FF:The Foreign Self PartX - XIII - Page 18

Originally posted by: kubare

Armana darling,

"Janat" describes it the best😃, and I mean it for everything, from the characters to the emotions protrayed, to the superb and fantastic discription of the whole Masion , the landscape and surroundings and with Jai in it, it definitley is one😉, and very eloquently done dear👏.

Your writing and your fanfic both are heavenly and its like being in Janat itself dear.😃 Its heaven for sure.

Aww...loved the way you brought back the two losers Pushkar😡 and Pia😡 back into the story. Can't wait to see their faces rubbed in and paying for the past. That would be poetic justice for sure.

Loved the whole scene between Nattu, Ranveer and Bani.😆😆😆 Poor guys and here I mean all of them were in shock. Very cutely and sweetly described.😆

And Jai seeing her with the Arti thali and seeing his mother in her was very poigent😳, his inner acceptance of Bani as more then just a fling, a good step in the right direction.😉😃

And the best "Welcome to Janat" 😃 *Sigh*😍. We are in one because of you dear.Thank you for providing us with one.

Till your next update dear.😃

Love

Krishna

krishna, sweetie pie, here's a BIG🤗for your wonderful, bold, purple posts which always put a smile on my face!
thanks.

Hi araman

i have to no words to desc have brilliant u write this ff... when i read i can visual each and every part of ur ff.. hat off to u 👏

Hi Armana,

I am again out of words to say anything...It is good to see Pushkar curious and I hope he suffers from a mild attack when he gets to know his dear boss is head over heels in love with Bani...that would teach him and his wife a lesson...

Her standing with a pooja thali and welcoming him was just so romantic...in a way it was symbolic like she is soon going to be the woman of the house...it's usually the woman of the house who welcomes her family and guests when they come to her house and here though Bani is the guest but she's the one who's welcoming Jai, Ranveer and Nachiket...so that I guess was very well thought over, very symbolic and of course undoubtedly romantic...

Now as usual please, please, please write the next chapter soon...just can't wait to read it...

Garf

Armana,
I read all the parts I had missed...sorry for being late...
Beautifully written... 👏 👏 👏
I loved the last scene of part XIII ... very symbolic...
For someone who was thinking or maybe just wanting to think it was possible that he would get bored of Bani... this sure was an apt way to meet...

The contrast between their houses reflect the contrast in their personalities and life...

Please update soon

Poo

Originally posted by: j&b84

Hi araman

i have to no words to desc have brilliant u write this ff... when i read i can visual each and every part of ur ff.. hat off to u 👏

Thank you.😊

Originally posted by: Garf

Hi Armana,

I am again out of words to say anything...It is good to see Pushkar curious and I hope he suffers from a mild attack when he gets to know his dear boss is head over heels in love with Bani...that would teach him and his wife a lesson...

Her standing with a pooja thali and welcoming him was just so romantic...in a way it was symbolic like she is soon going to be the woman of the house...it's usually the woman of the house who welcomes her family and guests when they come to her house and here though Bani is the guest but she's the one who's welcoming Jai, Ranveer and Nachiket...so that I guess was very well thought over, very symbolic and of course undoubtedly romantic...

Now as usual please, please, please write the next chapter soon...just can't wait to read it...

Garf

thanks garf.😊

Originally posted by: pooja.walia

Armana,
I read all the parts I had missed...sorry for being late...
Beautifully written... 👏 👏 👏
I loved the last scene of part XIII ... very symbolic...
For someone who was thinking or maybe just wanting to think it was possible that he would get bored of Bani... this sure was an apt way to meet...

The contrast between their houses reflect the contrast in their personalities and life...

Please update soon

Poo

welcome back. and thank you.😊

And once again, I have to start a new thread to post part xiv. Which will be up in a few minutes.
happy reading.

Love,
Armana

hey armana

am falling in love with ur ff..
i repeat myself, u write beautifully..
Chapter XIV was kewl..keep it up lady! 👏 👏