FF: Redeeming Pia, part 5, Page 8 - Page 3

nice part hun 👏 👏 But I don't agree with Prachi on this one...moving out of her house was a pretty big step. Also, if Pushkar let her in, does this mean he knows he's the father?!

hmmm..i read these two prts and the storyline which u created, i think is good and different form others ff and prachi, well she's only 16 so i think she won't understand until pia will make her understand the whole matter and i think she shouldn't take decitions before knowing the true

really good and well writed ff and i liked very much the idea of starting this ff with the daughter mother's letters

😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

minu 😊

Originally posted by: inavars

nice part hun 👏 👏 But I don't agree with Prachi on this one...moving out of her house was a pretty big step. Also, if Pushkar let her in, does this mean he knows he's the father?!

Prachi thinks that Pushkar is her dad because Pia was married to him. She doesn't know much about Pia yet because she didn't really know anything about Pia till she got the diary. I think Tonights update well explain how she moved in with pushkar and what not. Yesterday, she was still to upset to really explain anything. She should be more clam and think more clearly today.

As for Pushkar knowing he is the dad or for that matter anybody knowing who is the real dad, just wait and watch.

-Rimpy

So she just walks up to Pushkar and tells him she will stay with him? and he lets her?

Originally posted by: abhita

So she just walks up to Pushkar and tells him she will stay with him? and he lets her?

like I said in a earlier post, Prachi is confused and hurt. She is not able to tell the whole story of how is moved in with Pushkar, not even to her dairy. I think she should be more calm tonight and be explain how she ended up at Pushkar's and excatly what lead her there and be able to do all that without breaking down.

I promise that tonights update well answer all the questions that you have about Prachi and why she is at Pushkars.

-Rimpy

Originally posted by: siumi

hmmm..i read these two prts and the storyline which u created, i think is good and different form others ff and prachi, well she's only 16 so i think she won't understand until pia will make her understand the whole matter and i think she shouldn't take decitions before knowing the true Thats exactly how Prachi and I feel. We don't think she is capable of making any decisions until she knows the whole story. And for her to know the whole story she had to get out of the Walia mansion because Pia is not welcomed there. Prachi can't stay there and not make a biased decsions. She doesn't hate anybody, she is just angery, hurt and confused. Luckily for her time heals all wounds.

really good and well writed ff and i liked very much the idea of starting this ff with the daughter mother's letters I liked the idea to.😉

😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 I think you guys the readers deserve all the applause because it can be harder for a reader to read a piece like redeeming Pia. I am glad to see there are so many open minded people on the forum that want to even hear evil Pia out.

minu 😊

-Rimpy

Originally posted by: punjabi#1

-Rimpy

thx and for pia i think she's just trying to be herself and what she wants its her decition and i'm not against her... everyone has right to do what want but under a limit and i liked the fact that there's no one villan or evil and i beleive that nobody is bad but the circumtances made them hard and ...

and i feel very good this ff and i hope prachi will understand and make a mature decition about all this...

Yaar please PM me when you update?
Fab part, Prachi living with Pushkar, I want to see some father-daughter bonding! I like Pia's dairy it lets you look into her life, something that not many FFs do, for once I don't feel angered at Pia. I am so happy that you are an open-minded person. And Rimpy yaar you're an amazing writer, one more time you say that you can't write good, I'm gonna throw something at you. Continue soon okay?!

Sobia

To my readers thanks! You know that I don't have many readers but I am glad for that. I might not have many readers but all my readers are involved with the story and question my writing. I rather have a few readers that are like that, instead of a hundred readers that write 'good job'. Thanks!!!


-Rimpy

Rimy
I read the two parts, first i hesitant because it was about Pia, but then how you outlined your story. And how you started with Dear Diary, with Prachi's intro and how Pia wrote the entry. It touched me and i got glued in reading Pia's point of view and her goals.
Prachi's anger is understandable, how she got hurt and betrayed by the two people who she felt were her really people. Halia Rano is taking Pia's anger on Prachi, she can't still forget what her sister did but Bani accepted Prachi.
From reading part2 Prachi seems very stubborn, she moved in with her dad, i hope we get to see some of PP bonding as father and daughter.
Did Pushkar move on with his life after Pia left him? Will Prachi here Pushkars point of view about Pia? Why he fell in love with her etc😕
Please write soon