FF:The Foreign Self PartX - XIII - Page 11

Armana,
I find this FF simply superb! 👏 It takes me to a different world - I am totally in love with your Bani and Jai - they are so charismatic and endearing - and the farmhouse, the paintings, etc. give such an exotic and ethereal touch to the whole story. I keep checking for updates and if there aren't any, I go back and read the previous episodes again. What can I say ... I am lucky to have been exposed to your writing skills. 😊

Thank you all for your wonderful posts/ comments, which i do enjoy reading a lot even if i don't reply individually to all of them.Part XIII is now loaded onto the first page.

Happy reading.

As usual i look forward to your reactions/ comments/ critiques.

regards,
Armana

Thanks so much Armana!
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I am goin to read it right away!
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Wow! what a lovely part! Bani perfectly blends into "Jannat" as if she always belonged there. Again, the you have transported me into a beautiful world created only for the reader - I can imagine Bani in her new surroundings and I can feel Jai's happiness when he sees her in his familiar ground. I loved it. Thank you for writing it all up so patiently and taking such care to express your thoughts in such beautiful words.

Hi armana...this was like OMG...amazing....

i cant help smiling today...first the awesome epi update...then Raani's update...and now u...

am falling short on words...to aaj sirf issise kaam chala lo...👏

Rivs

p.s. are you into gardening/ botany???just curious...

what a beautiful description of the mansion no no JANNAT and yes jannat it looked it felt like what you wrote came directly from your heart pls cont soon..........

absolutly awesome update!! you write beautifully and love all your descritions.. the last line was apprpraite.. i ahd a huge grin on my face!!

so now that bani ahs met oushkar willshe meet pia? pleaseeee let her meet pia when jai is with her or without.. either way.. as long as pia is jealous and bani can put her n her right place!!!

btw.. does jai know that bani is saraswati???-- sorry if you've already mentioned it but i forgot!

and love nattu and ranveer aswell!!

continue soon

nice part.
Please continue soon!

Hey Armana, read part 13 just now.You really have a way with words. I have an exam coming up. was tired of studying so thought of logging in to see what is happening and yours was the 1st message with the update. What can I say truly wonderful. Somehow this part did not really had anything much to say except that Push and Pia came back and we kind of came to know what happened and what made Saraswathi emerge. But then so many other things happened as well. Saraswathi got to know about her treasured painting. Bani coming to Jai's house. Thier no strings attached relationship. His keeping her updated that he will be late but at the same time not neglecting his business as well. Pushkar's curiosity of what is Bani's position in his new boss's life. Ranveer and nattu's amazement. and of course the lovely description of the house and so many other things. Sorry if I have been just rambling. End of story...it was truly a wonderful read.....blame it on my studying and the late night if this post was not coherent enough. But then I wanted to reply now as I was not sure when am gonna log in next.

and of course...already waiting for part 14

Swathi

Best part till date and was definitely worth the loooooong wait. The romantic fool inside me , made me read this part twice before posting my comments and at the end needless to say I was left blushing like a certified idiot. Loved it and update soon.

Question though: Has Rano seen Pushky in Mt. Abu as Bani's fiancee. My guess is yes.Does Rano know about Pushky being an employee at WC, not under JW but just an employee or that he is in Mumbai. I know she has just shifted but does she has any inkling or has Bnai told her about Pushky receiving her at the airport on Jai's behalf?

More than anything I am eagerly awaiting for two scenes if you are thinking of including them-Massi's reaction on Bani's stay at Jannat and PP awkwardness on working as Bani's unofficial boyfriend's employee