The Foreign Self: Part XIV to XVI-B - Page 29

My so very patient and long suffering readers (silent, communicative, vociferous, even the semi threatening),

Here finally is the update: part XVI-B.

Of necessisity it cannot be longer than this, which will become obvious once the next part is posted.

My apologies for the delay. Hope you enjoy this part.

regards,
Armana

🤣 The bill? 🤣 That was the perfect ending! Pia is a coniving cow 😡.. but i think Bani will explain it to him what happened, which may cause him to find out that she was the woman!😳

Loved the way you described Pia...👏👏

Great part and will be looking forward to more updates!😉

finallyyyyyyyyy!!..😛😃

Wow!!..mindblowin part hun!!👏👏..heh..Jaiz jealous of Rumaan!!😳😉..ur description of Pia was damnnnnn hilarious!!😆.urggghhhhhhh..Pia...Pia...Piaaaaaaa!!!.😡..wanna kill her..😡.i just hope dat Jaiz not upset wid Bani!!😕...waitin eagerly for the next update??

PS-pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeez dun end ur ff!!😭

i just read it honey...and why am I so scared???
Please make things better...and give Pia one tight slap on my behalf...
Rivs

Is it a dream or are you really back?😃

Read it in one go and loved it....As someone said perfectly, Pia is such a Cow...😡

Waiting for the next part, where you have to teach her a good lesson or two in manners!

Cheerios,

MT

PS: Reply to my PM, please!

You finally updated 👏 👏 I have been dying to find out what will happen next. It was a great part 😉

Armana

have waited for so long for ou to continue this fab fanfic!!!

So glad you are back and hope you don't disappear again!!

hate Pia and hope she gets whats coming to her......I see revelations around the corner!!!

Nina

Thanks age06.the ff will end when tfs reaches its logical end, don't worry, it wont be abandoned midway.

Bugs: glad you liked what i did to pia. she deserves far worse, but this was enough to make me giggle as i imagined it!

rivya: as for the slap- will do. as for your instincts-they are rather good!

MT: already replied, and its no dream 😃

armana

i think im dreaming...u r back for real???? 😆
i thought i was seen things when i saw part XVI-B 😆

thnk u soo much for updating the FF

like every1 asking u to do..plz slap pia 😃

Armana,

I have waited a long time for this update. It was worth the wait. Pia ufff! She is such a loser in all sense. I hope the misunderstandings are cleared up soon between Jai and Bani.

Please don't wait too long to update.