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Sangita

@sangitadas

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 18 years ago

#31

Thanks a lot Simmi for updating the second part

And I am liking the interactions between the two - very informative and inquisitive. 😉

👏

Please update soon.

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sukhjinder kaur

@siumi

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#32

That was awesome Simmi
Liked the way he was trying 2 get her out but no avail 😆 😆
wating 4 some more

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amisha

@amiee

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#33

wonderful part lets see how jai will coax her to go out with him on a date

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Samina

@Iqbal Neha1

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#34

amazing part
hope jai's able to convince bani to go on a date
ii like the way bani is trying to be in control but only jai can sense that she is hiding herself
hope jai gets 2 become bani's friend
👏

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Nikita

@InTheZone123

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#35

Loved it, it was awesome
Loved the interactions between Bani and Jai... lagta hai ki jai apna homewrk karke aya hai... but the one thing i found funny was that masi took away his cellphone
Hope Jai is able to coax Bani on going out on a date with him and it will be successful
continue soon!!!!
Nikita

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Dammy

@damilola

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

#36

yah!!!!!!!!!!!
u updated and it was great !!! 👏
wats up wit bani ???
y wnt she go 4 dinner wit jai ???
u have 2 make him make her go 2 dinner wit him !!!!

ok suggestion well more like a plea 😃 : plz plz plz kill pia in dis ff 🤢

great update and plz plz plz ctn soon !!! 👏

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Jojo

@Jojo_han

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#37

Thank you so much Simmi for updating.

It was amazing, I very much liked how the two of them, find around the other one strange, yet fascinating. 😉

I'll be looking forward for the next update. 👏 👏 👏

Please do update soon,

Rgds,

Jojo

Edited by Jojo_han - 18 years ago

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khushboo2006

@khushboo2006

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#38

Hi Simmi 😊 ......thanks for updating.........great part 👏 👏 👏 .....liked interactions between JB 😊 ......waiting to find out more.....please continue soon 😆

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Vishakha_Sakhi

@Vishakha_Sakhi

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 18 years ago

#39

Hey Simmi just finished reading both pts of this ff and they were wonderful! 😉 Totally enjoyed 'em!
👏
Interesting story line, it seems a bit different.
Can't wait to see how he convinces her to go on the date...pls continue soon.

V.

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preet

@preet_2010

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#40

Hey Simmi

fabalous update,loved it.interesting to see jai trying to break Bani's hard surface.simply superb.looking forward to there date. 😉
😊

preet 😳

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