FF:The Foreign Self. Part V-D to VIII - Page 14

Hey Armana,

How are you doing? Can't get over the cow skin... 😉

Anyways as usual loved this chapter too...what else can I say after all you write sooo well...

Garf

Well Armana, all I can say is WOW!!!

As usual I am bereft of words 😆 but I think I have decoded something. Will Try to formulate somethign later.

BTW, when are you updating next? 😃

Hi,

when is Bani going to pick her car up.

pooja

Armana!
I just caught up with all 8 parts and i have to say: superb!!!!
I really love it!!!
it's all detailed and well developed story...though i was confused at some places but then i read it twice and i understood 😳 😆 😆
plus it gave me a chance to read it again! 😆 😆
also i read it during my Com. class and well it took my ming off of listening to my professor, who was giving me daggers since i was not paying attention, according to him, but what does he know i can multi-task 😆 😆 😆
anyways i love your FF and hopefully you'll continue your next part again!!!
Please update soon
Rooj

BTW i figured it out that Bani was an artist when you were describing her house 😆

amazing 👏

poor bani.. really feel bad for her. so will they meet when she goes to pick her car up? 😳

loved the confrontation btw.. all sweetly sarcastic at first.. 😆

continue soon

Firstly - NABS, tu ther abhi, i am coming after you with a belan!! 😆


Now for the review...

Last 2 parts armana, simply amazing!!! I am completely unsurprised at the J-R secret, is Roshni ever anything but a slimy witch-like character?! 🤢

By the way, again you had me on the floor imagining an antsy JW as Mrs Bennett and a dry Bani as Mr Bennett!! I wonder how he didn't throttle her when she said that line?!! 🤣 🤣 🤣

I am glad I read the 2 parts together, it means I didnt have to wait for a J-B confrontation / union!! 😛 😉

Having said that, it wasn't really much of a union was it...?! "You promised... just go... please"!! Kya yaar, rulaana ka iraada hai?!! 😭 😭 😭

Such a poignantly written piece... I really felt heartbroken for both of them! Has Roshni really changed him this much, that now he is ready to emotionally crucify his Angel too?! 😭


Update soon Dickens dearest... and send JW back to wipe his Angel's tears as soon as possible! 😭 👏 😊

Armana darling what can I really say except it was such a fantastic and awesome part😃😳😛. Loved it.👏

Loved the way you used the Pride and Prejudice dialouge by Bani and the whole scene was so beautifully witten dear.😆

Our Jai what can one say about him, but what we already know so well, he is a duffer of the highest order.😆 He still hasn't put 2 and 2 together and wth so many clues aroiund him, especaially the painting over her bed.😉😆

He hasn't yet realized that Bani is his angel 😳of 7 years ago and that she is the painter Sarswati😉, or he was the one and only person to ever make love to her, she was his first virgin😳 (or he was her first and one and only love), thus his rule.😆

Cant wait for the next part from you soon.😃 And it looks like what I think about their first meeting is proving true. Still waiting for the whole revelation from you to say if I was right.😆

Love

Krishna

Thank you so much for all your wonderful comments.
I enjoyed reading each one of them.
Once again, i have opted to write and update the next part instead of replying.
Hope you're ok with that!

Part IX is on a new thread.
Happy reading.
Looking forward to your comments and reactions.

love,
Armana