FF:The Foreign Self. Part V-D to VIII - Page 2

Armana,

Really loved the update, Jai drowning himself in Alcohol and Bani taking care of him as usual. I wonder what reaction he would have when he finds out they are in the same bed!!

Awesome!!

Hmmmm......seems B has bitten off more than she can chew....or not??!! These two certainly share some explosive history that emboldened B thus.

JW at his biting,scathing best & B at her counterpoising best.

Stylish narration , all of it. Riveting,this part..thanks!!!

Armana
just fabalous.beautifully written
I totally adore this JW,loved the way he tells Roshni off.
This Bani rocks,she just wonderful.love how she took control of the sitution.
Cant wait to see jai reaction in the morning.looking forward to the next part. 😊

Armana,

Words fail me to describe what a beautiful and wonderful writer you really are👏.

Loved the whole Jai confrontation with Roshni 😃and Bani coming to his rescue by remembering where he would really be found. 😉😛😆 Naturally she would know now, wouldn't she with her and him sharing so much.😳😛😆

Taking him first to the Hotel and then to her house.😉😛😆She made the right decision and loved her for it. 😃Saved him from Roshni thats for sure.😆

Aww...love this Jai and Bani a lot😃. She really is superb and the Gaurdian Angle dialogue, again something to do from the past that they share. When? Oh! when? will you reveal that to us dear.😆

Aww...so she comes back home and sleeps next to him on the bed.😆

Now I really cant wait to see or more like read Jais reaction early in the morning if he wakes up first. It definitley will be a treat thats for sure.😆

Till your next update dear, and hope this ones fast.😃

Love

Krishna

Hey Armana
Whoa…Miss Dixit sure can be very bold and decisive when it comes to staking a claim on her man 😉 Loved how she literally kidnapped the drunken soul and took him home…no wait took him to her bed 😳 😳 Whew…what's gonna happen when he wakes up….mmmm…can't wait to see whether his anger turns into a heated passion that blows then away? 😉
On a separate note…I always wondered about the elementary my dear Watson line as well…I've read all the Holmes books and never found it either! 😆 😆
Waiting eagerly to see what happens next
Cheers
Sims

Originally posted by: simz99

Hey Armana
Whoa…Miss Dixit sure can be very bold and decisive when it comes to staking a claim on her man 😉 Loved how she literally kidnapped the drunken soul and took him home…no wait took him to her bed 😳 😳 Whew…what's gonna happen when he wakes up….mmmm…can't wait to see whether his anger turns into a heated passion that blows then away? 😉
On a separate note…I always wondered about the elementary my dear Watson line as well…I've read all the Holmes books and never found it either! 😆 😆
Waiting eagerly to see what happens next
Cheers
Sims

You said it Simi. I never found it in any of the Sherlock Holmes' book either.

And yes, Bani does know a way to stake claim on her man and she is doing it in style over here.

Wow, I love her too but THIS JW is MINE. 😳

Originally posted by: sangitadas

You said it Simi. I never found it in any of the Sherlock Holmes' book either.

And yes, Bani does know a way to stake claim on her man and she is doing it in style over here.

Wow, I love her too but THIS JW is MINE. 😳

Is that a threath Sangi?... cause I'm in if thats the case.... 😳

My baby is different and just like I wanted her to be... 😉

Armaana I dont have enough words for you... for now....but will come up with my full comment update another time... 👏 👏 👏

Till than pleaz do caryy on ASAP...

Jojo

Why the same bed Armana. There's always the couch for the prude. I've been a silent reader if ur FF and needless to say, I love it. Had to break my silence cause I couldn't fathom her intentions clearly. Her actions are wide open to interpretations. Can't pass any judgments on ur Bani, without knowing her (dark?) past.

Not much of a chat person. Always look forward to your updates. I like your work.

Aashu

Originally posted by: sangitadas

Now what do I say about this part?

Brilliant as usual and scintillating. May I borrow that word please?

Its lovely Armana, if I could have my way I would have you writing a part every day and posting it for us.

Will threats work with you?

I so love this Jai and Bani, they are perfect for each other, even in their bitchiness.

But I Love this JW. 😳

i borrowing this entire comments and adding few of mine.

I love how Bani is bold and took charge of the situation.

some how i have feeling that Bani Knows Jai from before.......

Please continue soon.

(Sham, Daam, Dand, Bhed (any which way it works))Please update soon

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pooja

Guys, part VI has been waiting to be updated since yesterday but unfortunately no internet.

So I am updating first. I will reply to all your wonderful comments later.
Have a good time reading.

Armana