FF: Rain Maker (Epi & A/N - Pg 82)

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Sheena

@Sheena_Row

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+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#641

You are bachao'ed. I thought you introduced Meera here and I was going to come with a belan. But you lucked out! 😆

I don't think this is the end, this is the beginning of a milan to come in the future. The Earth...where new life grows.

Priyanka has done well, so did Bani! Very independent and self sufficient. 👏

Of course, Jai Walia took up a middle name "Tycoon" - start the new FF soon, this time the tycoon meets the dancer, both independent, headstrong, self sufficient.

You did great, I liked your characters.

BTW: Tanu is lucky, she finally found Pushkar.. 😉 😉 😉

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Bristy

@the_rain

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 17 years ago

#642

Originally posted by: btkr
Brishty, u go girl, bold ending 😆 nah, just kidding, u broke up JB?????????? bad girl, but that's ok, we have enuf happy endings, at least u didn't make them devdas and devdasi, dying of a broken heart or drunkenness 😉

I just wanted to do something different, nothing else.....what's the point in making Devdas, in real, how many lovers turn Devdas unless they are big losers?

Enjoyed the ff - it was always different, I esp remember enjoying the wedding scenes and the banter among the friends; also your never ending stock of poetry. Good going! 👏 👏 👏

Thank you very much dear....I'm glad to know that I made it different, aw, you liked the poetries? Thanku 😳

Thanks Bina for being with Rain Maker

Originally posted by: InTheZone123
That was a great ff bristy! thanks Niks !

That was unexpected, i thought Bani was going to regret her decision and go bach to Jai and then happily ever after , and i thought Push and Pri were going to get together, but anyways it was a very good ending!

Aww..thanks 😳

Loved how u described how their future was and what they had done with their lives
I will really miss reading this ff, I really hope u start a new one soon!!! I am waaiting....

I'll try to start a new one really soon, hun...😃

niks

Thanks Niks for being with Rain Maker

Originally posted by: xindian_baybeex
whoaaa

what was that?
no way
u must continue this
like you did with the other ff
remember ... Rain must fall
became Rain maker
now.. Rain-bow
=)
yeah?
AHAHHA

You want me to write a third sequel? 😆..well you never know, how does "A Walk in the Rain" sounds? 😆

please, omg noo.. u must continue
i wont take u off my list off FF..
PLEASE

dear, I ended it just because I was unable to continue this, I'm starting a new FF, hope you'd enjoy that as well...😊

thanks xindian for being with Rain Maker

Originally posted by: Sheena_Row
You are bachao'ed. I thought you introduced Meera here and I was going to come with a belan. But you lucked out! 😆 hehe.....I'm a bad kid, but I do my works with "Hoshiari" 😆😆

I don't think this is the end, this is the beginning of a milan to come in the future. The Earth...where new life grows. you are too good 😉.....I kept open the road to yet another continuation...., hai na? Tell me how does A Walk in the Rain sound for the next portion?

Priyanka has done well, so did Bani! Very independent and self sufficient. 👏 Yep, I wanted to show that they were hurt but not broken...that's it

Of course, Jai Walia took up a middle name "Tycoon" - start the new FF soon, this time the tycoon meets the dancer, both independent, headstrong, self sufficient. *sigh* wouldn't that be a lots of fire works? 😆😆, I wish I could write that one, but right now, I don't have any story line regarding that 😛

You did great, I liked your characters. thank u 😳

BTW: Tanu is lucky, she finally found Pushkar.. 😉 😉 😉 that's a gift from me to her...😆

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thanku Shoba Di for being with Rain Maker, and see, I've learnt to put the correct amount of H in your name, 🤣

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khushboo2006

@khushboo2006

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#643

Bristy you are saved. For a change I am not going to run after you with my belans or other weapons as I liked the ending a lot 😃 😆 .

Ask Why?? Because I know there is going to be another "Rain Dancing in the Tycoon's World" soon very soon 😳 😃 😆 ....What say 😉 😛 .

Loved how you portrayed each character's success and achievement. Just wonderfully done 👍🏼

Now common get you energ back and start writing the next SEQUEL. Thanks for writing such a beautiful FF.
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Dammy

@damilola

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#644

Bristy

now i have time to scream at u for ending dis ff

wats up wit u !!!

ohh me so mad at u 😡

it was agreat ending btw 👏 👏

buh its jst soo sad dat no jai and bani hooking up !!!!!

and pooch and tanu- soo cute

im still pissed off though
buh its all good
cos u have a new ff

lovely story and ending

Dammy

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Bristy

@the_rain

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 17 years ago

#645

Originally posted by: khushboo2006
Bristy you are saved. For a change I am not going to run after you with my belans or other weapons as I liked the ending a lot 😃 😆 Bah, Shoba Di "bachao'ed" me, you saved me......it's good be in shelter...😆...really?

Ask Why?? Because I know there is going to be another "Rain Dancing in the Tycoon's World" soon very soon 😳 😃 😆 ....What say 😉 😛 haila...Barish me daud? 😆

Loved how you portrayed each character's success and achievement. Just wonderfully done 👍🏼 Thank U..😳

Now common get you energ back and start writing the next SEQUEL. Thanks for writing such a beautiful FF. okie, okie, may be in the next decade...😃
🤗

Okie, I won't thank you for being with it, you have to be there for every single crap I write, after all why are sisters for? 😆

Originally posted by: damilola

Bristy now i have time to scream at u for ending dis ff wats up wit u !!!

sorry baby....😛

ohh me so mad at u 😡 it was agreat ending btw 👏 👏

thank u..😳

buh its jst soo sad dat no jai and bani hooking up !!!!! and pooch and tanu- soo cute im still pissed off though buh its all good cos u have a new ff lovely story and ending

honey, I think for the last 2 days, I'm making you sad continuously...sorry 😛

Dammy

Thanks Dammy for being with Rain Maker 😃

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bugs_bunny

@bugs_bunny

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#646

Britzy.. you remeber you asked me a Q in my MOTW?

Are you going to reveal who that character is now?? 😉

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Reeshita

@ree_views

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#647

Hi…just following my responsibility 😃…It was supposed to be posted long long time back..only if I would have written it, that is. 😆. Now at the end somewhere I find I can't relate with the characters completely. Where Jay didn't try to talk to Bani any more, more due to a broken and insecure heart rather than ego….where he still wanted to be with her although he had no hope left..they were just so obvious. Being extremely close to someone often makes them appear as complete strangers. Pri on the other hand talked about the whole thing with Bani and they were quite at comfort with each other..that was admirable but at the cost of what? Bani losing her love..and Pri not being able to protect it. The way she said that she loved Jay..in clean words..that was so bold of her but then time has made her stronger than ever…nothing to lose if nothing to gain. The conversation between Jay and Pri after the air between them being cleared was a treat to read. They were just the old friends needing some company! But that's it……you missed out Rano and Sarika's role….weren't they an important part of Pri and Bani's life…couldn't they have shared some words of wisdom? Pushkar's vanishing act….and every obvious sweet and beautiful thing gone, except some satisfaction with work/career is quite a part of life when suddenly everything changes and no one particular is to blame for it. When the FF beagn… I thought it to go some other way..but you have chosen other aspects..which were worth appreciation. Definitely you concluded the FF with a sad ending which is quite a fact of life…it was well written..clearly stating how life goes on..yet I've complaints…that will be cleared in my PM. Anyway…the whole thing was brilliantly put at times of sadness and happiness..and that means Very well done.

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