FF:The Foreign Self PartX - XIII - Page 14

Originally posted by: amiee

what a beautiful description of the mansion no no JANNAT and yes jannat it looked it felt like what you wrote came directly from your heart pls cont soon..........

thank you aimee.

Originally posted by: bugs_bunny

absolutly awesome update!! you write beautifully and love all your descritions.. the last line was apprpraite.. i ahd a huge grin on my face!!

so now that bani ahs met oushkar willshe meet pia? pleaseeee let her meet pia when jai is with her or without.. either way.. as long as pia is jealous and bani can put her n her right place!!!

btw.. does jai know that bani is saraswati???-- sorry if you've already mentioned it but i forgot!

and love nattu and ranveer aswell!!

continue soon

thank you bugs. No Jai does not as yet know that Bani=Sarawati!

Originally posted by: ovaltine

loved it armana. 😃 👏

thanks Ovaltine.

Originally posted by: mahimn

Best part till date and was definitely worth the loooooong wait. The romantic fool inside me , made me read this part twice before posting my comments and at the end needless to say I was left blushing like a certified idiot. Loved it and update soon.

Question though: Has Rano seen Pushky in Mt. Abu as Bani's fiancee. My guess is yes.Does Rano know about Pushky being an employee at WC, not under JW but just an employee or that he is in Mumbai. I know she has just shifted but does she has any inkling or has Bnai told her about Pushky receiving her at the airport on Jai's behalf?

More than anything I am eagerly awaiting for two scenes if you are thinking of including them-Massi's reaction on Bani's stay at Jannat and PP awkwardness on working as Bani's unofficial boyfriend's employee

"love me, love me, pretend that you love me...."
it's ok. I too am a romantic fool.
Hey, you were supposed to drop in when next in this part of the town?
Rano does obviously know Pushkar from his aborted engagement to Bani and then is marriage to Pia. It all happened in delhi, remember? as for now, well, wait......
the same answe for Maasi and P-P scenes too!

Originally posted by: divan

Nice part. Like the way all the characters are coming together into the scene. The pooja scenarioans wonder what the Nattu and Ranvir are thinking. 😲 😲

thank you.
as for Ranveer and Nattu: probablt trying to figure out if they can hit on he ror not!😛 hey, they are normal young men!

Originally posted by: kim12345

Great part armana. Have been a slient reader for some time.

Kiran

thank you for both, liking this part and breaking your silence.

Originally posted by: rooj-i

OMG Armmana that was beautiful!!!
truly amazing i loved it!!!
i have to say that this is def. not what i expected at all!!!!
You've portrayed their relationship so well...and their unspoken or un-realized love for each other is just amazing!!!
will be back to comment more.
rooj

thank you rooj.
it's always a pleasure to not give in to the expectations of the readers and surprise them!

Originally posted by: nikita28

Armana, you are truly amazing. The way in which you described Jai's house was beautiful.

I could picture Bani standing with the thali and Jai lost within her...... 😳.

Beautiful update, I can't wait for the next part.

Nikita

thank you nikita.

Originally posted by: punjabi#1

The last part has left me speechless, it was brilliant.


-Rimpy

thanks Rimpy.😃

Originally posted by: khushboo2006

Armana,
It's awesome...........the description of "Jannat" is beautifully penned....which left me speechless.......good job......keep it up and let me feel more and more.. 👏

thank you k, always a pleasure.