Anokha Rishta -Chapter 18 & Epilog, pg42 - Page 34

Hey Jayari,

You've described it so well n portraited it beautifully, kudos for that 👏.

Will be waiting for your next ff 😉 😛.

Thanks for writing it.

Take care,
Sukh

Hey Tinny,

you have finished the story, wow - that was a big twist in the story, totally did not expect Roshni to take the high road and not stay to see how the competition fares.

I loved the whole story, it is so different - you are highly original, your chapters are fast paced and you don't mince words!

I love your fan fictions! 👏

Thanks J for such a beautiful story. 👏 👏 👏
The way you handled the end is very mature and elegant.

Hope you start another winner soon.

hey tin.....................

lovely ending...........................jai was able to keep roshni in his heart for 25 years and bani's kids called her bari ma......so understanding like bani.......................

hope u start a new one soon

hey tiny
lovely ending 👏
hope u start another ff soon...

Beautiful end - Roshni shows her class and wisdom (which had temporarily flown out). - Roshni also made a common mistake that educated city ppl make - under-estimating ppl from villages.
Tiny, I tried to answer your question about which are our fave ffs - big mistake - I started reading them again 🤔 They all are amazingly good, Kuchch rahein anjaani si, Contract heir. Even the ones where the theme is unpalatable, like this ff, you make it a very interesting read. 🤗
👏 👏 👏

Wow, you ended it here....very nice ending.....as usual. You rocked with the fantastic endings.....Really enjoyed reading this one....

hm...that's a tough question you've asked 😃

According to me,

Kuch Rahein Anjane Si, Contract Heir, Kuch Achhe Kuch Bure, Business Tycoon JW marries a MAbu girl, Todi si Bewafai, Choti si asha, Anokha rishta


I think that's it.........😊

Hey.. I have read all your fan fics and have loved each and everyone of them... This one too was wonderful ... I hope you will start a new one soon... I cant wait to read it

Wow what an unexpected ending.

I had thought that Roshni's jealousy leading to her nagging & different plots to seperate JB will make Jai drift away from her. Didn't expect her to leave silently giving up.

"inspite of wanting to be a father badly you never once asked me to give a second thought to my decision. You know what Jai, I wish you had…"


this made me feel real bad for Roshni. She kind of paid price of a very patient understanding husband. She won't be in this situation if only Jia had insisted ( not forced though) on having a child or atleast try to convince her . She thought of awrong solution instead. She paid price of not thinking about the other woman treating her like a production machine. Luckily for Bani she had mind of her own & Jai was a kind fair supportive husband.

I still felt that even though Jai tried to be fair consciously, in his subconscious mind he seems to love Bani more.Thtas why he rembers Bani in his sleep when he is with Roshni. HE is more lover to Bani & a friend to Roshni which comes from their long relationship. Looks like Bani is more his type than Roshni. Then again I don't know if that was the intention or I am just JB despo.

Between Bani & Roshni Bani has a bigger heart.

Greatly presented story. I couldn't think about Jai as a person who will sopil some ones life even though unintentionally just because he was forced into it. But hats off to you to make this unpleaant storyline catching.

Hey,

That was a totally unexpected ending. So Roshini has realised her mistake of bringing an other woman into her husband's life and it is too late to make amends. It was good for everybody that she left rather than being togather and and leading an unhappy life.

Loved the way you presented the story on a sensitive issue.

Please do continue writing.

Kiran