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@Mini786

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#51

Ooooh That pia!
Uff so mean!!!
And how dare u say if i care..
obviously i care!
Anways, continue soon!
:D

-Mahak-

P.S. sorry for not replying for the last two parts, was just too ah lazy?

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~Unforgettable~

@~Unforgettable~

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Mini786
Ooooh That pia!
Uff so mean!!!
And how dare u say if i care..
obviously i care!
Anways, continue soon!
:D

-Mahak-

P.S. sorry for not replying for the last two parts, was just too ah lazy?

lmao, yeah, well, IF you care!!! cuz, then it'd seem like you dont' like my ff, ur just reading it cuz i tell u to read it 😆 😆

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~Unforgettable~

@~Unforgettable~

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#53

Pia had come to visit Bani that same day. Bani had not expected this and had been shocked at seeing her sister.

Pia: (in a sugary sweet voice) Di, how are you? I'm so sorry that my mistake brought you into this hell house, but what can I do? (Anger and resentment now heard in her voice) Mr. Walia and I just love each other too much. Did you hear the great news? Mr. Walia and me are going to get married? Aren't you excited for me? I just can't wait. You're going to come aren't you? (Sarcastically) But wait (tapping her chin, as in great thought) you're going to be in here aren't you?? But don't you worry di, I'll tell you ALL about it. I won't miss out on any detail.

Bani started walking back. Her whole world had just been shattered and there was no one there to pick up the pieces. She went into a corner and cradled herself while crying. She then got up, and went into the Puja room where she prayed to god to keep her children safe and always protect them. She then spent the rest of the day in the Puja room, praying.
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Part 5:

Oblivious to her surroundings, Bani continued to walk in the freezing cold rain. Unknown of her destination, she just kept on walking. She just needed some time to think and she couldn't do that in the mental asylum. There was no peace in there. As she continued to walk, she felt as if her legs were going to rip off of it's hinges. She walked until she couldn't walk anymore. She was starting to feel dizzy, trying to find something to hold onto for support. As her hand is flailing for a pillar of support, she starts to see darkness surround her. That's the last thing she remembers before waking up in a hospital bed.

She looks around her, but doesn't seem to recognize her surroundings. All she hears is the constant beep of the monitor keeping check of her heart rate. A few minutes later, a female doctor comes inside to check up on her. On seeing that she is awake, she introduces herself as Dr. Kapoor.

Dr. Kapoor: Hello Bani, how are you feeling?

Bani: Dr., what am I doing here? All I remember is walking in the rain?

Dr. Kapoor: Well Bani, one of the employees of the mental asylum found you outside and brought you back in. When they saw that you had a high fever, they decided to bring you to the hospital.I took some tests, and it seems as though you're very weak. Your lack of nutritional health, along with your mental and emotional stress both contributed to your fainting. I looked at your previous reports, it says that you had given birth to twins just a couple days ago?

Bani: (a hint of sadness in her voice) yes, Dr. that is true.

Dr. Kapoor: (noticing the sadness in her voice) Bani, you need to take care of yourself. In this stage of your live, your body is very feeble and it's crucial that you take care of yourself. If you don't, there are dire consequences. Now, you are not going to be discharged from this hospital for at least a week, so I advice you to make yourself at home.

With that being said, Dr. Kapoor leaves Bani to rest.
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Jai had gotten a call from the mental asylum informing him of Bani's condition and the hospital in which she was staying. Once Jai heard of the terrible news, his first instinct was to go and see Bani. His heart ached to hear her voice once, just once. He wanted to see that innocent face once more and imprint it into his heart forever. Just as Jai was about to leave to go see Bani, Pia came in front of the door to stop him.

Pia: Where are you going Mr. Walia? Not to see di I hope?

Mr. Walia: What is it to you Pia whether I go see Bani or not?

Pia: Mr. Walia, do you really think it's in your best interest to make me angry right now. I mean, people do crazy things when they're angry.

Mr. Walia: Pia, just get out of my way, and let me leave.
Pia: Mr. Walia, you do remember our conversation yesterday right? I wouldn't want you to forget such an important conversation.

Mr. Walia: (with anger in his voice) yes, I remember Pia. Now let me go!!!

Pia: Wait a minute Mr. Walia. The minute you leave this house to go see di, I will take that as your answer.

Pia then takes out the DVD

Pia: the minute you walk out that door, I'll just go to the police station and hand this over to them. Now go get a good look at di, because this is probably the last time you're going to see her.

Mr. Walia: (ready to kill Pia. Anger seething through his whole body) okay Pia, I won't go, but that still doesn't mean that I've made my deicision.

Pia: you better hurry up Mr. Walia, only one more day left.

What that, Mr. Walia shuts the door on her face and sits down on the sofa trying to think of what to do.
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Ok, people, that's it for today. Please do comment!!! All silent readers, would love to hear your thoughts and views about this part!!! All comments are welcome, good or bad.

Edited by ~Unforgettable~ - 18 years ago

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ritu

@ritu_the_gr8

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#54

yippie...me teh first one to comment....
lol
haven't read it yet...will edit after reading!!! 😳 😳

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ritu

@ritu_the_gr8

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: ritu_the_gr8
yippie...me teh first one to comment....
lol
haven't read it yet...will edit after reading!!! 😳 😳

okkie... i read it!!!
awesomee part hinna!!!
it rocked... stupid pia...
umm one question... what is in the dvd? is it a secret or isit just mee trying to find the answer???
anywayss continue soon...and plss no more 'nakhra'. or stubborness!!

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khushboo2006

@khushboo2006

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#56

It's awesome 😃 😆
But plz plz do something with this PIA 😡
Plz update soon😊
👏

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~Unforgettable~

@~Unforgettable~

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: ritu_the_gr8

okkie... i read it!!!awesomee part hinna!!!it rocked... stupid pia... umm one question... what is in the dvd? is it a secret or isit just mee trying to find the answer???anywayss continue soon...and plss no more 'nakhra'. or stubborness!!

i will have nakhras!!! i will have nakhras every time i want to update!!! haha, i'm a VERY stubborn person!!! 😆 😆

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 18 years ago

#58

yaay yeh pia kuch zyada baatein kaarti hai 😡 ...im bringing super glue to shut her up for good...uff...update soon...omg...send a savior for bani...please... 😃 😃 😃
JAZ

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ovaltine

@ovaltine

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#59

nice read. exactly what I feared, how low can you allow yourself to be blackmailed. 👏 👏

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preeti73

@preeti73

Explorer

Posted: 18 years ago

#60

Caught up with the last three parts.........very well written...... 👏 👏
Omg....this Pia!!!!!she can go to any length....

Let's see how long will JW let her to walk all over him!!!!!

Love,
Preeti.

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