FF:The Foreign Self PartX - XIII - Page 17

Originally posted by: btkr

Okaayyy--more detailed comments..

The beautiful garden, the name "Jannat", the sea behind, paintings within....sigh.....

I have a nasty feeling Pia and Roshni are going to gang up against Bani in some way..hope I am wrong...
Pushkar ka expression - hah! Can't wait for Pia's expression. 😃 But Maasi is definitely not going to like J&B openly "living in sin" in her house...let's see how Jai handles Bani's request for a separate room 😆

The arti scene was very special Armana, exquisite visual...I agree with one of the other posts above, u really should publish short stories...

Bravo!!
👏 👏 👏

thanks a lot sweetie!🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Sugar&Spice

Just caught up on all the parts I had not read. Amazing work armana. Absoloutely love the story.

welcome back and thank you.😊

Originally posted by: black current

armana lovely part
simple loved it and i really loved the painting description i could really imagine the painting

👏
update soon and will wait for ur update
love u
satya

thank you satya😊

Originally posted by: armana

Thanks you Rivs,
It's more than adequate, not just "kaam chalao!"
Nope, am not into gardening or botany. at all.
armana

got it honey...its not kaam chalao...and thanks for clarifying...😊

oh my god......................................

👏
beautifully written once again.................
everytime you are making this effect on me by writing such extra ordinary part....................

i think that tilak(tika) is going to be now seen on Bani's hair partition.
waiting for next..........
pooja

Hey Armaana...
Awesome awesome awesome...
I am always on the lookout for updates to your fanfic.... all the time... and boy... you made my day...
:-D
The way you play with words... it makes me feel as if I am watching it happen instead of reading it...
;-D


Thank you !!!!

- Abhita

Armana darling,

"Janat" describes it the best😃, and I mean it for everything, from the characters to the emotions protrayed, to the superb and fantastic discription of the whole Masion , the landscape and surroundings and with Jai in it, it definitley is one😉, and very eloquently done dear👏.

Your writing and your fanfic both are heavenly and its like being in Janat itself dear.😃 Its heaven for sure.

Aww...loved the way you brought back the two losers Pushkar😡 and Pia😡 back into the story. Can't wait to see their faces rubbed in and paying for the past. That would be poetic justice for sure.

Loved the whole scene between Nattu, Ranveer and Bani.😆😆😆 Poor guys and here I mean all of them were in shock. Very cutely and sweetly described.😆

And Jai seeing her with the Arti thali and seeing his mother in her was very poigent😳, his inner acceptance of Bani as more then just a fling, a good step in the right direction.😉😃

And the best "Welcome to Janat" 😃 *Sigh*😍. We are in one because of you dear.Thank you for providing us with one.

Till your next update dear.😃

Love

Krishna

Originally posted by: pooja1_76

oh my god......................................

👏
beautifully written once again.................
everytime you are making this effect on me by writing such extra ordinary part....................

i think that tilak(tika) is going to be now seen on Bani's hair partition.
waiting for next..........
pooja

thank you so much sweetie.😃

Originally posted by: abhita

Hey Armaana...
Awesome awesome awesome...
I am always on the lookout for updates to your fanfic.... all the time... and boy... you made my day...
:-D
The way you play with words... it makes me feel as if I am watching it happen instead of reading it...
;-D


Thank you !!!!

- Abhita

Thank you Abhita,
glad to hear that you like visuality!😊

Originally posted by: punjabankuri

amazing update as usual.
Thansk

thanks. Oh and thanks also for the helpful you sent me.