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rucha

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Posted: 18 years ago

#21

awesome part please continue soon!!

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~Unforgettable~

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Posted: 18 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: cute_priya
please continue soon

i did 😆 2nd part updated 😆

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~Unforgettable~

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Posted: 18 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: aperture
Pls. continue soon...
love the portryal of Bani in the madhse trying to sleep--How can she?
😭 😭 😭

thx for the positive feedback!!! 😃

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~Unforgettable~

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Posted: 18 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: usa30172
hey hinu
me mad at u..
u update and dont even tell me..

anyways
loved the update..
aww poor bani..
please get her out of there..
cant see her in there.
anymore

umm, sorry?? 😆 😆 BUT, now that i've updated, it's UR turn!!! now GO UPDATE!!! 😆 😆

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Niroo

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Posted: 18 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: ~Unforgettable~

umm, sorry?? 😆 😆 BUT, now that i've updated, it's UR turn!!! now GO UPDATE!!! 😆 😆

sweetie i will just give me sometime.. i will post it today promise.. i have to finish my hw than i willl... u still have to post another update by tuesday remember my deadline right 😆

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~Unforgettable~

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Posted: 18 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: usa30172

sweetie i will just give me sometime.. i will post it today promise.. i have to finish my hw than i willl... u still have to post another update by tuesday remember my deadline right 😆

NO!!! this was my post!!! i told u i cudn't post today and tomorrow and i still posted!!! 😆

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Isha

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Posted: 18 years ago

#27

omg hinna awesome ff going!! hahah i think i yelled n lectured at u enough through pms that dont have to her execpt tell u that stop sayin u suck!! cuz u dont!! so keep writin cuz u awesome really lookin forward to ur updates!! wow i am like really exicted i can basically picture everything!! ur really gud...so stop sayin u suck!!! n hmmm watesle....k thats it...o ya u better update soon or i'll be after u like u were after me 😆

cheers
isha

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~Unforgettable~

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Posted: 18 years ago

#28

Part Three:

While Jai was working in his study on his laptop, he heard the door open. Without looking up to see whom it was, he just told the person to get out and to leave him alone. With that, he just continued with his work. He had expected the person to leave him in peace, yet that's the exact opposite of what had happened. When the person didn't leave, Jai looked up to see who it was, and was shocked to see Pia standing there. She had a smirk on her face indicating that she was up to no good.

Pia: Hello, Mr. Walia, how are you this fine day?

Jai: (discontentment in his voice) What's so fine about it?

Pia: The question is, what's NOT fine about it? I mean, a pretty woman like me stepping into the office of such a handsome man like you, what more can you ask for?

Jai: (Hissing out of pure seething anger) Pia, stop beating around the bush and tell me what you want?

Pia: Oh come on Mr. Walia, you know exactly what I want. I want you to marry me and make me yours.

Jai: And if I decline this preposterous proposal?

Pia: Do you really want me to tell you what I can do? Or better yet, let me just show you.

Pia takes out the DVD and her cell phone from her purse and starts dialing a number. Jai runs up to her and takes the cell phone from her hands. He turns it off and looks at Pia with disgust written all over his face.

Jai: have you no shame, woman?

Pia: Shame is a word I refrain from keeping in my dictionary. It keeps people from getting what they want and I, Mr. Walia, am a woman who sees what she wants and gets it, no matter what. Now you know what I can do, but do you really want me to show you. I am a woman who keeps her word, Mr. Walia and I will show no remorse in doing so.

Jai: you disgust me Pia. How could you do this to your own sister, who raised you like a daughter? I can't even think of anyone who could go lower than you, but then again, what else can I expect from you?

Pia: Mr. Walia, just think about my proposal. You have only two options in front of you at this time. Either you can decline my proposal and force me to show this DVD to the police and have them take away your 'precious' wife to jail or you can accept my proposal and keep Bani di alive in the mental asylum. Now, I hope you choose the latter, but in case you do choose the first, you know what's going to happen and I doubt you want that to happen. Now, I'm giving you two days time to think about my proposal, and by that time, I want an answer or else I'll take the first option as your answer.

With that being said, Pia left the room with a smile playing on her lips.

All comments are welcome, good or bad 😊

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Niroo

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Posted: 18 years ago

#29

hey hinu
loved that part..
i am so glad i am u update..
hehe

and ya u can relax till tuesday..
after that me coming after u
to make u update again

and did i tell u
that i hate this pia..
i want to kill her...

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nikita28

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Posted: 18 years ago

#30

Great story....poor Bani and poor Jai.

I hope Rano helps Bani get out.....but please don't make Jai marry Pia....we may have to endure it in Kasamh Se 😭.

Please update soon.

Nikita

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