. It is definitely a sweet story and i would love to read mre of the same.

Roshni's slap was entirely deserved. Boy, JW can not keep his hands away from his would be bride. Anu and Maasi make good cupids. Jigz is going to play dirty again. Really loved both the updates! Thanks for continuing.

Edited by Sheena_Row - 18 years ago

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preet

@preet_2010

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#77

Hey Divan

that was just fabalous,very well written.Jigs can never keep her mouth shut and Roshni is ten steps ahead.great to see both Jai and Bani bonding,loved it.lookin forward to the next part. 😊

I want to apply for dancin at the mehendi. 😃

preet 😳

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swati

@swatinarang

Sparkler

Posted: 18 years ago

#78

divan loved the part and loved the slap too 😉 , but why u r making my tazo billi ghode wali 😉

swati

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kiranc

@kiranc

Navigator

Posted: 18 years ago

#79

Hey Divan,

Loved the engagement part. I so hate Roshini and Jigs. Loved the Roshini got the slap. 👏 👏 👏
It was nice to see that Jai is caring towards Bani and her family.

Waiting for the sangeet, mehindi and all the other parts.

Kiran