Anokha Rishta -Chapter 18 & Epilog, pg42

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daviashree

@davia389

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Posted: 17 years ago

#341

that was really good ending ... so sweet jb keeping thier girl baby name roshni...

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waithing for ur next sweeet ff..something different..

davia

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divan

@divan

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Posted: 17 years ago

#342

Superb ending. Who would have thought Roshni would give up Jai so easily. When you wrote about Roshni changing her makeup and dressing up extra carefully, the thought that may be she was seeing someone else but really she did all that to keep Jai away from Bani.

I guess Roshni never got over her jealousy for Bani to be able to see Jai again. Love Bani for being so generous towards Roshni, she understood that she would lose Jai if she ever tried to stop him from loving Roshni all through the years.

Beautiful interpretation of emotions of Jai, Roshni and Bani.

You asked list of best ff, but really each is has been so different its hard a task. They are all enjoyable to read and would make a great collection to actually print as a book.

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bugs_bunny

@bugs_bunny

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Posted: 17 years ago

#343

I read it this morning but only got time to comment now!

I was really surprised when u ended it!!😲 But a wonderful story and a great ending! 👏 👏

It was very big of Roshni to leave from their lives... 👏 👏

And it was nice to see Bani not taking Roshni's place and understand Rosh's role in Jais life..

A very enjoyable story... I hope we see another soon! 😛

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Sujata

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Posted: 17 years ago

#344

Hi,

It was a very well written fanfic especially the way you have potrayed the emotions of each of the characters. What I particularly like is that Jai loved bani but at the same time did not stop loving Roshni...that was very well potrayed..the ending was just perfect....I hope u start writing another fanfic soon...in the meantime I'll catch up on the last one...as I have not yet finished reading that completely.

Garf

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Nabila

@Tomiko

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Posted: 17 years ago

#345

Truthfully Tiny; I didn't expect such an early ending....portraying Roshni's emotions as she looked on at Jai showering his love on his 'bundle of joy' was something I was looking forward to....nevertheless; you managed a beautiful ending!👏

Roshni's maturity shone through in the end as well as the JB love😳....

As for which FF I enjoyed the most; hard to say as they've all been brilliant in their own ways......though 'Business Tycoon JW marries a Mt. Abu girl' was a personal favourite.....

Looking forward to reading more of your work!😛

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Niroo

@Niroo

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Posted: 17 years ago

#346

hey tin..
that was too quick.. i cant believe.. u already ended.. ur ff.
whenever i read ur ff.
it shows.. how.. emotions.. work.. with humans..
i just love reading ur ff..
and please.. do write another.. ff.
soon.

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Reeshita

@ree_views

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Posted: 17 years ago

#347

Hey I thought to comment at weekend but you put that The End...before that? Anyway the end was beautifully written. It just came out without hurting anyone to the core...none! Roshni made her exit in a delicate way leaving behind another understanding couple who dealt with the situation with their love and understanding. You have given an unexpected but worth reading again and again twist to the whole scenario which didn't miss love and jealousy but purposefully ignored partiality and deception.

Liked the last line where Jay says "Boli thi ayegi"..how innocently he shared such feelings with Bani after having 25 years of married life! But one thing....JB forever....

So what's the next FF all about? It's always a pleasure to look for your updates from Monday to Friday.. 😃

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Ashwini

@aashyagh

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Posted: 17 years ago

#348

Hi Tin, u hv done a wonderful job and the FF is fantastic, I think the way JW handled both his wives and also the emotions of all the 3 different people were great and I dont think I would hv accepted a person marrying again and loving his both wives equally, but yr FF made me realise taht it can happen 😉