The Foreign Self: Part XVII-C 16/8

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sweetu144

@sweetu144

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Posted: 18 years ago

#41

Dearest Armana,
I would like to give you a standing ovation 👏 .I once again find myself sitting upon my chair, staring at the computer screen, with complete ignorance for the world around me, as I fall deep into your pool of words.
Amazing-nothing less, nothing more, just superb!

Jai needs to open his eyes, and like I said before his "jumping to conclusions" will be his worst enemy now.
Best wishes and love
S.
P.s. Update soon!
P.P.S. I have not heard from you in ages, I do hope all is well! 🤗 -but i am partially to blame, as I have not been online much!

Edited by sweetu144 - 18 years ago

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divan

@divan

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Posted: 18 years ago

#42

A picture paints the thousand words, in Jai's case he is failing to read those words...clues that his angel is non other than Bani.

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janvi

@janu_2006

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Posted: 18 years ago

#43

hey armana,
gr8 part 👏
hope jai gets to knw tht bani is his angle....
cont. sooon

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kiranc

@kiranc

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Posted: 18 years ago

#44

Hi Armana,

The last part had me in tears.
Jai is being such a jerk I wish he could have atleast listened to what Bani had to say.
I guess Rumaan( if the got name correct)will be one to reveal Bani's identity as Saraswati to Jai.

Please continue soon.

Kiran

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Sheena

@Sheena_Row

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+ 3

Posted: 18 years ago

#45

Dear Armana,

By far this is the best of everything I have read so far! It was so melancholic, wistful and tear-jerking. The wretchedness both Jai and Bani are feeling was written with exquisite care.

To have love be in such close proximity yet be unfortunate to push it away...Jai's characterization suits him, but so does Bani's . She comes across so strong even when her heart is breaking.

Best writing so far!! 👏

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Sangita

@sangitadas

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+ 3

Posted: 18 years ago

#46

Both Jai and Bani's characters have been handled so maturely, just like in eal-life situations, that its awesome.

Though I wanted to be upset with Jai, I couldnt, esp after witnessign his longing for his 'angel'. But if only he listened.

Please continue. 👏 👏 👏

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Nabila

@Tomiko

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+ 5

Posted: 18 years ago

#47

Absaloutely Beautiful Armana👏......even that word fails to do any justice!

Despite the obvious emotions of sorrow that this part gave out; there's hardly anything I can complain about....

Loved seeing the true and fragile side of Roshni as well as the significance of the red vermillion.......I just hope that Nattu and Ranveer knock some sense in to Jai and make him pursue Bani😳.....

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aashnaa5

@aashnaa5

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#48

hi armana,

welcome back. glad you are contining with tfs.
Always wanted to know how this story progressed. Knew u had ur reasons for this sabbatical.

Coming back to the ff, I have to say that all the events(which are moving rather swiftly now) are very originally conceived and wonderfully written. Bravo! 👏

Why do I feel that JW doesn't deserve Bani's love. Why is she at the receiving end of his wrath always. Why did Bani leave without making clean breast of things.
Just thinking aloud.

I know these ques will be abswered.

Didn't know the legend of the pearls. beautiful indeed.
Thanks for another lovely update(s).

take care
aashnaa

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nema123

@nema123

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#49

Hi Armana..
It was wonderful update.... 👏 👏
I just love ur writting... 👏 👏

Hope Jai understands her soon ...

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simz99

@simz99

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Posted: 18 years ago

#50

Beautiful update Armana...so glad you've decided to continue with TFS. So much pain for both Jai and Bani...hope they find their happiness soon...Jai's got to do a lot of apologising before that happens though 😉

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