FF: Pyar Ka Pal Note: Page 16

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Table of Contents:

Part 1: Page 1

Part 2: Page 4

Part 3: Page 6

Part 4: Page 8

Part 5: Page 10

Part 6: Page 12

Part 7: Page 13

Hi,

I have been part of IF for a year now, but I have never posted anything till now. I have been reading all the fabulous FFs and enjoying the discussions that goes on so I decided to venture on this experience on my own.

Here is part one.

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The buzzer sounded and the scene was finalized, it all seemed to be going perfectly and for the first time, everything was finishing on time. The entire set was buzzing with activity and everyone had better places to be. One man entered the room and everyone stopped in their tracks.

Swati turned around and rushed on over, "Mr. Walia, you weren't going to come until 5. I am sorry that everything isn't perfectly ready, just give us a few more minutes. Until then, why don't you go sit inside?"

The rumor has it that Mr. Jai Walia, is a rude industrialist who uses people for his own gain. He is a very disciplined yet arrogant man who doesn't think anyone is better then him. He went from being a son of a very poor man to a rich businessman all in a span of a few years making him the most eligible bachelor in the country. Not only was he good at what he did, he was also a perfectionist and everyone was scared to mess up in front of him.

Swati was still stuttering when talking to the great Jai Walia but finally mustered to gather some courage and speak, "Ms. Dixit should be arriving shortly, so why don't you come inside and sit down?"

The minute Jai Walia opened his mouth, everyone was surprised. "Oh, that's fine I am good here. Wow, this is a nice office, organized but at the same time it is full of life." Everyone expected a rude man who would be impatient but he spoke with warmth.

Swati was the most surprised, he didn't make her feel nervous anymore but instead she stood in awe and fully observed him. He was not down-right top model gorgeous but there was something about him that attracted girls, maybe it was charisma.

Jai Walia walked around the office; talking to everyone he passed, making new friends. People stood in awe but were glad that they were getting an opportunity to work with them. The advertising company needed a big, industrious name for their next product. Someone who was a business man but was still deep-rooted in his family, someone with a charm that could attract not only women, but kids and men as well.

The first day their boss had laid her eyes on a small interview of Jai Walia, she had decided that she would make an advertisement with him. The struggle was to try and convince him to agree. She was on the phone continuously for 2 months trying to get through his annoying secretary but to no avail. Then randomly one morning Bani bumped into Maasi at the temple and they got to talking. Bani had no idea that Maasi was related to Jai Walia but it worked out for her as Maasi convinced Jai to do the commercial, I mean after all it was just one commercial, how bad could it be?

Jai had never met Bani Dixit but from his Maasi's description it seemed like she was confident, and young. Just then the door opened from the main door and entered a young girl, in her mid 20s. In one hand she held some papers and in the other, there was a coffee cup. She was dressed in a professional suit, full sleeved pants and shirt but it suited her really well.

As she passed people and made her way to Swati she stopped at various spots dealing with different things that needed to be taken care of. When she finally turned around, she was staring right into Jai Walia's face…

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Kaisa laga? Bored? I hope you guys liked the first part.

-Simmi

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davia389 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it is diff .. continue soon..
davia
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Bored????? Loved it...
👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Very different…well written…do continue soon…😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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loved it...let ur ff be about JB...pleeeeeeeeeez...continue asap
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wonderful and well phrased dear. 👏 👏 👏


Simmi I liked your simple target. Its indeed a good start and I want to read more of it.


Must continue dear!


Rgds


Jojo

Edited by Jojo_han - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏

It sounds really GooooooooooooD buddy!!!! 😉 👍🏼

Very different & simple.... 👏 😃 👍🏼

& yeaaaaaa it wasnt boring at all.... 😊

plzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzz post the nxt part soon..... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wonderful start.
loved it.
not boring at all
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great start. please continue soon

swati
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 start to ur ff 👏

pls continue soon😃

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