Anokha Rishta -Chapter 18 & Epilog, pg42

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HKK

@Hkaurk22

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Posted: 17 years ago

#321

WOW! What an end.. I could see Rosh leaving... she would have felt even worse with the child in the house...

Fabulous end, with Bani so understanding, in every respect. She still respected Rosh.. and Rosh realizing that Bani was not a pushover in any respect...

Nice job...

So.. whens the next ff? 😉

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rinku6us

@rinku6us

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Posted: 17 years ago

#322

Tintiny, its great Story . Your writing was superb.

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pooks

@pooks

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Posted: 17 years ago

#323

A beautiful culmination to unique story. Roshni's POV and feelings were portrayed beautifully in the form of a simple letter. Her big heartedness and the belief that Jai's second wife would simply be a child bearing machine was put to wrong. Roshni repented her decision but was too late. One can emphatize with her in the situation she created around herself.

And cudos to Bani for being the understanding, warm, second wife who tried to never let insecurities govern her life and also offered to look for her souten. A truely remarkable story. Had me captivated right from the very beginning. 👏

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jigna_07

@jigna_07

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Posted: 17 years ago

#324

u eneded it 😭 😭 😭
but what an ending that was
i pity roshni she never realized what she had until she had to loose it
she knew bani wasn't going anywhere and now that there was even a baby....they had a family of their own and rosh would feel left out
wow bani really did show that she has nothing against roshni and never will have anything against her. she had no insecurities about jai because she knew he was always going to be there
tin this was an awesome FF
i hope you write another one soon 😃

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Moutushi Roy

@Tushi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#325

It was wonderful. But I wanted to know what happened to Roshni as well. a I think out of all your FF's I feel this was most probably the toughest for you to write. As in your FF you have rightly described that husband and his love is the most important possesion of a woman and it is very very difficult(impossible for some) to share. Yet you have very tactfully come out successfully without tainting anybody. Really the FF was superb. But my personal favourite is contract heir and Kuch rahein anjani si, Chotti si aasha was next. Anyway all your FF's are good and it is very difficult to grade it. Thanks for your earnest efforts. Hoping to see you soon in your forthcoming FFS. 😊

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nema123

@nema123

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#326

Tin,

It was wonderful ending to wonderful FF... 👏
Loved it.. 👏 👏 Felt very bad for Roshni... Some time it is better to be pushed by our loved one.. 😭
Love all of your FF's ... It is ery difficult to Rank them..
But my favourite is contract heir...
then..
Business Tycoon Jai Walia marries a Mt Abu Girl
Thori si bewafai
Kuch rahein anjani si
Kuch Achhe Kuch Bure
Anokha Rishta..
Return of Bani walia

You are too good Tin... Loved all your FF's and the strong character of Jai and Bani....and their Love..
Just too good... 👏
You should definalty publish your work..

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preet

@preet_2010

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Posted: 17 years ago

#327

Hey Tiny,

that was just wow,fabalous.the ending was so good.Roshni left wow.bani's character I just love it.you have penned down each and every character's emotion so well.just fabalous.truly enjoyed this masterpiece of yours.will be lookin forward to your next part. 😊

preet 😳

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Sasila

@sasila

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Posted: 17 years ago

#328

hie tiny..
that was a wonderful ending rather getting jai in dilema to divorce the first wife..i love all your FF' and i personally cant rank it coz its all amazing and wonderful.i think my favourite of all ur writing will be JAI WALIA MARRIES MOUNT ABU GIRL, CONTRACT HEIR & THORI SI BEWAFAI, KUCH ACHE KUCH BURE and it will go on...

Waiting for nest weekend special coming up..

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Somali Mitra

@smitra110

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Posted: 17 years ago

#329

Hey Tinni, Very well ended. Though I did not agree with the basic premise of the story the ending was very gracious. Roshni gambled and she lost, and she had the grace and wisdom to accept the inevitable. Real life is often like that , not all endings are happy, not all solutions are tidy. Kudos to you for taking up unconventional topics, weaving the Jai Bani love story about them and making them eminently readable. Looking forward to the next FF, I'm sure you'll do full justice. 👏 👏 👏
Somali

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simz99

@simz99

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Posted: 17 years ago

#330

Tin
Like Somali I did not like the premise of the story and hence stopped following it. Curiosity made me check out the end and I must say you ended it with great dignity. Kudos for that!

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