The Foreign Self: Part XVII-C 16/8 - Page 7

Everyone: it's been sheer delight to read your comments and reactions.
Looks like Jai's idiocy has found little favour. Godd, i think he enjoys far too much adulation and adoration from all of us!

I am sorry that once again i have not taken the time to reply to each comment individually. My time is unfortunately limited; either i can reply or i can write the next part.
Some of you found the end confusing. Sigh! jai has not realsied that Bani is the same woman as his angel. hope that clarifies.

Happy reading.

Armana

fantastic part 👏 👏

its sad dat bani's gone

and now massi is here

ctn son

Armana,

Another wonderful, but short part.. Massi's charcter is great!! Her cooking?? 🤣 hahaha.. 😆😆😆

So she's being the jassos and collecting information on her future daughter-in-law... good going!

Poor Bani.. but im glad Ranveer and Natchiket are still calling her mami and bhabhi.. hmm.. want to see Jai's reaction if he hears this!😆

Waiting for the next one..😉

come on get them together soon

n massi cnt cook?? 😕 omg 😆

Armana,

Thanks a lot for another heart-rending part, albeit a small one.

The most difficult phase in any relationship is when a relation beaks, a couple separates and hearts are set on fire with myriad of emotions.

Both Jai and Bani are going through this phase, total despair and loss for Bani and frustration and anger on Jai's part. The fact that Jai is in a grouchy mood implies that he hasn't been able to keep Bani away from his mind and thoughts. As for Bani, its heartbreak all the way.

Good to see Nachiket and Ranveer still considering Bani as the person she is. if only Jai had tamped his anger down a little, but maybe his sense of loss translated into anger.

The sense of loss still pervades and hangs over our heads.

A poem - Remember - by Christina Rosetti (am in a dark mood), don't know whether it matches though, felt so -

Remember me when I am gone away,

Gone far away into the silent land;

When you can no more hold me by the hand,

Nor I half turn to go yet turning stay.

Remember me when no more day by day

You tell me of our future that you planned:

Only remember me; you understand

It will be late to counsel then or pray.

Yet if you should forget me for a while

And afterwards remember, do not grieve:

For if the darkness and corruption leave

A vestige of the thoughts that once I had,

Better by far you should forget and smile

Than that you should remember and be sad.

lmao... 😆😆😆..Massi cant cook!! 😆 ..pleez get JB togetha. 😉 😳 😕 ..longer updates pleez.. 😳 ..continue the awesome job!! 👏

Thanks Armana for another heart-wrenching part. I Was able to feel how JB were going through after they broke up their relationship which you portrayed amazingly. Wondering if massi could collect the truth about Bani's whereabouts and deliver them to Jai. Hope massi would be going to play cupid teaming up with Nattu-Ranveer and try to bring JB together forever. Please continue soon.
👏

Armana wonderful excellent update 👏

Another poignant and sad part...Jai is the loser - You are making us all sympathize with Bani's flight, kudos to a strong Bani with a steely will power.

I am sure she is breaking apart in private.

Beautiful update

Sorry guys, this had to be short part. A filler, which was needed to bridge the gaps and move the story if you will, allowing the narrative to shift.

The next part will be a lot longer.

thanks,

Armana