The Foreign Self: Part XVII-C 16/8 - Page 4

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he jst asked her to leave just like tht 😡

Dear Readers,
Jai's behaviour certainly seems to have upset you. Well, in that case be prepared to be even more irritated in the part i've just posted: XVII-B.

Happy reading to you all.
Once again I've chosen to write rather than reply individually but i enjoyed reading every single comment.
Thank you for that.

Armana

Fabulous part Armana. Very heart-wrenching emotional part. So Bani left and JW didn't let her talk. Felt lump in throat while reading Bani's note. You should have listened her Jai before you made your decision. Wondering how JW is going to find out about Bani and the truth. Thanks Armana for writing this wonderful FF. Your way of writing always amazes me.

Now Can't wait for the next part from you soon.

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she was waiting for him..n still he didnt listen to her
wht a looser 😕
u should always listen to the other person b4 making a decision....but no he never listen 😡
nw when is he going to find out abt bani
thanx for updating so fast..... 😃
love reading this FF

Armana,

A beautiful heartwrenching update. Hopefully Jai will look at Bani's letter again and see the similarities.
Can't wait to see where you take the story but hopefully it will be less heartbreaking.

A beautiful update... 👏 👏 👏

Bani stayed behind but he still did not listen to her..

I liked Roshni in this part... i think she may've just thawed him a little bit..

The letter.. he did miss the obvoius.. i hope he kicks himself when he finds out the truth 😊 😆

Will be waiting for the next part!

Armana,

You made me cry with the last part...😭 Few writers have the ability to invoke both laughter and tears through their words and you are one of them who can do it with amazing ease!

Its was so heart-wrenching yet so achingly beautiful...your words brought out Bani's pain with a vividity that just touched my heart...and Jai...if you made me hate him for his behaviour towards Bani...his silent love for the angel, made my heart melt for him...😳

Simply breath-taking...👏👏👏

MT

PS: IMO, the portrayal of Jai in this FF is the best I have read so far!😃 Doesn't matter if he is as dark a character as can be...your words do justice to all his actions, good and bad!

ohhhhhhhhhhhhh how could i miss such fantastic FF, i just read this new update and i found it very inetresting i loved it 😳 now i'll catch up with the rest of parts 😃

I don't hate Jai, just feel immensely sad for his nonrealization of what he's lost, or maybe at some subliminal level he does, I wonder?? Heart wrenchingly beautiful and had tears in my eyes when Jai was reading about the pearls. Loved it Armana. Am going back for a second read.
Somali

I do hate Jai - hate, hate, hate him 😡 Can't he listen? Jeeze......Armana, thanks for updating, but now chain nahin aayega until this idiot sees the light...sigh...beautiful update!

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Just goes to show that modern facade nothwithstanding, the Indian male will be more ready to think a woman who has an affair with him is of loose morals rather than that she has the courage to push all conventions aside to be with him.....