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Meera

@indiandoll89

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 18 years ago

#31

Vaidu!!!

Thanks so much for sending me the link!! This sounds like such a suspensful ff! 😳

hmmm...Jai...with another woman? 😕 😆 😆

I trust you Vaidu! 😳

Please continue soon!

Luv ya loads,

Meera

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preet

@preet_2010

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#32

Hey Vaid

that was totally not boring,really good.they seem to be in so much love with one another.you have described Bani's feelings for Jai so beautifully.i hope its a sweet suprise for her.lookin forward to the next part. 😊

preet 😳

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janvi

@janu_2006

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#33

hey vaid
gr8 part 👏
hope its some surprice for her frm her hubby...
cont. sooon

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Ridhi

@ridizzz

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#34

Awesome update.
liked it....but i don't know reading this ff it felt like it a very dark mystery....don't know why it feels like all this romance and love is going in one very dangerous territory....i don't but it is giving me a creepy feeling from the beginning.
plz cont. soon

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vaidahip

@vaidahip

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#35

Hey guys... thanks for the reply... will post the next part tomorrow...

There is a huge twist coming.. it may seem a little obvious what's going on.. but... dum dum dum....lol

I really hope you stick with me... i promise it's not the usual story..

Now after telling you all that... i hope the ending doesn't disappoint you 😕

Take care 😛

Edited by vaidahip - 18 years ago

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-Srishty-

@-Srishty-

Sparkler

Posted: 18 years ago

#36

Hey Vaidu don't worry we were already predicting some twist and no matter what, I'll be here 😉
Continue soon

Edited by Nancy_89 - 18 years ago

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Vanita

@*Guli*

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 18 years ago

#37

Hey man wat happened??

haila.... oh man!!!....

wat did she see?

is there someone else there???

is it a chick? oh man!!!

end this suspense soon

and please cont soon!!

its not boring!!!!!!

me loving it!

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Niroo

@Niroo

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

#38

OMG
what happened??? i hope she didnt see jai with someone else..
if that happens i dont know.. what is going to happen..
continue soon
plweeeeeessssssssss

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shafaq

@$h@£aq...

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#39

...Awesomeeee ff .. lovee the storylinee.. different .. yet verryy interestingg 👏 !!! ... lovee the way u writee .. !!! 👏 👏 ..
oo oo .. hopee too much trsut doesnt let her down .. by the looks of it .... Jai seems suspicious !!! .. 😕 .. hope nothing goes wrongg !! .. ... y doesnt he let her see his officee...? 😕 .... she hsould atleast ask him .. why he is late.. or sumthingg.... o00hh man .. whts in the restauran....?? oo oo .. hope not another chick ... or is a surprise for her ...? 😉 😳
will be waiting eagerlyyy for ur updatee .. plzz updatee sooonn... 😃
Shafaq! 😛

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Twinkle20

@Twinkle20

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#40

Oh WOW...! 😃 You're an excellent writer... 👏 Loved the two parts... 😛 Fantastic starting... 👏 Well done... 😛 👏 Jai and Bani are such love birds... 😳 Really sweet... 😳 😛 Julie seems like a really nice friend... 😛
But uh-oh... 😕 What did Bani see which made her shocked...? Can't wait to find out! 😉
😛

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