ff 'Ek pyara bandhan' 04/05/09 note Pg59

Hey guys i'm back with another ff, i hope you'll enjoy this one as much as you'll enjoyed Asha ki kiran. All comments and suggestions are welcomed and appreciated very much!

Prologue

'Hey Dad finally I'm coming home, can't wait to see you and Mom'

'Yes beta we've missed you too, aab bas jaldi se wapas aa ja, hum sub yahan tera intizar kar rahe hain, panch saal ho gaye tujhe dekhe hue'

'Dad I'll be there before you know it, aacha ab meh rakhta hoon'

'Beta phone kar ke bata dena flight ki details'

'will do bye Dad'

'bye son' Uday sighed and kept the receiver down

Uday walked out of the car inside the house meeting his wife half way in the hall

Krishna: aa gaye aap

Uday: haan aaur tumhare liye ek khush khabri bhi hai

Krishna: khushkhabri kaise kushkhabari?

Uday: tumhara beta wapas aa raha hai he said softly waiting keenly to see her reaction, her eyes filled with tears and a wide smile formed on her lips'' shattering of a glass vase turned their attention to the girl who was looking down at the pieces of glass on the floor, and with shy eyes towards Uday and Krishna who looked upon her with smiles on their faces, not being able to contain her composure she ran up stairs closing the door of the room she had spent innumerable hrs sitting in. She stood against the door her eyes closed, playing with the end of her chunni breathing deeply 'Jai' escaped from her quivering lips!

To be continued...

Kripa.

P.S: the first part will be posted sometime next week, most likely next Friday!

Part 1 pg 4

Part 2 pg 6

Part 3 pg 8

Part 4 pg 10

Part 5 pg 13

Part 6 pg 15

Part 7 pg 19

Part 8 pg 21

Part 9 pg 25

Part 10 pg 26

Part 11 pg 28

Part 12 pg 31

Part 13 pg 34

Part 14 pg 37

Part 15 pg 39

Part 16 pg 42

Part 17 pg 45

Part 18 pg 48

Part 19 pg 51

Part 20 pg 55

Hey Kripa,

I am happy to see you starting another masterpiece,that was beautiful start,loved it.will be eagerly waiting for the first update. 😃



preet 😳

yay!! another FF!!

haila.... this sounds good already!!!

man i am telling u

i am a big fan!!!!!!!!! 😳 😳

Hi Kripa! 😊

Wow!! you started another ff 😛 .....loved the prologue 👏 👏 ....please post the first part as soon as you can 😆

yaya a new FF
continue soon!
sounds good!

Kripa, you're back...Wow...That sounds niiiiiice.... 👏 Well done...Can't wait...😃 Who can that girl be...hmm... 😳 😉 Can't wait for Friday!!! 😛 😉

pls continue soon..
kuch outline mi sakta hai kya?
davia

nice start.......waitin for part 1....cont soon

Hi Pooja!!!!😊 😊 😊

Nice to you see here again!!

Wow you started your second ff, congrats dear 👏 👏 👏!!!!!!!!!

I like it, it's very sweet n nice prologue. Is she Bani, nah?? The shy n blushing gal who is daydreaming about jai 😳 😳

But itni late 1st part update karogi??

Can't wait for it!! 😃 😃