FF:The Foreign Self. Part V-D to VIII - Page 3

Excellent Armana! You write to give satisfaction and then leave us with a teaser...!

Love the flow of the writing....👏

Enthralled Pic.

Excellent parts and wow all the details in the 2nd part are just amazing, I am so addicted to you ff's, they are just simply superb.

Thank you

Hey Armaana...
Just read part 6...
absolutely Mind-blowing... captivating... intriguing... descriptive... so much so that I can almost see the house... the neem tree... and feel the coolness of the tree in a summer... and enjoy it while sitting on the stone platform... :-D

too good honey... and the description of the house... the house sounds like something that I would want for myself...

I was about to get my belan out... but then saw your disclaimer and burst out laughing...
:-D

our amazing writer possesses a brilliant sense of humor as well huh!??!!

Too good... now looking forward to the next part with an interest level that is about to touch the moon! Come on hon... we're waiting!

EXCELLENT PART 👏

u wrte so brilliantly.. it's amazing.

i iloved the way you described bani's house... i wanna live there!!! 😆 😆

AND 🥳 🥳 🥳 bugs bunny pictures 😛 he's my fav hence the id! 😆

looking forward to the confrontation. and roshni 😡 .. continue soon.. 😊

hey armana just read the part6 wonderful the way u explained the house the settings the painting it makes it so lively for a moment i thought i was right in that house in those surroundings my mom said this to me once when i was writing a story for my essay competition that a good writer will make a story out of a mere idea but the best writer will explain the idea and make classic story out of it thats all it took for me to win the competition a story written from the depth of my heart and you are doing the same thing writing from your heart which makes us reader glued to reading it and wanting more i hope i did not bore you with my speech

armana...read part 6...loved the part...with the descriptions...
subtle hints of who Bani is...and Jai finding commonalities in small things...
Ofcourse I hope he is not going to scream at her...
The word angle confuses me...but I guess there is a reason u are not bringing out the past...
waiting for the next one...

i read it once
twice
three times
four
five
reading again
just trying to digest how you can bring the entire house with interiors in front of my eyes so beutifully. that neem pad.
those two gardners
paiting on wall behind the head board

half lit candle....................
amezing......................
well let me go back and read it again
pooja

Armana, Great part!! Loved the garden, house, paintings..It was almost like I was seeing it...You are an awesome writer! :-)

I am dying to know what's the story behind the memories that are having a hard time coming out for JW....

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Okie Armana, will not throw anything at you as long as you promise to keep providing us with such updates, and ofcourse a JB confrontation soon!😉

I loved the silent comfort between JB which caused him to go back to sleep almost immediately after placing his arm around her.......maybe I'm reading it all wrong and it was actually fatigue which caused him to do that, though I found it sweet all the same!

The description was totally something else!👏

I'll be honest with you; I didn't understand everything..........but what I did, formed a beautiful picture in my mind!

You must have had some basis for that house and it's paintings as they are so clearly defined, like you were looking at everything whilst typing it up!

I hope Jai's message to Roshni is precise and clear :"Get Lost!"........that would make my day!😆

The JB confrontation is also much awaited!!😳

Hi Armana,
Part - 6 is amazing, mindblowing especially the descriptions..I don't have word to describe it.......thanks a lot.....your's a great writer no doubt 😃
👏 👏 👏
please update soon........