FF:The Foreign Self PartX - XIII - Page 16

Originally posted by: piccola

Magic Unlimited ! You could make a fortune out of this Armana....coz ur stories just mesmerise ! They're too good to be just a story in IF ..u need to publish them. Why dont ya talk to Kekta and get this into a commercial venture - branding for KS, pocketmoney for you and a source of perpetual delight to all of us?

Thats me the despo talking thru my biz head...! Please dont get me wrong on it !

You're Wow,
Pic.

thanks Piccola,
don't worry i am not taking it the wrong way. I feel really overwhelmed by the compliment since i just write for pleasure!
But kekta? heaven forbid! I shudder to think of the many ways in which she can and will mutilate the story!
but thank you for putting a huge grin on my face!

Originally posted by: india06

There are pieces of writing where one just lets out a deep sigh & lean back against the chair in utter gratification. This part XIII, was one of those!!!

Thanks.

p.s.:The vine clad wall of myriad hues was a treat to imagine.

thanks, m'dear.
and i'm the one sighing now.....

Originally posted by: coolgurl_2005

Armana
part 8 was truly a masterpiece,indead my favorite to date.i running out of words to describe your writing.from jai's busy work to pushkar and pia interesting entry into the story to the description of the house and to the arti just beautiful.truly loved it.im so eagerly waiting for your next part. 😊

thanks😊

Originally posted by: pkbains

Armana, this last part was simply beautiful!

Please continue soon!

thank you.
but it takes time to write. lots of time.

Just caught up on all the parts I had not read. Amazing work armana. Absoloutely love the story.

Originally posted by: swatinarang

armana,
great ff yaar i may have missed one or two parts, just a request that if possible then please post all the parts in one thread only and if possible please increase the font size somewhat as this one is too small with my resolution and i have to copy it to word to read it and then i just not able to post my comments. sorry for not posting my comments earlier, but i really love ur writing style and u r a fabulous writer.

swati

Swati,
I've been meaning to sit and organise the whole thing but just don't get around to it......someday i will. till then bear with me.
One very easy way of finding all teh parts is to do a Search for my name, all the parts will appear on the first two pages.
I had to reduce the font size in order to fit the part in on his page. Did not want to start a new thread again.
thank you for nonetheless posting.

Originally posted by: swathi

Hey Armana, read part 13 just now.You really have a way with words. I have an exam coming up. was tired of studying so thought of logging in to see what is happening and yours was the 1st message with the update. What can I say truly wonderful. Somehow this part did not really had anything much to say except that Push and Pia came back and we kind of came to know what happened and what made Saraswathi emerge. But then so many other things happened as well. Saraswathi got to know about her treasured painting. Bani coming to Jai's house. Thier no strings attached relationship. His keeping her updated that he will be late but at the same time not neglecting his business as well. Pushkar's curiosity of what is Bani's position in his new boss's life. Ranveer and nattu's amazement. and of course the lovely description of the house and so many other things. Sorry if I have been just rambling. End of story...it was truly a wonderful read.....blame it on my studying and the late night if this post was not coherent enough. But then I wanted to reply now as I was not sure when am gonna log in next.

and of course...already waiting for part 14

Swathi

thanks swathi, for taking the time despite your exams. good luck with them.

armana lovely part
simple loved it and i really loved the painting description i could really imagine the painting

👏
update soon and will wait for ur update
love u
satya

Originally posted by: simz99

Outstanding work Armana....indeed you are a master at using words to paint a hauntingly beautiful picture 👏 So Bani's past has intruded on her present, I hope that P-P don't ruin her chances of happiness with Jai. How apt that he was the one to buy her most precious painting. I am really looking forward to the next part to see were this tale takes us...the ride so far has been magical! 👏

thanks sweetie.🤗

Originally posted by: aashnaa5

JB scene was just perfect. Couldn't have imagined in any better way. Perfect timing. As far as P-P & Bani are concerned, I'd say it was poetic justice. I liked the way u evolved their angle. Bani showed so much of restraint and dignity with Pushkar. I simply adore her now.

Really appreciate your time and effort to give us this wonderful read.

Ciao

ps: I've got'Possession'. If I'm not online, you know the reason why.

i am a great fan of poetic justice.
you are welcome. all my time and effort feel more than adequately recompensed by all those of you who write in. thanks.
as for "Possession" sigh! i envy anyone who is about to embark on that truly magical read for the first time........
Enjoy.