FF:The Foreign Self PartX - XIII

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Sheena

@Sheena_Row

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Posted: 18 years ago

#121

Armana,

That was a lovely update, loved the Jannat, the arti and the Bani's introduction to the boys.

Jai is already seeing his mother in Bani, asking her to put Tilak on his forehead is the first act of acceptance.

I like your descriptive updates, feels like I was there!

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piccola

@piccola

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Posted: 18 years ago

#122

Magic Unlimited ! You could make a fortune out of this Armana....coz ur stories just mesmerise ! They're too good to be just a story in IF ..u need to publish them. Why dont ya talk to Kekta and get this into a commercial venture - branding for KS, pocketmoney for you and a source of perpetual delight to all of us?

Thats me the despo talking thru my biz head...! Please dont get me wrong on it !

You're Wow,
Pic.

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india06

@india06

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Posted: 18 years ago

#123

There are pieces of writing where one just lets out a deep sigh & lean back against the chair in utter gratification. This part XIII, was one of those!!!

Thanks.

p.s.:The vine clad wall of myriad hues was a treat to imagine.

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preet

@preet_2010

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Posted: 18 years ago

#124

Armana
part 8 was truly a masterpiece,indead my favorite to date.i running out of words to describe your writing.from jai's busy work to pushkar and pia interesting entry into the story to the description of the house and to the arti just beautiful.truly loved it.im so eagerly waiting for your next part. 😊

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pkbains

@pkbains

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Posted: 18 years ago

#125

Armana, this last part was simply beautiful!

Please continue soon!

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swati

@swatinarang

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Posted: 18 years ago

#126

armana,
great ff yaar i may have missed one or two parts, just a request that if possible then please post all the parts in one thread only and if possible please increase the font size somewhat as this one is too small with my resolution and i have to copy it to word to read it and then i just not able to post my comments. sorry for not posting my comments earlier, but i really love ur writing style and u r a fabulous writer.

swati

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Somali Mitra

@smitra110

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+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

#127

Wonderful and haunting as always.
Somali

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simz99

@simz99

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Posted: 18 years ago

#128

Outstanding work Armana....indeed you are a master at using words to paint a hauntingly beautiful picture 👏 So Bani's past has intruded on her present, I hope that P-P don't ruin her chances of happiness with Jai. How apt that he was the one to buy her most precious painting. I am really looking forward to the next part to see were this tale takes us...the ride so far has been magical! 👏

Edited by simz99 - 18 years ago

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armana

@armana

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Posted: 18 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: MusicIsDivine!
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Wow! what a lovely part! Bani perfectly blends into "Jannat" as if she always belonged there. Again, the you have transported me into a beautiful world created only for the reader - I can imagine Bani in her new surroundings and I can feel Jai's happiness when he sees her in his familiar ground. I loved it. Thank you for writing it all up so patiently and taking such care to express your thoughts in such beautiful words.

thank you so much😊 and you are most welcome.😃

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armana

@armana

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Posted: 18 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: rivya
Hi armana...this was like OMG...amazing....

i cant help smiling today...first the awesome epi update...then Raani's update...and now u...

am falling short on words...to aaj sirf issise kaam chala lo...👏

Rivs

p.s. are you into gardening/ botany???just curious...