Key To My Life-FF epilogue pg 18 - Page 8

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Posted: 18 years ago
#71
love this ff..
i think ur ff has a great story line
please dont end this ff unless u r going to start a new one..
i know that is a blackmailing but too bad..
i hope u do continue soon..


aww so sweet seeing jai using his tricks on bani..
and thank god pia is jai's cousin..
that just makes this one of the best ff''s...

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Posted: 18 years ago
#72
Great part, please continue 😛.

Nikita
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Posted: 18 years ago
#73
good part love the basketball scene and the mehendi part where he is just looking only at her
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Posted: 18 years ago
#74
Excellent part.........Jai is confused about his love for Bani.......plz make him realize that soon 😉
Waiting for next installment 😆 😆
Good job......plz continue soon 😊 😃 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#75
i wonder how bani actually feels!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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please cont soon
thanks
Sunju
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Posted: 18 years ago
#76
chapter 8

next morning while bani was getting ready she received a call frm one of her friends and she told bani that her first sem results were out and she had done vwell and asked her the secret of her brilliant performance to which bani replied get yr self a husband like mine and ull do well ... jai was jus outside he didnt pay much attention to it and decided to go ahead with what he was doin

that day jai and bani both were busy with the arrangements didnt come face to face with each other...

In the evening as jai and bani both were getting ready for the sangeet bani while comin out of the loo strait bumped into jai with such a force that jai held her in his arms to stop both of them frm fallin she luked up and then gaze went to the floor and she in her typical self said "sorry" the way she luked at him left its mark in jais heart …

bani waited for jai to get dressed and decided that once he left she wud get ready......jai wondered why she wasnt gettin ready and asked " tum tayaar nahin ho .... she replied "woh and he got it and was like " sorry ill leave sorry"

and he left ... bani took out a black net sequience saree and wore she was gettin better with the saree tying...put on her jewellery and bangles ... just as she was havin a final look at her self jai entered for 2 min he cudnt beleive that was indeed bani ... he realised his expressions and coughed to indicate he was there and said " evryone is callin u " bani strted to walk jai abruptly " i hope no stiletos today" bani laufghed so did jai actually this was the first time jai had made her lauf.....

saahil and the gang complimented bani for she was luking stunning as for jai he decided to execute his plan... but before he cud move all were asked to assemble and sangeet was to begin
all the ladies first did the traditional sangeet where they sung their tradional songs and then it was time for the dhamaal
everybody was to dance with a partner the song would be decided by the bride so it started with saahil dancin with jais mom and pushkar with one of pias friends and so on so when jais turn came the only person left other than him was bani so he had no choice but to take her as partner and the song the got was" laga laga re laga prem rog frm maine pyar kyun kiya"

as the music started bani and jai matched step for step move for move , time and again her body comin into his arms ,his body being close to hers his hands on her waist and the final step where those beautiful lipss were just cms awayfrm his and those eyes that luked rite thru him added to the trubles his heart was already facing ... his thought broken by the whistles and claps of the family and bani shyly moving away but boy he had to admit it was sum experience....

it took him gud 15 mins to recuperate frm that boy that was sumthin he thought but then he remembered oh shit my plan so he really singled out a vpretty girl in the crowd and started talking to her (c woman were never difficult to impress as far as jai was concerned )so that bani cud catch him with her and he cud sort of get some reaction out of bani... but bani merily cees him frm a distance and doesnt seem bothered at all saahil is also watchin jai with the pretty lass and goes up to bani and says " what is this bhabhi dont u mind his talkin and laufin to that women he doesnt even no her shaadi ke baad bhi he thinks he is a bachelor bhabhi why dont u go tell him and us ladki ko bhi sharam nahin hai aapko bura nahin lag raha that instead of u he is talkin to her".

bani:smilin" he's happy and enjoyin himself so why shud i stop him i wanna c him happy aur woh jis bhi baat karne se khush hain usse karen mujhse to roz hi karte hain he must be gettin bored already....."

bani " waise she is quite pretty rite saahil"

saahil: oh my gawd bhabhi shes pretty and she is all over yr husband aur aapko farak nahin padh raha

bani : she can talk and be all over him but the fact remains he is my husband and thats the truth ..and i trust him...

saahil: wow bhabhi is jai bhaiya lucky aur what pls find me a gurl like yr self..... warna meri girlfriend to har baat to shaq se dekhti hai....

jai saw bani luking at him while he was chatting but wondered why she never came upto him..... was his plan floppin he hoped not but the plan did flop big time as bani nver said nething to him or questioned him he was like i guess it doesnt matter to her .....ya fir may be she is super cool hmmmm pata nahin the more i want to understand her the more confused i get.....

that nite jai was too tired to analyse what all had happened and thus just dosed off as for bani she luked at him and smiled to herself...and wondered how unknowingly she had fallen big time for him ...

to ek to samajh aa gayaa par jai he is still wonderin actually i cud have titled the ff jai in wonderland ...

but sorry for mistakes boredom and the crap ...
many thnx for yr kind words.....

feedback gud or bad is welcome....
Edited by bccool - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#77
the dance must have been really great that he had to have 15min to recuperate from it 😆
pls cont soon............
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Posted: 18 years ago
#78
😆 ...nice update...the dance was too funny...lol...15 mins... 😉
anyways...I like this Bani...she is so chilled out...I wish Jai comes up with a bigger better idea...
and seriously...the duffer should realise it soon...
Rivs
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Posted: 18 years ago
#79
gr8 part
Not at all boring
plz continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#80
Bechara Jai...no reaction at all. Ab kya karega?

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