Originally posted by: armana
Dear Sheena,
the wonderful part about missing a part is that you get to read two in one go!
Hey Armana,
True, very true...😉😉😉
Loved 17- especially the interaction between Rano-Ranveer. I like the way you have depicted tehir relationship. It's absorbing and counterpoints very nicely with the JB story.
I have to tell you that this is where I got into trouble with not one but two readers this week, they sent me a PM saying that they want the story to revolve around JB, almost threatening to stop reading the FF (I am over it now...😕😕😕) I just remembered that I like the R&R stuff and so did many other readers, in the end the writer has to be true on his/herself - so I am just going to write what my heart is telling me to write, profound statement for a light hearted gal!
even Pia, the oddball between the two sisters comes across as interesting if only as the foil to highlight the better natures of Rano anf Bani.
She is an oddball, but every family has one, and I do think the canvas looks pretty dull if it doesn't have a variety of colors on it.
And part 18 is trully delightful and very interesting.
I love Bani's tentative acceptance of Jai's desire for her. her shyness, her lack of experince and her burgeoning awareness of the physicality of love are coming through beautifully.
One of the things about this serial that attracted me was Bani's innocence and inner passion that comes out because of Jai! So I am trying to invoke those feelings in her character.
But what i loved the most was the fact that Jai himself told her about the death of her mother. I wish KS had done this too!
Yes, Jai is pretty straight forward - unfortunately in KS he is so scared of losing her, he omits telling her the biggest secrets of his life.
As usual your attention to background and detail, and teh wonderful way you've made them an integral part of teh story line makes it a pleasure to read.
Thank you dear, as you know, I am one of your biggest admirer on the forum, so coming from you, it's a pleasure!
👏 👏 👏
regards,
Armana
Arjun
