FF:The Foreign Self PartX - XIII - Page 12

Nice part. Like the way all the characters are coming together into the scene. The pooja scenarioans wonder what the Nattu and Ranvir are thinking. 😲 😲

OMG Armmana that was beautiful!!!
truly amazing i loved it!!!
i have to say that this is def. not what i expected at all!!!!
You've portrayed their relationship so well...and their unspoken or un-realized love for each other is just amazing!!!
will be back to comment more.
rooj

wonderfull Armana.. ! just amazing ... ! can't describe in words... Please continue soon.

Armana, you are truly amazing. The way in which you described Jai's house was beautiful.

I could picture Bani standing with the thali and Jai lost within her...... 😳.

Beautiful update, I can't wait for the next part.

Nikita

The last part has left me speechless, it was brilliant.


-Rimpy

Armana,
It's awesome...........the description of "Jannat" is beautifully penned....which left me speechless.......good job......keep it up and let me feel more and more.. 👏

Main phir se mar gayi!!!! Aur Jannat mein pahunch gayi...I'm running late for something but will be back with more comments, believe u me!!!
🤗
👏

bt

omg this is really A GREAT FF!!!! WHOOOHOOOO(: lol

😊 awwwwwwwwww so cute she gor busted comin out of the prayer room 😳
poor bani i bet she felt like d earth opening and swallowing her up 😳 😳

i tot jai wuld be mad at her but he wasn't 😆

tnx 4 d great update 😳
and dis story is 2 good 2 miss so plz ctn soon 😉

hugz........ 😛
damilola 😳

Hi Armana...I just started reading your FF and noticed quite a few times that you were requesting the silent readers to gather courage and post a comment....well i decided to do just that. You are a FABULOUS writer I must say. The details in your work are amazing, it takes you to the scene and it feels like you are there when all of it is happening 👏 👏. Great work!
ps. I may disappear but dont think I dont appreciate your work. The way you are taking the storyline and portraying the characters with great detail I think im hooked to it. Time permitting I will always try to leave a comment 😳