FF: Pyar Ka Pal Note: Page 16 - Page 2

A very nice starting... 👏
Make it a JB story and you'll get lots of readers... 😉

sounds really intresting
like the way u described jai and the way he behaved with the staff
itwas really good
cant wait 2 read the next part
where jb meet each other.
👏

boring not at all
loved the beginning
pls cont soon.........

I like it!!!! Please cont soon!!!!!

so will this Ms. Dixit change the ruthless man?! 😕

Originally posted by: davia389

it is diff .. continue soon.. Thanks a lot, I am glad you liked it!
davia

Originally posted by: btkr

Bored????? Loved it... Thanks! I was scared of writing one…

Originally posted by: Je_aime

Very different…well written…do continue soon… Thanks, I am glad you liked it, I tried to make it different, let's see how it goes…

Originally posted by: ag06

loved it...let ur ff be about JB...pleeeeeeeeeez...continue asap It will be about JB for sure, I might add other couple like Ranveer and Rano.

Originally posted by: Jojo_han

Wonderful and well phrased dear. Thank you!

Simmi I liked your simple target. Its indeed a good start and I want to read more of it. Thanks, I was worried but thanks to you people it makes writing the next part more fun…


Must continue dear! Will try to continue either today or tomorrow…


Rgds


Jojo Simmi =D

Originally posted by: Auditi

It sounds really GooooooooooooD buddy!!!! 👏👏 Thank you!!

Very different & simple.... I tried to make it different, I am glad people liked it…

& yeaaaaaa it wasnt boring at all....Cool =D

plzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzz post the nxt part soon..... Will try to update either today or tomorrow…

Originally posted by: ridhijai

Wonderful start. Thanks a bunch!
loved it. I am glad you liked it…
not boring at all =D
plz cont. soon.Will try to continue either today or tomorrow…

Originally posted by: swatinarang

great start. please continue soon

swati

Thanks a bunch, I am glad you liked it!!

Originally posted by: static_chaos23

gr8 start to ur ff

pls continue soon

ta

Thank you hun, all the comments mean a lot to me!

Originally posted by: Twinkle20

A very nice starting...
Make it a JB story and you'll get lots of readers...

For sure it will be a JB story, glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

sounds really intresting
like the way u described jai and the way he behaved with the staff
itwas really good
cant wait 2 read the next part
where jb meet each other.

Thanks a lot, glad you liked it. Jai is a sweet man who is taken to be rude only because he likes his privacy.

Originally posted by: amiee

boring not at all
loved the beginning
pls cont soon.........

Thanks a lot, am glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: Dk*s_Jaanu_Guli

I like it!!!! Please cont soon!!!!!

so will this Ms. Dixit change the ruthless man?!

Glad you liked it… we will see who changes who…

Very different...
Interesting start
Cant wait to read it and continue soon!!!!

Nikita

lovely start ..plzzzz continue soon ..........will be waiting 😊

great ff 😆

wow
plz ctn soon!!!

i cnt wait to read wat happens nxt ......
will she pour d coffee on him ??
dat wuld be so much fun to read !!

👏

Great start, please continue soon.

Nikita