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rucha

@roomoo

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Posted: 18 years ago

#31

aww poor jai....i hope he gets people to hit her with a car or something she can die then!!! tht wud b gr8!!!

bring back the beasty jai!!! lol
awesome part!!

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khushboo2006

@khushboo2006

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Posted: 18 years ago

#32

Great part 😃 😆
Pia...I don't have word to say 😡
Plz update soon 😊 😃
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Niroo

@Niroo

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Posted: 18 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: ~Unforgettable~

NO!!! this was my post!!! i told u i cudn't post today and tomorrow and i still posted!!! 😆

ok see i updated just for u too.. hehe 😆

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91118

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Posted: 18 years ago

#34

awesome part hinna! 👏 👏 this pia's getting on my nerves 😡

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mitali patel

@Mitu1228

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Posted: 18 years ago

#35

Hinnu, I do not like Pia!!! Poor Jai!!! Cont. soon!!!

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cheeze

@cheeze

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#36

Nice FF, well written 👏 but this Pia 😡 and poor Jai........aww he doesn't know how to handle his babies...........
Just read all parts and it's great, please continue soon 😛

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ritu

@ritu_the_gr8

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Posted: 18 years ago

#37

awesome part hinna...
stupid pia... but i still liek her...
dont ask mee why? 😉
poor bani...

continue sooon...

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Isha

@lil_isha15

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Posted: 18 years ago

#38

hehehe i wont say much cuz i already told u how much me likes ur ff 😆 n pluz u probably dont want to read anything written by me for awhile 😆 well contiue soon!! didnt execpt u to update this quick!! well do it again this should be interestin see wat walia does! 😊

cheers
isha

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~Unforgettable~

@~Unforgettable~

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Posted: 18 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: lil_isha15
hehehe i wont say much cuz i already told u how much me likes ur ff 😆 n pluz u probably dont want to read anything written by me for awhile 😆 well contiue soon!! didnt execpt u to update this quick!! well do it again this should be interestin see wat walia does! 😊

cheers
isha

lol, don't worry, i still hate my ff!!! Like i'm seriously thinking about stopping the ff. i'm like totally serious about this. no joke!!!

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~Unforgettable~

@~Unforgettable~

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Posted: 18 years ago

#40

Part Four:

Looking around
Seeing faces around her
Yet she recognizes none

Hearing voices surround her
Yet not knowing their source
Taken to a house she's never seen
Put into a room she doesn't recognize

She tries to comprehend what happening
Yet she can't fathom what's going on
She feels her eyelids getting heavier
Until she sees nothing but darkness

Bani woke up, breathing heavily, trying to figure out what happened. Her disheveled appearance was an indication towards her hardships. It seemed like it had all just been a bad dream she had just awoken from. But it was reality. Sometimes your worst nightmares become the factuality of your existence and that is exactly what had happened to her. Her worst nightmare had now become her harsh and true reality. What she tries to break free from every moment of her life, yet that one mistake would haunt her forever.

The last thing Bani remembers is a man she vividly remembers, taking her children away from her. She ran behind him, begged him, pleaded him to give her children back, yet his impassive expression told her everything. She knew it was of no use, yet she couldn't seem to contemplate that her children were away from her. Having not yet even tasted a drop of their mother's milk, two innocent children were snatched away from their source of existence. Bani screamed for her children, yearned to hold them in her hands, caress them as a mother would, but to no avail.

She then woke up from her dream and looked around her. It seemed as though this place would be her home forever. She knew she had to get used to the lifestyle, yet she still had a tiny ray of hope in her soul. She still believed that the man she loved would come and rescue her from her living nightmare.

Pia had come to visit Bani that same day. Bani had not expected this and had been shocked at seeing her sister.

Pia: (in a sugary sweet voice) Di, how are you? I'm so sorry that my mistake brought you into this hell house, but what can I do? (anger and resentment now heard in her voice) Mr. Walia and I just love each other too much. Did you hear the great news? Me and Mr. Walia are going to get married? Aren't you excited for me? I just can't wait. You're going to come aren't you? (sarcastically) But wait (tapping her chin, as in great thought

All comments are welcome, good or bad 😃

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