The Foreign Self: Part XVII-C 16/8 - Page 6

Wonderful update. When will jai know that bani is his angel??? Please update soon.

great parts armana, please continue soon

swati

It is not beautiful. It was superpb. After reading the whole update I felt uncomfortable ..... Well I was not breathing and was so engrossed that I forgot enybody exist besides Bani's pain. Please update soon.

Armana,

Real surpsise. I thought that Jai will give Bani a chance to explain herself but what the hell!!!!!I just cried and cried and it is not fair, I am feeling so gloomy and depressed. I cannot decide whether to love JW, feel sorry for him or hate him. Hate him for his behaviour with Bani, Feel sorry that he again missed out on true love and love him because of his love for his angel. For a second I guessed that Jai will find out that Bani is his angel with the help of little hint she left behind and I was furious when he did not. But I guess he is way too much angry right now with the deceit that Bani and Life lavished on him and is not able to think clearly. But I just hope that he finds out ASAP that Bnai is his angel. But why Bani chose not to tell him the truth that binds them together, of the nite and the time spent together, that they both cherish. Pls. elaborate. Its is so amazing to see that he collects her memorabilia everytime. If he is so angry with Bani than why stack her letter with his Angel's letter.Does it symbolises that he had put Bani in his angel's place. Please update soon

hey armana that was ggod and sad to but I got confussed toward the end has jai found out that bani is his Angel....

please tell me....

Armana..this was completely unexpected....I did think that Jai will def give Bani a chance to explain...but then the jerk that he has been behaving...but on the other hand the only inference that one can make out of his actions is that this guy is way too possessive of Bani. I somehow had a thought that when Jai was reading the letter some part of it might remind him of his angel..handwriting..or something...but nothing did...Guess we have to wait for something else for Jai to realize that he actually let go of his angel !!!!

Just read it once to get the quick gist and I think I will read it a couple of more times to savour it and maybe I might come back and edit this post. A lovely part.

Swathi

Hey Armana

another mindblowin update,just loved it.she left him,the pain and feelings of both of them were penned so beautifully.Roshni breakdown was written very well.Man this guy doesn't think right now, I hope he does somethin before its too late.lookin forward to the next part. 😊


preet 😳

Hi Armana,

Please update soon. Awesome writing!!!!
Please let jai know that bani is his angel.

ss

Hi Armana,

Beautiful update! Loved the metaphors with the Vermilion. Bani is so poised and dignified. Jai needs to get his brain checked.

god the complexities of a man's heart! hope jai realises the truth asap and bani does not succumb easily. you are a brilliant writer!