The Foreign Self: Part XVII-C 16/8 - Page 8

Wish I had the whole manuscript to read....sigh...
👏
Bani's dignity and anguish portrayed very well. Maasi able to see the pain on Jai's face...love the description of how Jai let his employees experience his fury 😆
Now why do I feel that a leap is coming up? 😕
Beautiful parts Armana! 👏 👏 👏

Leap!?!?

Good heavens!
my dear you must have confused me with Kekta!
I feel terribily insulted!
And now just to retaliate i might just have to have a leap!

=)
thanks for making me smile.
Armana

Originally posted by: armana

Leap!?!?

Good heavens!
my dear you must have confused me with Kekta!
I feel terribily insulted!
And now just to retaliate i might just have to have a leap!

=)
thanks for making me smile.
Armana

😆😆😆

Nahinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn NO LEAP! Argh!😆😆😆

Can't dream of seeing a 60 year old Bani still looking like a 20 year old, playing mother to children who are prolly 10 years older than her in real life!

But then, we know very well you are not Maayi and we will never make the mistake of confusing you with her! So please do write soon!

A,

Please do post the next part soon...I want to see Jai falling on his (handsome nevertheless) face down when he comes to know the truth!

Wonderful parts...Bani's character comes out with such beauty and so does Jai's!

It doesn't matter what the traits of a particular character are, as long as they are portrayed well and there, my dear, you score all the points!

Cheers,

MT

PS: Is you phone working?😕

My My,
so Massi like a good old Masi is doing her job. excellent!
i really want Jai to suffer for behaving in such way with Bani. Plz armana have Jai suffer a whole deal more!
i want him to fall flat on his face for making Bani suffer.
plz have your next part posted soon
rooj

PS: leaps are one things i hate too. i would rather have a full story continuously told than doing it in bits and pieces. however an Epilogue like JK is good to have u guessing what would happen next and what happened between the time period from past till present.

Armana, I am glad to see Masi has come into the picture (like she did in the golden days). I cant wait for Jai to come to terms with his feelings and realize the truth. I am patiently waiting for the next part- do continue soon!

(please no leap!)

HK

Hey Armana,

another amazin update,very well written.you have penned down Bani's pain and anguish so well.Ranveer and Nachiket support for her,was so sweet.so glad to see Massi here,I hope she gets her Munna's act together.really lookin forward to the next part. 😊



preet 😳

hey armana
gr8 part 👏
cont.soon

Lovely part Armana, though short but loved Massi and her investigating modes . Pleeeeeeaaaaaase no leaps. But yes "a highly ashamed of himself" Jai Walia desperately required for Bani now.Update soon.A little confused-is Jigyasa also a part of mission Bani or not?

Loved the update.

Jai is such a duffer. Didn't get the hint. Thank god maasi is here for rescue.

Waiting to see might Jai Walia begging for forgiveness from Bai. But Bani is in so much love she won't make him suffer.

NO leaps please.

I love how threatening the Leap is for all of you!
Hmmmmm.......
ok, no leaps!
Next part will be up by tomorrow evening.
Love
Armana