Light of Loneliness Last Part page 36

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Posted: 18 years ago
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This FF is dedicated to Nirali (aka usa30172) who forced, no wait THREATENED me to post this FF 😆 😆

Light of Loneliness


Part 1:
In the midst of all the darkness, a figure could be seen holding onto herself as if in pain. By the looks of it, she had not been physically hurt, but who knew what lay beneath the exterior physique. Everyone in the mental asylum had long gone to sleep, but Bani knew that sleep was something that wouldn't come to her so easily. She just sat in the darkness and contemplated the events of the last few days. She couldn't believe that her own sister could betray her and that too alongside her own husband. The more she thought about it, the more the tears threatened to fall. Maybe this could be expected from Pia, but not from Mr. Walia. He may seem as heartless as a rock, but beneath all that, he had a heart of gold. He had shown her what love truly was. Maybe it was just her fate and she would learn to compromise with it. Amidst her thoughts, sleep finally pervaded Bani until all she could see was darkness surround her.

Jai woke to the sounds of his children crying. He got up and tried to pacify them, but to no avail. He just wasn't used to this. He tried to give them their bottles and changed their diapers, but it seemed as though his children just like to aggravate him. It seemed as though they knew that he had taken their mother away from them and that this was his punishment. If Bani were here, she would know exactly what to do, but since fate seemed as though it were against him, he would have to make do. He stayed awake and cradled his children until they finally fell asleep from exhaustion. He then tried to go back to sleep, but the thought of Bani and what she might be going through at the mental asylum kept him awake till it was finally time for him to go to work.

Rano was striding in her room as though she planned to burn a hole through the carpet. Varun was asleep and she was trying to think of ways to help her Bani di. She knew she couldn't tell her the truth, but she could try and help her in other ways, but how?? She had tried to talk to her the other day, but the sheer pain of having lost her children was still fresh and Bani was still trying to cope with the loss. Just as she was deep in thought, Varun started to cry and Rano had to stop her train of thought and attend to him.

all comments are welcome, good or bad!!!

Part 1: Page 1
Part 2: Page 2
Part 3: Page 5
Part 4: Page 6
Part 5: Page 8
Part 6: Page 10
Part 7: Page 12
Part 8: Page 14
Part 9: Page 17
Part 10: Page 20
Part 11: Page 23
Part 12: Page 25
Part 13: page 27
Part 14: Page 28
Part 15: Page 30
Part 16: Page 33
Part 17: Page 35
Part 18: Page 36
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey hinu
loved this ff..

see i told u to post this ff.
and hey stopp calling ur self a bad writter when u r a very good writter indeed..

i think that part really good..
it was really deepp

continue soon
and i mean by tom i should have part 2..
mean it.. and if u dont then me not updating my ff..

hehe love u jaan

Edited by usa30172 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow...that was good..eagerly waiting for the next part....continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hinna, Hinna, Hinna, Hinna, Hinna..
I betted u, that it will be good rite?
How much money did we bet?
I think 1000...so cough up..
Cuz it is great!!!!!
I seriously liked it..
Who knew the crazy..PURE EVIL girl could write like this..?
But anyway continue soon Yaar..I will b waiting
:D

-Mahak-

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: usa30172

hey hinu loved this ff..


see i told u to post this ff.and hey stopp calling ur self a bad writter when u r a very good writter indeed..


i think that part really good..it was really deepp


continue soonand i mean by tom i should have part 2.. mean it.. and if u dont then me not updating my ff..


hehe love u jaan



sorry niru, i won't be able to update tom.!!! and stop with the threatening, and i still think i'm a bad writer, i just posted this FF for u!!! 😆 😆 n me love u too !!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: menal

wow...that was good..eagerly waiting for the next part....continue soon



thx for the postitive feedback and will try and continue soon!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mini786

Hinna, Hinna, Hinna, Hinna, Hinna..
I betted u, that it will be good rite?
How much money did we bet?
I think 1000...so cough up..
Cuz it is great!!!!!
I seriously liked it..
Who knew the crazy..PURE EVIL girl could write like this..?
But anyway continue soon Yaar..I will b waiting
:D

-Mahak-



Mahak, Mahak, Mahak, u shud know betting is HARAAM!!! 😆 😆 haha, and i'm not pure evil, i just have a TINY bit of evil in me, just a TINY bit 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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U write now, Hinnu!!! I love!!! Take the kids 2 their mother!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute1228

U write now, Hinnu!!! I love!!! Take the kids 2 their mother!!!

i totally agree with mitu, hinu..

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Pls. continue soon...
love the portryal of Bani in the madhse trying to sleep--How can she?
😭 😭 😭

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