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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi everyone, sorry for the late replies and the late update. Got high fever and was unable to think clearly, here goes the 2B of the story, it's a bit short and part 2 is still not finished, 2C is coming, so Don't Blame me for no major JB parts, you'll get it in 2C which I'm still writing…


Part Two
(…continuation…)



When Bani finally made it to the community centre, it was crowded with people. It was 7.30 and the groom side was supposed to be here any moment. She quickly met with Sarika who was seated on a stage. She was looking even more pretty with the dazzling lights and heavy jwelleries. Bani met with the girls. Everyone was looking pretty.


Bani was wearing a magenta lehenga with copper works on it. She was wearing a matching copper jwellery set which included heavy ear rings, necklace and a mang tikka. Her hand were full of magenta and copper bangles. Her hair was fashionable tied in a French roll bun; a hair lock was falling into her face stylishly.


Pri was wearing a deep blue georgette saree with a short sleeved velvet blouse. The saree has got magenta chumki work all over it. She was wearing long and dangling blue earrings and a simple gold chain with a rain drop pendant. She was wearing a dozen of bangles in her each hand. Her silky hair which she's coloured brownish was laid open till her midriff.


Rano was dressed in a yellow saree with magenta border in it. There were magenta works in the pallu. She was wearing small tops in her ear and a heavy necklace. Her hand was bare except for two matching yellow bracelets on each hand.


Anu was wearing a magenta lehenga with pink choli and magenta dupatta. Unlike her friends, she has put on heavy make up. So she has worn less jwelleries than them. Only ear rings and a few bangles.




They have planned to wear similar colours and so there were the touch of magenta in all of them.




Bani was set on mission. She gathered the girls aside. As Sarika has got no brothers or sisters, it was their prime duty to harass the groom side and off course there were two major tasks - Gate fee, Shoe fee. They planned for all these.


Suddenly the roar of people was sound and they instantly knew that the groom side has arrived. They ran to the entrance which was decorated with lights and flowers. They all gathered blocking the entrance as the girls positioned a gorgeous ribbon in front of the gate. They kept a chair and a stool outside the gate. The chair was for the groom. On the stool there were four glasses of Orange juice.


Well, only one of them were drinkable, the other three were junk as one of them consisted chilli powder, one consisted salt and another was mixed with onion juice. The groom side approached and mocked anger seeing the blocked gate.




"what kind of manner is it? Let the Dulha got in."




"Chee, what a chair and what cheap juices."




"Oh God, how greedy girls, hey pretty ones, let us go in."


The girls replied in same fashion. They wanted an amount of 15 thousand to free the gate. The groom side exclaimed hearing the amount. "Are you crazy or something worse?" asked one man who was the groom's brother. At once all the man started to sing,



Crazy kiya re, o crazy, crazy kiya re.


The girls were even more rude. "We don't want to hear you besuras. Let us deal with our Jija. Jiju, sit here. Or we'll get you."


Finally, after much protesting and bickering, the amount was settled in 10 thousand. Asif cut the ribbon and everyone cheered. Then he was taken to the Groom's stage. His brother and the friends surrounded him like body guards as they saw the girls lurking around. Bani noticed that Asif's brother Arif was carefully holding the shoes. She nodded her head and went to discuss it with the girls.


Bani: Yaars, look at that, Arif has got the shoes.




Rano: yeah, and four others are guarding him.




Pri: Got an idea, someone go and flirt with him and the others will try to snatch it when he's not paying attention.


The three of them immediately looked at Anu who stepped backward, "Mujhe kyon bakri bana rahi ho?" she saw the look on the three friends and said, "Ok, ok, I'll do it."




Just then, Bani's mobile started to ring. She checked it and a slow smile appeared in her face, "You do whatever you want, I'm going, please excuse me." She almost ran from there and took refugee near Sarika. Sarika saw her expression and smirked.




Bani glared at her and received the call, "Hello?"


" Where are you, I'm calling you since forever." Said the deep voice.




That's it for today, let me know what do you think of it….I'll try to do 2C real quick, just pray for my health…😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#72
I'm already praying for ur health dear,
It was short no JB
But very funny part, loved all gals n their jokes,
Crazy kiya re, was g8t😆

continue soon😃
Edited by siumi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#73
Awesome part hun 👏 👏
Very well written as usual 👏
Lovely dress 😳
Good strategies to get money from the dhulla i'll say 😆 👏
Jai is coming 😃
Please continue ASAP
i hope u'll get well soon, here's a jadoo ki jhappi from me 🤗
Humera. 🤗
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Posted: 18 years ago
#74

Hey Rain 😃

Gr8!!! u started the sequel of The Rain Must Fall.... CooooooooooooooooooooL!!!! 👏

Soooorry cudnt post a comment earlier.... I was in the hospital 4 a while.... 😛

Kya yaar u scared me to death.... after reading the prologue i thought JnB got separated .... Now we cant let that happen r8??? 😛 😃 😉

Btw whose Crispy i mean ooops Cissy??? 😛 😆 😉

GAWD!!!! Yeh Pia Bhikmangii.... Yahaan bhi prob kar rahin hain.... DAMN!!!! y did Pri & Bani had to sign that damn contract... Now wht if Bani sacrifices Jai 4 Pri..... 😡

& yeaaa no1 noticed that Pri's love & Bani's bf is the same person except this Bhikmangii??? How come yaar???? 😡

& Rain... i thought Pri will fall in love wid Pushy.... plzzzzzzz yaar let her fall in love wid Pushy & 4get Jai completely.... C, prob solved.... 👏

Hey btw wht happenned to ur health??? R u alr8 or having fever??? In BD now in every house 1 or 2 people are sick bcoz of this seasonal fever.... GET WELL SOON buddy!!!!😃

Edited by Auditi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#75
Heheheh.. jai;s on the phone!! 😉 im so xcited! for the next update!
all the girls sounded very pretty!
hope u get well soon hun!
great part!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#76
Hi Bristy! 😊

It's awesome...liked the interactions between the girls and groom's side.....praying for your health....waiting for Part-C 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#77
Hey these girls are real a handfull..That guy Arif willnot even have a clue what hit him 😆 😆 😆

Oh so Jai is on phone...Bani Rani ka mission is deviated now..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#78
😛 hey
great awsome part
loved the interaction between the girls
i hope u feel better soon

Taj 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aye haye...phone call...haye 😳 ...kintu chi...boyfriend-er call ki asholo aar bani shob bhandohobi der ke fhele chole ashle...not right ...lol...omg omg... its is so much fun the weddings...woo hoo...especially the gate dhora ar jhoota churano... 😆 ...amader onek faida aache... 😉 ...lol...but you wanna know something...koiek maash aage akta apu biye korlo...taar kinto akta bon...my firend...when the groom got there we were saying the beginning balance is $5000...jiju toh was all 😲 ...but taar pore ki je holo...groom snuck in from a back entrance...then when my firend is like fine you are in now give me the money...aar ki bolbo...the groom and his uncle...said we were baidob, all we want is money...khoto gali dilo, amar firend to khende diyeh chilo...it was so sad...we didt expect that...jhogra jhati churu kore diye chilo... 😡 ...after that we didnt take any money, and we didnt even try to steal the shoes...who knows...amader ke tha hole chor daktoh... ...anyway...loved the update...the matching...lol...we did that at my bhaias wedding too... 😆 ok...now give us another update...but feel better first...tar pore... 😃 hope u fully recover very soon... 🤗
JAZ
Edited by jnawaz - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#80
hey i hope you are fit & fine now!

girls do such things in marriages!! demanding money on sweet excuses!! feels all exciting! but people like me are hopeless!! i had a wonderful opportunity in my sister's wedding and i preferred to have the ice-cream! and what i got in return??? my BIL said, "khub bhalo meye!"
okay forget that... Bani forgetting everything with the call?? not her fault.... carry on..

waiting for 2C....

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