FF: Redeeming Pia, part 5, Page 8 - Page 6

Originally posted by: punjabi#1

sorry, I totally forgot about this fanfic. I have finals going on and haven't really had time to sit down and write the next part. I only have one more final left, which is tomorrow. After that I well be updating atleast once a day agian. I well try to do a update tonight but no promises.
-Rimpy

dont worry about i t... take you time.. good luck for your finals!

Me first!!!!!!!!

Rimpy you better duck, cause there is belans comming your way hun!

*Throws belan* that was for saying that you'd update everyday but for not doing so.

*Throws belan* that was for such a short part, despite the fact that it was sweet.

Hmm. That was nice part. I liked Pia's entry. Her love towards Bani and especially the end, when she tells Prachi not to leave Bani. Hope Prachi goes back and of couse Jai and Bani will accept her, its in their nature.

I can imagine a girl on her bed, floped on her stomach reading a diary, and then writing in her own before she turns on her back and stares at the ceiling.

I want the next part soon and I want it long.

Sobia

Originally posted by: sobia.k

Me first!!!!!!!! I am glad to see that you beat the mad rush to comment first.😉

Rimpy you better duck, cause there is belans comming your way hun! what did I do?

*Throws belan**ducks* HaHa! you missed!! that was for saying that you'd update everyday but for not doing so. Finals, now that they are over I well update regularly again.

*Throws belan* *didn't see it coming and is now rubbing her head* that hurts Sobia!! I am going to keep this belans to use on you.that was for such a short part, despite the fact that it was sweet. It was sweet and about Pia those two don't go together, I well have to start making them sour. If it was sweet, then why did I get a belan?

Hmm. That was nice part. I liked Pia's entry. Her love towards Bani and especially the end, when she tells Prachi not to leave Bani. Hope Prachi goes back and of couse Jai and Bani will accept her, its in their nature. Its Jai and Bani's nature but what about rest of the family, well they accept her back after everything????

I can imagine a girl on her bed, floped on her stomach reading a diary, and then writing in her own before she turns on her back and stares at the ceiling. I am glad you can imagine it because I want it to seem real, like it could actually happen.

I want the next part soon and I want it long.

Sobia

Rimpy

Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

Hey Rimpy,

I read all the five parts, just want to congratulate on your original fan fiction, it is so different and it gave me goosebumps just imagining a teenager talking to the diary and reading about her mother's shortcomings and her lifestory. I am glad you like it. I hope I can live up to your exceptions and keep giving you goosebumps.

IT was beautifully written, very emotional and touching, I really loved it! You are awesome, sweetheart- keep it up! 👏 beautiful written? thanks but I don't think it is nowhere as good as yours. I need years more of practice to write like you. I also need to do my research like you. I don't write a dairy and I don't know what kind of things people write in them and I should really learn more about that.

On a lighter vein,
I am not sure if this is appropriate place to put a Pia Joke or not (Since you are trying to redeem Pia) - I will take a chance any way!! 😉 😉

A newly wed Pia was being welcomed at the Pushkar's home in a traditional manner. She was asked to give a little speech. She addressed as follows:

"My dear family members, I thank you for welcoming me in my new home and family", she said "Firstly, with my presence I would not want to create any inconveniences by my being here. I mean that I don't want you
all to change your way of life, your routine."

"What do you mean my child?" asked the Puskar's mom.

What I mean mom is:

Those who used to wash dishes must carry on washing them.

Those who used to do the laundry must carry on doing it.

Those who cooked shouldn't stop on my account.

Those who used to clean should clean.


As for me, I am here just to control your son!

This is called Pia Pia Pia Pia from Kasamh Se!!!

I loved the joke, I hope you remind me of that joke when I get married years from now because I would love to say all that to my future in-laws.

Originally posted by: ridhijai

Great part.
loved it
short part...but will do for now.
plz cont. soon.
👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: rivya

rimpy...u updated...yay...
hmm...so now prachi wants to go back...hmmm...interesting....I wonder what the reaction will be from JB...

I want to know about ONS...soon...tell me nah...
Rivs